Become the God of Wealth in a Hundred Years

. . . . . . . There is no structure The character description is not good, the first sentence at the beginning changes too quickly The information jumps too much Explain the background, It feels like you have no logic The timing is not explained clearly. I just read one page, I'm not good at vocabulary, so read more books Remember to give me your recommendation vote

There are huge stylistic problems: insufficient character descriptions, crude environment descriptions, off-kilter characters, and insufficient dialogue descriptions. There are many errors in psychological description, and there are big problems with symbol citation.