Deep Sea Survival: Start with a Submarine

Personally, I feel that the first part is not very good, and it is a bit written for certain elements (such as the communication platform, this is the most embarrassing thing for me) and the foreigners who speak Chinese even though they all use a translator. After encountering the painted skin later, it is much better, at least it is not awkward. After the relics are contained, it really becomes smooth. The advantages are 1. A fan of Latent Syndrome (I watch Joey Cloud and want to play but No one is together) 2. The description of the mentality is very good, at least it is coherent. The depression of leaving the shelter (submarine) after leaving the warehouse and the change of mentality when encountering monsters are all written. 3. Regarding the exploration of the deep sea, both the depression of lamenting the insignificance of human beings and the magnificence of the spectacle are both there 4. There is a fairy tale beauty in which all human beings (part of them) are united together br>5. I am really farming Disadvantages 1. The most important thing is that the front is really long. It is recommended to read at a glance and ten lines to understand the setting. 2. The response to the post is slow and the update is slow. The author said in this chapter that there are family reasons. I finished it in one go and then wrote it, so I am not sure 3. It is a bit of a routine. Although a gun must go off, don't let it trigger it as soon as it appears. . I have combined the most important shortcomings into one. There are really various poisonous points in the front. I don't want to go into details, including but not limited to various details, awkward, um, pretending. The latter part is much smoother, and I will click on it again if I can read it. To sum up, I recommend reading it. The author's level is obviously improving, and he is also absorbing the opinions of other posts. I wish you good health.

In the second chapter, I was forced to quit. In a life-threatening situation, there are only 5 opportunities a day to deliver news to the outside world. How about chatting and mindless writing?

There's too much nonsense, and it doesn't get to the point.

The author's writing is pretty good so far. This is the first time I've seen the subject matter of deep-sea survival. I think it's good. But at the same time, many of the descriptions are similar to the plots of novels of the same type. I hope the author can write more original plots in the future. In addition, I have a small suggestion (to be bold). The current game survival still seems a bit scary enough. With the help of Goldfinger, the protagonist has only one dream except two encounters with sea monsters and the shadow of the current diving suit. It does not highlight the real-life survival elements (it is more about game descriptions, and sometimes there is a sense of fragmentation). It may become boring to read like other novels of the same type. It would be better if the survival system could be overhauled (become more realistic) after arriving at the first station (for example), such as turning the submarine into a model from another world (but with a similar internal structure), making the operation realistic (meaning players become real submarine captains, recruiting crew members to sail the ship, etc., Upgrading into a different world technology tree, realizing the internal structure of the submarine, etc.). It would be better to make upgrades not just a simple superposition of attributes and numbers, but to add background and world view. Oxygen and energy also become a visual reality (players can see the percentage of energy and oxygen on the panel, instead of being more gamified. If it is consumed and replenished for various reasons, it can no longer be a one-click operation. , Such as repairing the engine, making weapons, etc., Can highlight the elements of survival. If it is purely gamified, this background theme feels wasteful) If the author can add a similar plot later (and make the protagonist less dependent on cheats), the quality of the entire book will definitely be better. Finally, all monthly tickets and recommendation tickets have been provided. PS: If you don't like it, don't comment. It's just that I haven't seen a subject I'm interested in for a long time. As a hard-core reader, it's just a bit of extravagance (no)

I like the deep sea setting, and I also like that the author didn't make the protagonist invincible or something like that. Even if there are obstacles, we will grow and become stronger step by step. Give the author a big thumbs up. Recommend!

The rare abyssal syndrome and deep sea trek, I hope you will come on, come on. Although I don't know how to write novels, I have had some time to read novels. I have summarized some of the poisonous points of highway traffic. I hope it will be useful to the author. 1. Endless beautiful characters. Believe me, most of the readers who come to this genre of novels are not the kind of idiots who come here to read this. Moreover, there are no cosmetics and rest meals in the background of highway traffic. The female characters are very clean, and it is basically impossible for that kind of exquisite beauties to exist. And once you write this kind of character, you will inevitably resort to tricks. What is particularly taboo is forcing a beautiful woman to join the team or have a long-term relationship. It is better not to write it, and just use some reliable bearded uncle depending on the background. 2. Other players are more lucky than the protagonist. First of all, what we want to make clear is that what everyone wants to see is that the protagonist has a sense of superiority. You can occasionally get rare items from passers-by, but a certain passerby repeatedly reaches rares and becomes a regular merchant. I can only say that he is the stinky tofu in Coke. He cannot kill people but is disgusting and unreasonable. For example, a certain novel has a coquettish girl with coquettish hair who keeps getting rares, which is criticized by readers. 3. The official organization repeatedly appears to be unclear. Needless to say, Chunwei Guangzheng is not right. It is too realistic and easy to 404. Don't pay attention to those readers who say what will happen to the official in this situation and why there is no official organization. They say both pros and cons. Those who are the first to report anything they don't like. The author takes advantage of the fact that it is still early, and it is better to change to an individual mining alliance or fishing team than an official organization. 4. Excessively enhance the world view. The setting should be stable, the combat power should not be exaggerated, and do not make some false and empty battle rules all day long. Just use the old gods and other things as a background board, a lesson learned from a certain road flow. 5. Our Lady gives you resources, and exchanges survival products for garbage. There's not much to say. The protagonist's behavior of controlling the price of fish to keep it from being inflated is considered human conscience in highway traffic. Don't give away resources or anything just to set up a foreshadowing. 6. Wait until you remember before writing.

The ships sent by aliens must be very advanced, right? Isn't that what they have?

