The Storm in the Red Mansion

The front part of this book is okay, more reasonable than most Red Mansion fans. Travelers don't need to live in the Rong Mansion. The trivial things about the Jia family are all written down. As for the Twelve Hairpins who don't need to go through the Rong Mansion to get in touch, Lin Daiyu starts with Lin Ruhai, and Xue Baochai As for Xue Pan, Qin Keqing is not married yet. As for the eldest sister-in-law, Jia Lan is knowledgeable, and Wang Xifeng is also easy to do. As for Jia Lian, Wang Xifeng takes advantage of the conflict, and the same surname cannot be married. Sanchun and other things will be able to help when the time comes. As for the men, they will control him life and death.

Why didn't anyone write about how they secretly destroyed the Jia family? ! ! Isn't it easy to recruit women after they are defeated? They are all prisoners, and they also get rid of a bunch of dragsters.

There is no problem with the writing. It is really good. There is no clear poisonous point. I actually felt good after reading the whole story. But the plot is too bland and not exciting, especially in Wen Dou. How can I say that my cultural background is not that high? Xiao San Yuan and Big San Yuan are quite good. And if you are sure to write the civil service route, it is better not to read Tanhua. This is indeed very discouraging. Originally, Xiao San Yuan, Jia Jie Yuan, Hui Yuan, and then your whole Tan Hua Yuan are not disgusting. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. I still hope that the book will get better and better.

Receive them all? There's no way I'm just an LSP 😃. In addition, all those losers in the original book don't care about their life or death. Whether they are the men of Ningrong's second house or the men of other families, they are left to fend for themselves.

A little opinion: I have always felt that this idea of ​​inheriting a title but not inheriting property is wrong. Although other Red Mansions novels I read also write this, it still feels weird. Since interns lived together and shared property in ancient times, shouldn't the protagonist who inherits the title as the patriarch and owner of Ningguo Mansion have the right to control the property of Ningguo Mansion? And Jia Rong should have no inheritance rights, right? Should the future property and title be inherited from the protagonist's son? I don't know if what I said is right or not, and I haven't looked up any information, so I would like to share my opinions briefly 🙂

Why do I remember that there is another book where Jia Zhen is killed for stealing money, and then the protagonist refuses to accept the title...

Is the first heroine Lin Daiyu? Do you want to accept women like Baochai, Baoqin, Miaoyu, Xiangling, etc.? Personal preference, don't spray

I feel that the most important thing about a theme like Red Mansions is to distinguish the emotional lines of the characters. Otherwise, the relationships between many characters will be very confusing later on, and some of them will be easily forgotten by readers →_→

If you have any comments, please mention them. Thanks♪(･ω･)ﾉ

The writing is good, but it doesn't feel exciting enough. I hope the author will update more, come on!

Is it Wen who hung out in Jia's house? Is she the nanny of the Jia family?

I wish I could write more, but it's not enough! !

The author's writing style is very good, full of Red Mansion flavor, I like to read this kind of book. Many Red Mansions fan fiction is like modern urban novels, very dramatic. There are also some that are completely selling dog meat with sheep's heads being turned into nothing but their names. Support the author, come on＾0＾~, more updates!