My Dragon Life Is a Little Bit Outrageous

Regarding the subject matter of the author, I have an immature idea. Regarding what you wrote, Odin traveled through time and became a dragon. Because he could gain power by sleeping, he dug deep holes in the ground and left dozens of hidden escape passages. The escape passage also set up several escape passages, and he stayed there for hundreds of thousands of years before he gained strength. The ability of Odin you wrote is obviously suitable for development. Which game does not require early development? Even if some are operation-oriented, such as Mario, some levels require the accumulation of props in the early stage to help pass the level, but the author does not give full strength and still needs to grow, especially the planting technology, which has also become a development direction. As for the plot, you can prefer his detailed description of the game world in the level-clearing game, and you can describe the events of the game more. If the plot part of the game is not enough, even if the copy feels the same from the current point of view, why is it said that a novel is well written? The plot has ups and downs and constant climaxes? The plot can have ups and downs, but even when the plot is relatively gentle, you can still lay some foreshadowing to make readers feel that this is foreshadowing or that it may be foreshadowing instead of this part of the plot. It doesn't matter if you skip it. Even if it doesn't have this paragraph, it won't have much impact on the plot. Why do you say it's a foreshadowing? Even though there are ups and downs, the whole article is the essence because of the foreshadowing. The foreshadowing laid in the flat period or the high-pressure period can integrate the subsequent climax period or the main development period of the plot with the early stage. It seems that the author has no outline, right? But you can also bury some small foreshadowing or big foreshadowing according to the goal you want to write. But be careful not to bury some foreshadowing that has nothing to do with the development of the plot. It will become a hole that is not filled in when it is finished.

I feel like this is the early stage, and it won't work if I don't change it. Except for the first time when md was born, he has been running away, being beaten and abused. Now the main article about abuse does not have the top-notch writing style and creativity.

Sorry, I can only say stay away from the protagonist. The time-travelers in it are all kinds of outrageous. I was afraid that the relics would collapse on me. After the martial arts master traveled through time and became a rat-man, he actually beat up his own time-traveler for the rat-people. He even wanted to enslave the protagonist and protect the rat-people. Then after beating the protagonist to near death, he chased the murderer for thousands of miles. Finally, he made the protagonist make a promise not to kill ratmen. Then after the protagonist was beaten, he actually agreed. He actually agreed. Sorry, people are numb. Was this protagonist a holy monk before he traveled through time?

You can abuse the main character, but a dozen or so chapters would be too much. It would make people feel more uncomfortable reading each chapter, and they would just run away without reading. Who watches you torture people? It would be better if you are a pervert and watch torture.

There is a reason for the abuse of others. The protagonist inexplicably starts the game with the rat-man being tortured and the drow being tortured and having his limbs amputated. Then he suppresses dozens of chapters and blows up the entire city without even a chapter. Author, your plot really makes me want to complain. How can a normal person write like this?

I suggest you re-open a new book. A torturer must have a protagonist worthy of being tortured, but the character of the protagonist you wrote makes me completely unreadable. There is no point in jumping to Chapter 24.

After chapter seventeen, something went wrong. (Just skip to Chapter 24. Just glance at the plot in the middle and it's almost done.) When I was writing these chapters, it was during the peak exam period and I couldn't wrap my head around it, so I ran into problems. Excuse my lack of brains, I will adjust it later. The overall tempo is still in the video game style, a little more relaxed. It's my fault that these chapters have been messed up.

The setting is okay, the writing is okay, the plot is fucked, the purpose of reading novels is entertainment, why is it that after 22 years, there are still people who abuse the protagonist?

It feels like the time-travelers described by the author have all been assimilated into the other world. They are just some of the indigenous people who have the memory of the time-travelers, rather than the time-travelers with alien bodies. Everything the leader of the ratmen did was for the consideration of the ratmen, and the leader of the frost giants also wanted to establish a kingdom of giants. The protagonist inherited the arrogance of the giant dragon, was not afraid of cold food, and ate everything, including the bones and souls of human beings.

The writing is okay and the setting is good, but it is too sadistic and the protagonist is beaten from beginning to end. At the beginning of "The Rat Traveler", I thought I would recognize and cooperate with the protagonist, and I was immediately interested. In the end, the two sides became mortal enemies? If the protagonist does not destroy the rat tribe in the follow-up, the author will be scolding him. If he does, it will lose the fun and feel that both sides are not being pleased!

You just let this life-and-death feud go by so lightly? Just because the other side is also a time traveler? I can only say that the author is too naive and naive

Picture found online: Odin's Traveling Mushroom Body

The protagonist agrees to the agreement, which is like a person being captured by a criminal gang to be a slave, and that person escapes, but the leader of the criminal gang comes to fight you, saying that if you win, don't go to the police and arrest the accomplices. The protagonist agreed to fight this group to the death and did not go to the police after winning, which is exactly the same as the protagonist not taking revenge.

Life is already very difficult, but reading a novel in which the main character travels through time and becomes an adult dragon is still abusive.

Travelers Association? At present, I feel like they are all a bunch of selfish people, how can we still form an association? In addition, if the protagonist is so badly tortured, why don't you give up the Virgin? You should die, don't be disgusting.

I originally wanted to complain about too many time-travelers, but then I thought about it, this is fucking Dnd, even the entire pantheon of gods and the entire race of time-travelers, all the time-travelers are just like water!

This is not a cool article. He kept being beaten by the enemy and kept running around. This book is more suitable for readers who are looking for abuse.

Introduction Fraud I believe that after reading the introduction, many readers will think that this is a farming or road article that is more cheerful, and the result is that the main article is abusive...

The Rat Man can't bear it. After all, the Rat Man is about to die. Why should he fight to the death? Is he here to seek revenge or to avenge himself? If you do this, a normal person will remember it for the rest of his life.

Even if you write that the rat people have limited food, and the lord has level 14 and can kill even a young dragon, let alone a young dragon, it would be better to explain it. The subsequent battle is even more outrageous. The rat people put a mark on it and did not pursue and kill it. How could the rat people at home still detect it? Then the rat man was about to die thousands of miles away and sent someone to his death. They could have communicated with each other. It is more reasonable to die voluntarily than to die decisively. This plot design is too outrageous. The writing is good but the plot is real. . .

Which brother can tell me how many chapters can go without abusing the protagonist? Is this really a light novel? The protagonist is so miserable.

To be honest, I have clicked on this book title more than ten times, each time to see if there were any improvements in the comments. But after reading it more than a dozen times, it still hasn't changed. I really have no desire to read it. The title and introduction of the author's book indicate that it is about a relaxing flow or a happy farming flow, but the comments are all about it, which is outrageous.

Every wrong has its owner, and every debt has its owner. The Ratman Lord and the protagonist have conflicts, and they resolve them themselves. Some people with problematic views insist on the protagonist driving out all the Ratmen, right?

Julong writes about abusing his master, and the author is really good at it.

The invincible stream of novels written about dragons is relatively popular. Since you want to abuse the mainstream, just abuse it a little bit.

It was so confusing to watch, and there was a feeling of anger in my heart that couldn't be released. I just didn't want to watch it in order not to be angry.

Personally, I suggest you jump directly to Chapter 36 after reading the first three chapters. If you look at the chapter names in the middle, you can figure out the plot.

What happened? (゜ロ゜)

Suddenly I realized that I have finished reading the book I have been reading. I have to find time to finish reading this book.

I'm asking for leave. I'm going to fight in a province.