The Chip Wizard: Exploring All Realms

I have been a bookworm for ten years and have read countless books. I didn't expect that as soon as I wrote it now, I would have lost my ability to appreciate it and completely lost my perspective as a reader. I tried my best to follow the outline...

Wizard novels, I personally feel that multi-dimensionality is needed. You have to invade the planes to raise a wizard. No matter how you do it in one plane, it is not a good novel

It is a waste of time if the preface does not match the postscript. I suggest you just cut it.

I feel like the main character is a loser. He even drank eight bottles without asking about the side effects. The same goes for the salesman. How can there be such a nice store to talk to? Full refund, at most the purchase price will be refunded.

The main character is possessed by the Virgin Mary.

Ah, isn't it too easy to sell one's body? I had a lot of worries before, but suddenly I had to participate in the auction for no reason. A woman sitting next to me answered a few questions and was immediately attracted by the offer. . . Is this a temporary outline?😓

After Chapter 17, there is a strong sense of fragmentation, as if the book has been changed, and subsequent chapters cannot be substituted and cannot be understood at all.

Come on, work hard on writing. There are not many wizards. My personal suggestion is to focus on the protagonist's bloodline and meditation methods to increase the sense of crisis and use this to extend the main line of the story.

Why did you become a woman? Will we all be women in the future?

Alas, there are so few writing about wizards nowadays! Come on, the author! Recommend books to you