I Turned Weird Recovery into an Online Game

It's so embarrassing. The main character, who is half a dick but not a dick, says he is a homebody and at the same time talks about having various part-time jobs. The writing just feels awkward and wrong.

The writing is good, the world view and imagination are okay, innovative, the plot is a bit dull, but it can be read. The only awkward point is that the heroic spirit is always called by its name. It was good to read the book, but when I saw Hua Mulan, I suddenly acted out. Didn't the woman in front have a name? After the introduction of her heroic spirit as Hua Mulan, this woman was just like her original name. It's really not good for you. At least put it in quotation marks. I really wanted to read it, but it turns out that the whole chapter of Hua Mulan is really not an ordinary embarrassment. I won't mention other characters. You should use code names. You don't use some characters. If you can't, just put quotation marks. The whole book looks okay. This name is really a drama. If you change it, believe me, the results will be better.

I don't know what's wrong with the novels nowadays. I don't know how to write without women. Two women appear in the fourth chapter. When they come out, they are rich or beautiful. In this information age, have you never seen beautiful women? You still need Yy

To be honest, for novels like Spiritual Resurrection and Weird Resurrection, it would be better to make the plot and various rules more serious. Personally, I feel the funny style is weird. It was originally a matter full of dangers and unknowns, but it was written into a funny story. It's weird.

In order to suppress the protagonist from upgrading too quickly, we deliberately set up a setting where the dungeon can only be refreshed once a day. Then what? And the villain's level is always set higher than that of the protagonist. Are you sick? If you like to abuse people so much, then what's the point of making such a big move? How many readers do you think would be happy to use an online game template to play level suppression and gain experience points?

Did the author originally write about cities? It's written like an urban B-novel.

Stop strengthening the villains. Don't rely on the protagonist to take the lead. The protagonist's character is just a salty fish. He doesn't want to take responsibility, doesn't want to take risks, etc... I really don't want to add any strength to the country anymore. I feel like they are just a loser. They have been plotted against each other until now and I haven't seen a ghost slave being killed. There is also a protagonist who can clearly hide his identity but keeps showing up arrogantly. Are you really not afraid that your family will be implicated? Since the protagonist is not an orphan, is he really not afraid that the villain will kill his family? Not to mention that the official sent people to protect them, they were almost suppressed, so how could there be any manpower to protect them, and the protagonist did not join the official... The plug-in copy has a cooling time of once a day, which is okay, but the higher the level, the longer the cooling time. How to level up?

At first glance, this desperate young man looked like a bad boy. His writing was brainless, half-hearted, and fucking embarrassing. I felt nauseated after reading it. He was so poisoned that he ran away.

Does the protagonist like to stick his face in the grass so much? Each time, he sneaked into the enemy's lair without any detection, and then the protagonist's sixth sense alerted him to a sneak attack, and he activated his skills to block it. Only then did the protagonist realize that he had been discovered and ambushed by the enemy. Is this because the protagonist has a short memory? Or are you, the author, unable to write without this routine? The Ring of the Unjust Ghost has many high-quality and low-priced detection methods, but it just arranged for the protagonist to sell it. Why don't you let the protagonist take off the training ring and replace it with the ring of the unjust ghost before each exploration? Wouldn't it be enough to switch back when the fight starts?

Why does the protagonist look more and more like a system dog? Every time there is an important plot event, create a task to lead the dog. For example, if you join the Hangxiu Society, you were about to leave, but the system pulled the leash and the protagonist joined. Join directly. You have to create a mission and make it look like a dog.

This author should really study hard. In the Three Kingdoms, Lu Bu was the first one and Ma Chao was the second one. Ma Chao can only go to B? And Li Bai is already a b. Where is the Sword Master Pei Min, and where is Li Jing? What about Guo Ziyi, An Lushan, Li Longji, and Erfeng? If we consider literary theory, what about Yan Zhenqing, Du Fu, Wang Bo, Han Yu, Li He, and Wang Wei? Your system is too chaotic. When you establish the system, you should have an outline and strength stratification, and then list the top figures in various systems. What you see now is a chaotic system. For example, in a historical series, do you base it on history or romance? Since ancient times, kings have not surpassed generals but Li. In terms of history, how do you rank these two? In terms of romance, Li Yuanba is the first person in romance that you can't get around. And why is the Fengdu System Bull Head Horse Noodles lower than Black and White Wuchang? They are all top ten handsome men. If the division of labor is different, you will be noble, right? Mulan can also b? He is just a young general of the Northern Wei Dynasty. Where do you put the general Hu Hao, Qin Liangyu, and the eldest princess? Where would you put Mu Guiying and Taijun She in the novel? Li Bai's system of poetry and Taoism is definitely S-level, his essays and Taoism (poems, lyrics, songs, and poems) system is definitely A-level, his theory of the Tang Dynasty system is at most C-level, and his discussion of Confucianism and Taoism is even less than D-level. The seventy-two sages of Confucius, Mencius, Dong, Yang, Zhu, and Wang are the Confucian people who came from s to c. So the combat power system looks very embarrassing. And Yue Fei only has A? Regardless of historical facts or legends, Prince Yue was the first person in the Song Dynasty and one of the top 20 people in the five thousand years of history. Only a?

By the way, do any universities really judge their school beauties? Our school doesn't have

Sigh😔The front is okay! Why is the VIP chapter so ugly? A lot of people were chatting and watching helplessly as Boos transformed, and the protagonist was just watching the show, whining! It's useless to need so many equipment skills!

There are too many descriptions of the supporting characters, and the protagonist is not outstanding enough. You are too high-leveled, and it looks like a running account. All the dungeons are done by mistake.

Wow, I've read a few chapters, and the writing is really bad. There's no environmental rendering at all, no emotion at all, it's all dry narrative.

It's awkward, and it's so contradictory. Since mosquitoes and flies all have experience gold coins and the upgrades don't change, then wouldn't it be enough to just go to a breeding farm and upgrade? If you take a leave and go to the old forest in the south and put up a lamp, wouldn't you get as much experience as you want?

Ever since I read Mysterious Resurrection, I feel like I feel silly reading supernatural novels now. . . Obviously I thought it was okay to come here before

After reading more than two hundred chapters, I discovered that this book is written by a female protagonist, and the protagonist is Chen Lingyun. He does not accept refutation. The so-called male protagonist Yu Xiao is the biggest licker. He will give the heroine any good things he finds.

It's obviously weird, but the result is neither weird nor weird.

I would like to give the author a suggestion. Please refine the nice words in the comment area. Most people only read the few posts displayed outside. People may leave those posts if they are not good. You can avoid fake Shennong from deceiving others by adding more objective words of praise.

This book is already eunuch. Don't look forward to it. It has not been updated for so long. If the author updates it again, there will definitely be no follow-up after a few more chapters because the author has no motivation to write. Ninety-nine percent of eunuchs are like this at the beginning.

The book is too white, but there are a few common elements, please pay attention next time. It's all poisonous, including all the white stuff, it's unfinished, the attribute values ​​are too much and the values ​​are inflated, there's a happy ending, the protagonist lacks everything, so what's the motivation for exploration? None of the protagonist's friends died, or the death was purely plot killing and there was no value in dying for the sake of death.