Red Mansion and Jade Tower

That's it? That's it? What is it written about and you still have to pay to read it?

Hey, one author changes his dynasty, and together they make the Dream of Red Mansions last for five thousand years.

I can't figure out why the protagonist still marries Wang Xifeng. A girl who is jealous, greedy for money, and shrewish, and her family is clinging to your family. Will you marry her as your legal wife? It's not like the protagonist doesn't know his character. Why bother?

Anyone who writes about Red Mansions cannot escape from the main plot. It's a bit annoying to see this. The author describes Jia Lian's background so well. Compared with the description of the Wang family, the contrast is really tragic. In order not to bias the main plot of Red Mansion, it is really poisonous to cast the protagonist on Wang Xifeng.

Let's talk about the situation of the heroine Feng Jie'er, because I saw some people mentioned that they shouldn't go to Feng Jie'er because she is cruel or ruthless, or the Wang family is useless and forced to go to the main plot. First, I chose Sister Feng because she was raised early. Her character and tactics can be changed. It doesn't matter if she is aggressive, but she must change her personality if she is harmful to others. There are so many Honglou colleagues who are looking for Sister Feng or Keqing, but they have already grown up, so no one says anything. Fans want to see what her character looks like in the world I built. In the original work, Keqing had an affair with Jia Zhen. So many fans wrote about Keqing. Is it possible that it was because of his Tauren tendencies? Secondly, it is said that I forced myself to follow the main plot. The first thing I wanted to write about Red Mansions was the garden drama. If I didn't write the main plot, I wouldn't even be able to get the Twelve Hairpins together, so what else would I write about Red Mansions? It would be directly original. Thirdly, I have also read many, many Red Mansions fan fiction, such as Red Mansions, Zui Mi, or Red Mansions by other excellent authors. In addition, I have also read the original book of Red Mansions several times. I have wanted to write a Red Mansions fan fiction since I was a sophomore in college. Now that I have graduated from college, I have time and can realize my dream. I am free to write how I want. Everyone can speak freely, thank you for your understanding and support! 🙏🙏🙏

What kind of bullshit are you writing! As a knowledgeable time-travelling person, Twelve and Three were messing around with their wives, and they lost their vitality too early! After his father's death, he didn't respect filial piety, he ate wine and meat, indulged in sexual pleasure, and acted in a rage! Even this would not be tolerated in that era!

It's not a field battle. It's said that 10,000 Jurchen cavalry broke through a camp of tens of thousands of Central Plains infantry. The author, you really dare to make it up. You need some military common sense. Even in the late Ming Dynasty, if you look at the Jurchen cavalry who dared to directly attack the infantry camp, they were fighting in the field or besieging them without attacking and starving them of food. For thousands of years in Chinese history, cavalry and infantry have never dared to attack a large camp, because forming a formation and standing firm is the only way for infantry to defeat cavalry. As for defending the camp, cavalry would not dare to die. Unless it is not a professional army, but an unorganized bandit armed force, and the infantry guards the camp together, the emperor does not have to worry at all. Do you know the layout of the camp? A strong camp of a thousand people is enough to delay an army of ten thousand people for half a day, allowing tens of thousands of soldiers to defend the camp and collapse without any traitors. In the case of constant food and water shortages, you can find a battle example, which can be used for five thousand years at home and abroad. Make up something reliable.

Judging from the combat effectiveness of the generals (including surrendered generals) in the late Ming Dynasty, if it were not for the problems of the Ming Dynasty itself, Hou Jin would have been crushed against the Ming Dynasty. . Hong Chengchou, Wu Sangui, Sun Chuanting, Lu Xiangsheng, Zu Dashou, Jiang Xiang, Wang Fucheng, Huang Long, Shang Kexi, Geng Zhongming, Kong Youde, Jin Shenghuan, Cao Kezhao,. . . . . . Wait, wait. . Which one is vegetarian? The key is that when working in the Ming Dynasty, most of these people were weak chickens, running around generals. As soon as they surrendered, they immediately transformed into Ultraman, with their chests broken, and their chrysanthemums opening bottle caps. This depends on the problems of the Ming Dynasty itself.

How can I complain about this rubbish novel?

The fighting power of the Jurchens of the Hou Jin Dynasty has been exaggerated, and they are not set in the late Ming Dynasty. The late Ming Dynasty was caused by natural and man-made disasters and the financial collapse of the central government. However, the dynasty in the book is only the second generation. The martial virtues of the court and the people are very abundant. A unified dynasty is only the second generation. Isn't it crushing the local separatist forces?

I read two chapters and found that the author probably has not studied Red Mansions, or I suspect that he has not read it. Many things he wrote are embarrassing.

Everyone has his or her own version of Red Mansions, not to mention that some people now dare to say that the research on Dream of Red Mansions is thorough. I naturally admit that my own writing skills are not enough, and some parts do not meet the readers' expectations. I will naturally make corrections in this regard. The timeline of this book is earlier than that of Dream of Red Mansions. In addition, I will be writing a Red Mansions fanfic for a while, so the heroine cannot be an original one. She must be one of the Twelve Beauties of Jinling. Bao Daiyun is too young. It is impossible for Yuanchun to visit Qiao Qiao in the Spring Festival. Li Wan is the eldest sister-in-law, but Qing's background is even worse. There is only Miaoyu left. Do you want me to go to the south of the Yangtze River and find a little nun? Of course I know that most of them are not malicious, and I am willing to work harder to improve my own writing skills, but there is no need to personally attack me in the comment area! I fully accept everyone's opinions, but if they scold me or attack me personally, I will scold me back one by one 🙏🙏🙏

Are you sure it depends on military merit? Too many military exploits

This is a book marked with the Red Mansion, and inside is a book about my TV series "The Great Qing Kowloon Seizing the Progeny"!

Silly, knowing that Mrs. Wang wants to harm you, why would you want to take back the Wang family's food? It is business to get rid of the Wang family as soon as possible and remove the hidden dangers. This favor will be gone once it is used. You have to think about it again unless you have someone else to ask for it.

Tentatively selected are Wang Xifeng, Lin Daiyu, Qin Keqing, Xue Baochai and Ping'er. Let's discuss it.

If you rebel and become emperor, you can have them all

This book feels different from other books, very fresh, but it is undoubtedly a rare and good book.

The front was fine, but later came the industrial revolution and modern military establishment. Poisonous

Why is there no role for Daiyu? It would be best to save Jia Min and Lin Ruhai, as well as Lin Daiyu's younger brother.