After thinking about it for a while, I thought I would recommend this book and write a review~ At first I thought this book was no different from other books about everyone + installing It is different from other books in that it is cheating, but it is not absolutely invincible. It is also not like other books that deliberately match the number of opponents and then forcefully use the numerical advantage to suppress the protagonist in order to deliberately suppress the protagonist~ The story also clearly states that if you have more people, it is not really true. The invincible and crazy Rush B can be used to suppress it. A good example is the military fleet that was almost wiped out by an abnormal object before and the preparations were made in the early stage (they encountered a small waterloo in the painted skin...) And the protagonist is not the same. I'm crazy about Gou. Personally, I hate Gou's books. They're very wretched and timid. I feel like all the people in the world except some beautiful teammates are shark-maniacs and Z-maniacs. The bonus points are the characters of the protagonist and supporting characters. The protagonist is an ordinary person and a dragon country. Common people should be cautious but not timid, kind but not ignorant, brave but not arrogant. Helping others to the best of your ability is kindness. The supporting character is grateful and repays kindness after being rescued. This is what ordinary people should be like~ It is even more praised in transactions and dealing with others! The protagonist has the ability and dream to change the unfair market. This is justice. Not only that, but after gaining fame, he still worries about not being able to sell his goods? This is a win-win situation! When encountering a foreign enemy, in addition to the fear that an ordinary person should have at the beginning, there is also wisdom and finding a way to solve it, and then later doing good deeds. It writes what an ordinary person should be like, instead of winning by laughing and joking. , I have no ability, so I rely on cheats. The most important thing is that in addition to the protagonist with this cheat, other survivors can also live, and they also have opportunities and development. In many books, the protagonists are cheating and they still have a hard time surviving. I want to ask: Where are the others? Um? I have played 1-2 similar games, both on Steam. One is SOMA (I have all the English versions, I really don't know what it is called in Chinese...), And the other seems to be called Subnautica. I haven't played much, but I can feel the oppression and magnificence of the deep sea! The description of the deep sea in the book is basically quite realistic. Is it depressing? It is indeed very depressing, especially for people with cabin phobia and deep sea phobia, but it is also a nightmare, but so is the magnificence of the deep sea. The light formed by the luminous moss and jellyfish groups at the bottom of the deep sea shines on the fish, or the dim light emitted by the reflective place in the distant trench, and large marine creatures slowly swim by from time to time! PS: Since they are all novels, how about raising a pet? Fishmen, dolphins, octopuses, etc. You can also raise a jellyfish! If you feel okay, you can hug the head of the big jellyfish and it will be very comfortable!

Good guy, after sky islands, islands, trains, roads, boats, battleships, small stars, planets, caves... There is another submarine! What else can come out next time ε(*´･ω･)з

The subject matter is novel, but quite boring. Even though the Alien Abyss submarine has survived, it still engages in the nationalism that was the favorite in online games more than ten years ago. I personally don't like nationalism and having to fight for blood every day. Although if the author didn't write it, a large part of the plot would be missing.

Under the concept of putting some pictures

Forget it, just delete the book. I can't stand Chapter 13 anymore. It's not poisonous, it's just that the water is disgusting.

Just at the beginning, a piece of fish meat is exchanged for 10 irons. What do you think, 10 people in a fleet of others can't even catch a fish? Let's just call the book, Global Survival, Only I Have Fish and Meat. It's just like a stand-alone game, everyone else is just bad.

There is always a problem with this kind of novels. Except for the protagonist, everyone else is a fool, and the transactions in it are completely wrong.

When writing about this kind of apocalyptic theme, try not to write too much about national sentiments. Otherwise not many people would like to watch it. Read ten or twenty chapters, with half of the channels speaking in each chapter. No one likes to see Zhang San and Li Si making a lot of complaints or flattering.

The subject matter is good, but the writing is really bad. If you write a good survival flow normally, the results will be good, but you have to add messy things to it, making it look foreign and unsophisticated. It will make you upset just looking at it.

The subject matter is really good, but the writing style really sucks. Give up but you won't be willing to give up, it will look uncomfortable if you don't give up.

What does the author think? The character Huo Ye purely brings trouble to the protagonist, and even cares about his food and drink. The most important thing is that having him on the submarine is not a hidden danger? And he behaved like a retard along the way, so what is the protagonist's purpose of saving him? I don't see its use😓

I can't stand it any longer. Whoever wants to watch it can watch it. Even veteran players with latent abyss syndrome can't bear it anymore. Don't say it's just early poison. Setting issues and pacing issues can be said to be difficult for everyone to agree on. The plot and writing style are purely the author's fault.

The subject matter is really good, but it's so watery that it took dozens of chapters to get a fresh water container and a gravity ball. . . I will give you a chapter at every turn, fabricating and imagining my own erotic scenes out of thin air. . . . Even the waterworks are not like this. I really can't stand it any longer. It feels like Golden Finger has not been used at all. I am too tired to read. Chapters are just passing by without even a tenth of the useful content.

The description is so detailed that after dozens of chapters, the time in the game is only a few hours... If I finish the book at this speed, it will probably only take three days.

A piece of water is all about other people's speeches and inner activities, and there is very little plot.

The five families of relics will now have particle special effects in their containment version. (Revised)

Damn, it's shit after it's released! Big loss from subscription

Underwater Base

It turned out to be a eunuch, I thought it was over

I really like this kind of subject matter, but the author's writing in the comment section is very poor.

Hey, I like this book very much. Why do some people say that this book is not good? But I don't have money and I have no choice. It's not easy for the author either.

What a mouthful, bye bye Shuiwen

I thought I was going to write about my relationship, but An Ran disappeared. She said she wanted to save her, but in the end, she couldn't be saved, which means she died immediately afterwards. It's such a pity for this character. In the end, it's like the end of chapter 2, leaving suspense and a lot of pitfalls.