American Life Begins with Little Sheldon

Sit back and watch the collapse! There's nothing wrong with the writing, but the picture about children's psychology in the museum is really disgusting! Sheldon's parents are very caring people! Think about it for yourself. If your child is dragged for a scan without your consent, it is said that the child consented. It depends on whether the child's parents will punish you or not! Little Sheldon still asks questions when taking things from others! Even the experts didn't ask their parents for the group photo, right? What follows is even more nonsense! What kind of society is America? Bourgeois society! Have you forgotten what Peggy's parents did? Can a firefighter's nephew go to private school? The whole process was mindless, mainly due to excessive self-pleasure!

It gave me the feeling of being a forced babysitter. Twenty-one chapters also made me feel that the pig's feet were awkward. I couldn't explain it and then just ignored it and ran away. Of course the writing is good, and it successfully made me hate Beverly. I didn't find her annoying even after watching the show.

Peggy character drawing

The current rhythm is very good, I hope the author can maintain it. It's just a little weird to get involved in Leonard's affairs, and it made me feel like the protagonist's character was a little unstable. Just like what Beverly said, the character of the protagonist in the early stage is not overly sympathetic. If the motivation is to gain achievements, this time-consuming and laborious rescue method has a low success rate and is not worth it. And if Leonard changes his childhood, the plot of The Big Bang Theory may not be smooth in the future.

Because this is my first time writing a book, there are inevitably some shortcomings. In order to improve readers' reading experience, I will modify previously published chapters in my spare time to improve the quality, so I will post a modification log here.

Compared to Leonardo DiCaprio, I prefer the appearance of Henry Cavill, that is, Superman, he is a pure tough guy!

This book not only has the potential for self-pleasure, but also has symptoms of literary youth disease.

The topic is off topic, so I can't continue writing. I think the writing should be focused on the protagonist and Peggy. Everyone else is embellishment

It has been a long time beyond the time mentioned by the author. It is probably cut off.

How about not adding a genius girl and a bad guy. Three looks alike. So happy

To sum up, your system and the talent of the protagonist are all based on the path of genius. Even if there is something in the category of super powers in Goldfinger, it should still follow the path of being the only one who can do it alone. Even if it doesn't, it should be written on the path of being a winner in life. In the end, you suddenly come up with a magician, and then a few extraordinary forces, and then, without any reason, you take on the protagonist and tell the readers: Are you surprised? Do you think this is a normal American TV world? In fact, this is modern magic! ! So the protagonist has worked hard for so many years, finally mastered a few abilities, earned millions, walked so many daily routines, and if he works harder, he can reach the pinnacle of life. Since the appearance of the inexplicable magician, all of this has become a trivial matter and useless work. If the protagonist does not practice magic and start over, he will be a useless person who cannot even guarantee his own safety and will. So, Ikes q Smith?

I would like to give a suggestion to the author. It is better not to write Friends. Isn't it awkward how a child, the main character, can participate in the adult world?

Knowing that Leonard is such a strong person, is it useful for you to humble yourself and please him?

Will The Big Bang Theory follow? I feel like I quite like Leonard. After all, I admire someone who can tolerate a personality like Sheldon's.

I lost my desire to read after seeing it. Although there are many stories in the plot of the air show, it is very bland. It feels a little clear and watery, and the pace of the plot is also a bit slow. Just keep it for now.

The plot and pacing felt pretty good. There are two points: 1. The amount of updates is not enough, so the rhythm feels very slow. If you want people to follow it, update it at least twice a day, otherwise it will be easy for people to lose the desire to continue reading and make people keep books; 2. The update time is unstable. If you have something, you can say hello in advance, but if you don't see the update or tell it in advance, it will make people feel like you are about to enter the palace.

From a simple point of view, the development of this type of novel usually involves the growth of the protagonist, gradually mastering some things, and then more, influencing more plots, until he takes control of everything step by step, and becomes a master, Of course, this process is irreversible and cannot be interrupted in the middle. Otherwise it will be very poisonous, just like An author spent hundreds of thousands of words to make the protagonist become a millionaire step by step, and he needed to expand his assets, and the business world was booming. As a result, he went bankrupt in the next chapter and could only sell roast duck at the gate of the community. On the other hand, what you did before, the author, was to devalue all the efforts of the protagonist. And the protagonist started writing from a young age , Naturally, it has to go through a similar process from a cute boy to a handsome boy to a mature adult The descriptions required at each stage are different, Just like when a boy, the protagonist can gain some convenience by being cute, but it is poisonous to describe it like that when he is not young, At the beginning of growth, such as when European and American male stars are at their peak in appearance, it is still necessary to portray the charm of some protagonists, not only in appearance, but also in behavior, personality, and external appearance. Taken together, The current label does not show the performance of children of the same age, but shows maturity. This needs to be portrayed well, Coupled with handsomeness, the former Because the protagonist needs to control the plot, the latter is in love, and needs to deepen the impression of the protagonist, the reader's perception, As for the subsequent development, it is even more popular in the United States. Under this demand, the protagonist becomes irritable when faced with the "torture" of a woman with some psychological problems, and loses his composure when faced with a cup, then it will not work, it is necessary Have the magnanimity to face big storms After acquiring various abilities, you will become more comfortable in the reality you have built. That state of power and identity will finally be superior to ordinary people, which will allow people to gradually liberate themselves, even if it is not in a bad direction. It has characteristics, Even if he cannot become the real version of Iron Man, becoming Li Ka-shing is enough for the protagonist to develop a confident and mature personality. Coupled with some abilities given by Golden Finger, whoever replaces him will have the energy to go anywhere in the world. This needs to be written well, even if it does not need to be too indulgent in life, it still needs to be written to be universally beautiful. To sum up the feeling of living a free life, or conversely, it is too frustrating to read when you are limited at first and the protagonist is incompetent. At present, the author has put a lot of effort into expressing the supporting characters. But in comparison, the protagonist's personality is still insufficient. This is lost in the face of characters with personality such as Sheldon.

A common mistake of new authors is that they like to listen to readers' opinions to revise the text. In fact, it is easy to break down this way. I used to write hundreds of thousands of words, but in the end I collapsed because of the revision of the text. I really couldn't write anymore, so I had to give up everything. Do readers' opinions matter? It's important, but should you listen? No, because if the author wants to write a book based on the readers' opinions, he must first respect his own opinions, because the author is the first reader. Before we see much, the author has already read most of the book. Therefore, if you want to respect opinions, you should also respect the opinions of the author, the first reader. As for revising the text, yes, just adjust it slowly. If readers help point out the shortcomings in the book, you can slowly correct them in future writing. The author should have a main context in mind, and then this main context should not be changed. Just make up the word count for nonsense, and wish the author good luck in writing and get over 10,000 subscriptions, haha.