
Brother Xu, I Really Don't Want to Steal Your Immortality!
许兄,我真没想抢你仙缘!
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 176k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Classical Xianxia
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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I feel that the background of this book is a bit strange. It is different from the original White Snake. The original one should be in the same line as the prehistoric period, similar to Journey to the West. Here came the Human King Cauldron and the Demon-Gathering Banner, and then the Human King Cauldron gathered half of the luck of the human race. This setting is a bit poisonous. I don't understand what luck is. Luck should be in the person himself, not in a magic weapon. If the Human King Cauldron is lost, half of the human race's luck will be lost?! Is it okay to suppress the luck of half of the human race? Moreover, the Human King or the Human King's bloodline are also very outrageous. Is the Human King a ruler or a person who has great merits for the human race? Then the ruler can be replaced by another person, and it is not a person created by the Human King. After the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors in ancient times, there was rarely a single king.
The protagonist has to deal with so many powerful opponents, but the author has not strengthened the protagonist yet, and it would be abrupt if he increases his strength later.
The settings are complicated. The main body is the prehistoric world, which is mixed with a lot of local folk customs and some online novel settings. In addition, the theme is the Legend of White Snake. This leads to incompatibility. Hence the inconsistency. It was said earlier that immortals and gods control the luck of the world, and later it was said that Wutong God would disappear without belief. How can a thing that relies on human faith to survive control human beings? If you don't have the ability, you won't know. The concept of asking for a seal will be added later. This concept comes from shamanism in Northeast Mongolia. Only the emperor can canonize animals, and the number one immortal from the Northeast is called Mr. Hu San. This is the immortal who came to Qianlong in a dream to seek canonization. Asking for a title from ordinary people is slowly made up by horror folklore. It's okay to list them separately. The key is again in the prehistoric world. The Ancient God List was issued to Yuanshi Tianzun by Ancestor Hongjun. Only with this thing can one become a god. Why can you, a human emperor, canonize animals? Going back to the previous issue of faith, the emperor on earth is not qualified to be a god, so how can faith determine the life and death of a god? The Legend of the White Snake was written in the Ming Dynasty. I don't know if it was earlier than Journey to the West or later. But the three views in The Legend of White Snake are very close to Journey to the West. In Journey to the West, the boss is the Jade Emperor, the Buddhist Buddha is the Western Buddha, and the Taoist Three Pure Ones are also ministers. Buddhism and Taoism are harmonious, which is in line with the Ming Dynasty's idea of the unity of the three religions. No matter how powerful a god you are, how powerful your background is, or what achievements you have made, such as the founder of the world, there must be an emperor above you. This was very much in line with the political correctness of the time. There are supervisions on writing books in modern times, not to mention the ancient times when literary inquisition was possible? Nowadays, many conspiracy theories and over-interpretations are really confusing. That's too far. After reading about thirty chapters, I always feel torn. The Legend of White Snake in the prehistoric world is like The Three-Body Problem that has been describing the political struggle in a county. Full of dissonance
This book doesn't have enough writing power. The characterization is relatively thin, and everyone is the same. The most important thing is that the characters cannot be distinguished, and the characters still need a sense of hierarchy.
The protagonist is a good cook, good at medicine, and also knows how to farm. I am afraid that he was a monument to human civilization before time travel.
Come on, the author works hard to update
A new book has been opened. Please go to the old book and let me know.
Brother, you're laying the groundwork too long.
Reading smoothly! It's great to watch! The plot development is very good! Like! 🌹🌹
This is an invincible novel, but the protagonist doesn't know that he is invincible. There are actually quite a few books like this.
I can't understand it anymore
Super pretty! The best book from Qidian! Why are there so few people?
God of Plague, Lu Yue? The Great Luo Jinxian during the Conferred God? One of the giants in interception education?
Well written, can you support each other with comments?
Lick the dog.
Is this a harem story? I feel like it's too spicy to pair him up with Bai Suzhen.
I can't understand it, and I'm confused when writing it.
Book recommendationJourney to the West Through the White Snake
Come on 💪! You can come back when things are over, I'll wait for you!
I would like to take my precious opportunity to recommend a new book of the same type, "Across the Heavens, Starting from Elopement with Bai Suzhen", thank you🙏