Never Look Back

You three asked one person to do it?

How should I put it? It's a bit disgusting and I really can't stand it anymore.

From the moment the girl kills her sister, I can't understand it at all. I can describe it in a simple sentence and it takes several chapters. It's so confusing that it's really hard to understand. I'm only three years old. I killed the abbot. Why don't I fly? I'm only three years old. How else can I write about it later? I destroyed the sect at the age of four, killed the emperor at the age of five, and then there's nothing more.

Hahahaha, to be honest, I bet that this could be a book written by a newbie who just started in the industry? ? ?

The author should consider rewriting the plot from chapters 30 to 55. After the heroine came out, the protagonist started to lose his wits. It was too poisonous. This book is not broken at the root, but the development is skewed. I have seen some authors' books that are rotten at the root, but they still have the courage to delete them all and rewrite them. This book is not broken at the root. It just needs to be corrected. The beginning of this book is so good, I think it should not be rotten.

This book started high and went low 1 This part should be avoided because of the emotional scenes. When I saw that part, it was very poisonous 2 In fact, this kind of traveling into another world is not impossible to enter the body, but the attention is paid. To be honest, the realistic plot is average and even poisonous. It's also easy to trip up. 3 It doesn't matter if you are close to martial arts, but are you sure the logic and visibility of your second avatar's affairs are very high? 4 The system is too complicated. Both in terms of skills and grading, they are very clueless. 5 Let's tentatively decide on an NPC. Although I don't say he has a high IQ, he is indeed mentally retarded, and your foreshadowing is too shallow. Take the one from Blood Tower, for example. What's the point of deliberately fighting with Nangong for his body? Show off your presence? This is something I can't understand. There are also advantages, old themes and new twists. It's quite interesting to grow up from a child, but as I said in the comment section, no matter how good the writing is in the front, there will be more in the back.

Author, you are completely out of your mind. Why are you shaking it out now that it is so huge? Now the whole line is completely messy, move forward step by step, it is recommended to adjust it, whether it is the next life or this life, the speed is too fast

The author's writing style cannot be said to be at the level of a master, but the plot and story design are really hard to describe! Some of it may be inexplicable foreshadowing, and the ages of the characters and the plot are inconsistent. If the author can design the outline well and focus on writing a character in an independent world, it will be a good martial arts film. But this is lowered to a lower level, and the realistic part has no sense of substitution. The fantasy martial arts part is too young and has too much ability. I can only look forward to your next masterpiece! What a pity this writing style

They were going around and around and people were stunned. A genius appeared and a group of people grabbed it. After the robbery, they left it alone. Then another genius appeared and a group of people started fighting again.

To be honest, it looks okay from the front, but the further you get to the back, the more outrageous it becomes and I can't understand it.

The creativity is okay, the writing is quite good, the story is a bit messy, and the plot design is average. The biggest problem lies in the main plot. I think the author hasn't figured out what kind of story this is. It's not comfortable to watch and it's very confusing when I take it in.

Don't let your mother cause trouble. This 18-year-old can be the hero's daughter. Can the hero do this?

After about 30 chapters, it's very poisonous. The early rhythm is very good, but then there is a brainless heroine. This heroine is very abrupt! It is different from the stable male protagonist created by the previous author. You know, and it is this female protagonist who forcibly lowers her IQ. It is very poisonous! Alas, I don't know where to start, so I gave it up. I thought it was a magical book, but I read it immediately. I originally thought of picking up a few pages, including the ones written in front of me, but I couldn't do it anymore.

Before Chapter 50, it felt like a masterpiece, but after Chapter 50 got the heroine, it suddenly became awkward. I just don't know if the author of this plot is screening readers?

It's a messy look at the back. Where is it written well?

In fact, I think that we should cooperate with the country and not be too passive. At the very least, we should have a good attitude. We can get protection and help in the early stage. When we become stronger in the later stage, there will be no restrictions and we can talk about other things. At this stage, it is better to take care of things.

I can't stand it when I see that internal strength can be developed in reality. Internal strength can be developed in reality, and it's so simple. Why didn't it exist at all in the past thousands of years?

It's a bit lame, he is so powerful in reality and still has to be a dog for the emperor. There's nothing you can do on the plane. Don't go on a killing spree when you land. Kill the first person you see first, so they know the price of threatening the protagonist. What kind of bullshit emperor is this? Who would want to be a dog to him?

You are the one who chose the female lead, why not just let the male lead be a man in his twenties?

Entering the palace? Why isn't it updated?

The writing is good, but the plot in "Afterlife" is a bit illogical. If a genius appears, he must be hunted down. How does the sect develop? How long can the losers keep the sect? There are also those who rob geniuses. If you say that they rob geniuses in their infancy, it is understandable, but in the case of a prodigy in the article who was robbed until his death, it is very illogical. A prodigy can tell the difference between good and bad at the age of three, right? If the child prodigy had not been killed and had grown up, wouldn't the sect that had taken him away from him be destroyed? The brains of people who practice martial arts cannot be made of stone, let alone understanding. It only applies to understanding martial arts secrets and has nothing to do with IQ and EQ. Finally, since this book is based on the eunuch style, it shouldn't describe too many erotic plots. It will not be readable and will make both LSPs and serious people uncomfortable.