I Just Want to Fall in Love Normally

The writing is good. I have collected the two books.

Let's talk about a few minor issues: ① The paragraphing is too trivial. Half a sentence can't be separated into paragraphs, which makes it very uncomfortable to read. ②Some wordings feel "contrived" and "middle-class", such as the title "Youth Boy", "Youth Boy", "Youth Boy"... There is a sense of violation when calling yourself my own name. I feel that the writing and story are good, but the story is not very ups and downs, and there is no plot conflict. In addition, I feel that the writing style is more suitable to be placed in a female youth channel, rather than a male light novel, or it can be placed in daily love, and it is really not related to the original fantasy channel...

First, write it down to 100,000 words and have a look. If you refuse to sign it then, just hand in the semi-finished product (no one will read it anyway).

{"NickName":"","UserId":227000226}@junyang46.34,753.3 🌹 It can be seen that the writing is very hard, (~￣▽￣)🙏, it looks very good.

{"NickName":"","UserId":227000226}@junyang46.34,753.3 🌹 It can be seen that the writing is very hard, (~￣▽￣)🙏, it looks very good.

{"NickName":"Hang a big lantern on the tree","UserId":227000226} Use 70.50.79.001 As the cover~~~A good face can attract more readers.

You can invest and vote by visiting "Wanmenjie"! Will reply if necessary!

Hey, secretly🤐😍