The Supporting Role Begins with Swallowing the Starry Sky

Not bad! The angle of the novel is eye-catching. People's good and evil are often only in a thought. However, it is very difficult to write a fanfic well, as the original work Swallowing Stars has its pearls first. I hope the author can work hard and maintain the quality of the work.

The protagonist's clone is too hip-reaching, with ten times the genes of an iceberg behemoth, and a metal life level that is not high. The point is that none of them are consistent with his own attributes, and he does not have a high affinity for the laws of space like the demon slayers. What is the use of the Iceberg Behemoth? It's not as good as the Flame Star Behemoth building a road that is at least as good as the main road.

Blood crystals have also been made into an industrial chain. The entire secret realm is for cultivating ethnic groups. It is not easy to get the blood crystals in them. I can resell them to you, so go ahead and eat them! The golden beast gods have all been killed, and the human race still lacks blood Luo Jing

What about writing about beasts? Why don't you write about Pokémon? It's really unfair to write about swallowing the stars.

Golden Chapter Three: Is this how you wrote it? Isn't it boring?

I like it without the support of the heroine, some people's emotional lines are too stupid

It looked okay in the early stage, but after reaching the Blood Luo Crystal, it became more and more uncomfortable to watch! I remember that when Luo Feng in the original novel was in Hongmeng, he participated in Hongmeng's auction. There was an auction of blood crystals. At that time, the people who dared to bid were all the Universe Venerables. Luo Feng was still thinking about how much he was worth having so many blood crystals! You, a cosmic-level person, can manage the industry chain, so you are awesome! There is another poisonous point. In the extraterrestrial battlefield, except for the decisive battle, at other times, small teams fight against legions. A legion, an immortal military master, ten realm masters, a hundred realm masters, and ten thousand universe levels is a legion! How many millions of people do you have in your army? Is it possible to think about it yourself? Doesn't that mean that the legion commander is defeated and all these hundreds of millions of people who are at least cosmic level experts will be buried with you? Think it's possible? The battlefield outside the territory is for training the strong, not for death. Besides, are you sure these people can survive the aftermath of King Feng's battle? Also, the author's battle scenes are a bit hard to understand, and the descriptions are not so intuitive! Looking at the original work, it was all about how many immortal divine bodies were destroyed to feel the fighting power of both sides. You Mo Luo hit the opponent's throat with one punch, etc., I was confused when I saw it! Since Mo Luo broke through to the Territory Lord level, I feel like I haven't seen him practice, and I haven't seen him comprehend the rules. He comprehended the Giant Ax Chaos Monument once after breaking through the Tongtian Bridge! The World Lord did not go to Chaos City to understand the laws, nor did he explain to what realm the protagonist had reached the realm of the laws, what the secret method was like, what kind of equipment he used, etc. The writing was very messy, so he just remembered it roughly, but he couldn't remember clearly! The more I look, the more confused I become.

You are too restrictive to follow the spirit master and animal control style. You have restricted this yourself. What's the point of starting a road like that?

You can still read it at the beginning, but the plot in the later stage is confusing and has no meaning. I don't know what the author wants to write. I don't know if the author has read any books, but the later plot is very vague. . . It's that feeling of not knowing what it means.

I've been reading it for a while, and four votes have been cast. The author's comments should be dealt with. I almost stopped reading this book when I saw it for the first time. It had a huge impact. What the author wrote in the book is quite reasonable. I'm afraid of eunuchs. 🥺, pretty good Devouring fandom

Doesn't metal life have no soul?

In fact, I think the world view of Lord Snow Eagle is quite suitable for writing a fan novel, and the power system setting is relatively clear, and the novel framework has been set up. Even if you just change the "Tao" according to the original plot reasoning, you can write something of your own. This way it is easier to code, and the audience can be considered satisfactory. It is quite suitable for practice, but no one has written it 😭😭 How about the author pre-ordering a copy 🙂

Does the author have any cheats?

The iceberg monsters complained about in the comments have all come back, and there is very little discussion. The plot in the later stages is a bit erratic, but there are no surprises. Overall, it is still average among Devouring fandoms. Give the author a boost.

The title of your book is not pertinent. What is a supporting role? Does Morrow count? This is a script that is clearly a villain!

Some readers have questioned the plot arrangement of "Reselling the Blood Crystal". I summarized the opinions raised by readers and found that they focus on the following two points: 1. The top management does not allow it; 2. The Blood Crystal is a forbidden object. These two points can be summarized into one point, so I will also use one point to answer: The senior management does not care. There are also readers who have questioned the explanation of "high-level people don't care". I have given relevant explanations in this chapter, and I will repeat it again: The protagonist brings out the Blood Crystal for 600 points to be recycled by the tribe. This price is consistent with the recycling price of the Blood Crystal brought by a cosmic genius. In the original text of "Swallowing Stars", in the plot of the Blood Crystal auction, Luo Feng also teased that this price is very different from the true value of the Blood Crystal. The top management doesn't care. What they don't care about is that in my plot arrangement, the protagonist opens a channel to "grow vegetables" by himself, because the blood crystals produced by the protagonist are all funneled into the hands of the ethnic group, and the ethnic group only pays points that are meaningless to the top management. I never said that the top management didn't care about the Blood Luo Crystal itself. Furthermore, the top management of the human race does not pay much attention to the Blood Crystal. Although it is a very important resource, the original text of "Swallowing the Starry Sky" stated that the number of strong men of the Beast God Way of the human race is rare and is not the mainstream. Before Luo Feng, there was no one who could carry the banner. The human successors were also marginalized on Bauhinia Island and found it difficult to develop. The Xueluo World was left there for countless years without any care, allowing the natives above to hate the human race. Do you think this is what it should be like to attach great importance to the Blood Luo Crystal and not allow any unplanned factors to appear? I'm afraid not.