When a Game Planner Becomes a Card Maker

I like this sense of daily life. Compared with books that will make you look down upon when you enter a college, I like the college atmosphere in this book very much. Including the little fat guy who doesn't follow the rules and is smart, and the senior management who helps keep the book secret, everyone feels very loving. As long as there are no very embarrassing plots, I will keep buying this book. However, some of the descriptive words for women in the book, emmm, are a bit um, and the starting point is traditional. In fact, if more neutral words can be used, it may be read more smoothly. When I read the book, I just gulped it down, but occasionally I would get into trouble because of the specific torso and specific words for women in the text. (Because I am a woman, I feel that everyone is not so... Delicate?) By the way, I think except for the supporting character killing part which is a bit stiff, this article is quite good as a daily article!

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I finally came across card-making books again. After thinking about it, I felt that the card-making books lacked a bit of soul and few of them became popular. However, I think this one is good. The early stage is very good. I highly recommend it.

Liu Gaomin: Roll him to death, come out with a new style soon! He Xingye: Starry Sky Pavilion, the stars do not twinkle, the moon does not shine, the small zero level is ridiculous

I really like reading this kind of books, but I especially don't like books with multiple female protagonists. Hey, I'll read them first. If there are too many women, I'll leave. The main reason is that I think there are too many women, and half of a story must describe women.

The pace is too slow, and it's not impossible for the book to be useless (if it's cured, it's not useless. I can only say that if it's not useless, the whole book will be useless), but many readers now won't give you too much time to deal with the problem. Many times, if it cannot be solved in two or three chapters, there is no chance. As far as this book is concerned, if you don't want to solve your physical problems in the short term, you can't just rely on fancy designs and other hard work. At the very least, you can get something like a Star Power energy card that can replace your own consumption. It's too low to rely on eating 💊. It won't affect the high-end market, and it won't even have much impact on the mid- to low-end market, but it can be considered a small refreshment and temporarily solve its own problems. If you don't want to establish a new system, it's okay to last for more than ten or twenty chapters, and then solve your physical problems as soon as possible.

The idea was okay, and the writing was okay, but the plot hit a minefield in the early stages, so the results weren't very good. It's not like no one has written this kind of article before. There are a few books with small successes, behind-the-scenes planning, instant hits and so on. But this book starts with 0 star power, right? You can write it like this, which can make the plot move slower. Obviously you are slow, but it is not compact enough. After 100 chapters, a game making article is still in Tetris. Not even top writers dare to do this, not to mention that the audience of this book is still small. The minefield is that in the early stage, Miss Lin came to him to learn how to be a nanny. Although the plot of the Starry Sky Pavilion is not brilliant, it can be explained. Anyway, you can obviously not arrange it like this. You can write thousands of ways for the protagonist to make progress. If you insist on arranging the plot by stepping on the trap, there is no way to exclude some book friends. For example, if the design competition rewards a physical upgrade, Miss Lin can also use online teaching to transform him. Of course, this is the idea of ​​other books. Some people may also say that it is not toxic to you. Everyone is different. The fact is that some people did run away. The most important thing for a new author of a new book is not to be too slow to get started and get off to a bad start, really!

To put it simply, there is no sense of immersion, the foreshadowing is too long and wears off patience, external forces do not appear (fighting), there is no sense of urgency to push the protagonist forward, and the protagonist does not have a golden finger, right?

I read the first 20 or 30 chapters seriously, but skipped through the rest just to see when the disease would be cured. But the disease was not cured even after I moved it to the shelves, so I stopped subscribing. I look forward to your next book.

Originally I was very happy to see a rare card story, but after reading a few chapters it was very uncomfortable. It felt like an urban story with a layer of skin. After a few chapters, the beautiful woman came to sleep at home. I am writing this without a clue. I don't know what I am doing. Are you saying that this woman knows him, that she is the agent who checked the white card, or what? I just bought a card and spent the night, and then others misunderstood me. What are you doing? I couldn't stand it anymore after seeing this. I flipped through the pages like a Parkinson's. What a beauty, what a lolita. If I don't delve into the character deeply, there is no soul at all. The protagonist has no goals, no ideals, and no characteristics. Yes, there is nothing wrong with what you wrote, but it is like replacing potato chips with Coke with boiled water and glutinous rice cakes. Speaking of which, I calmed down. I wanted to delete it but I couldn't bear to do it. I went back and took a closer look. If I felt there was a change, I came back and deleted it. (If you haven't changed your mind, it's up to the author. If you can't stand it, just delete it.)

I see that I am planning to give it up for a while now, and wait until the plot related to the sound card is over before looking at the future development. I hope the author can think of relevant plots in the future. I personally like game text and card making very much. This novel combines game text and card making which is quite interesting. It's just that the recent plot of the sound card is too toxic. As a card maker, there is no anti-counterfeiting mark. As the kid of a big boss, the results of the little fat guy are stolen by the people below, but he can only resist with the resources he personally allocates, but not his own family's resources. The writing of the business war is too childish, and there is a lot of water-filled content. You were also accused of plagiarism, and the only way to resist was to participate in the card maker competition. So what if you win? It only proves that you have high card making skills, but it doesn't prove that you didn't plagiarize. It doesn't mean that there aren't people with high skills who plagiarized the work of their subordinates. The protagonist can make a star card that increases the star. This product is a sound card, so you can't hide a circuit in the circuit and play the audio after being activated. "Is this sound card designed by Li Liyuan?" It's so simple, not sloppy at all, and can beat the opponent to death with a stick. The villain surnamed Qi has been dancing on the protagonist's face for a long time, and it has begun to make people sick. I hope the author will come up with a good plot in the future. This little villain won't be too long, and the response won't be so weak and untargeted. It's disgusting and not satisfying at all.

Does this fictional world support multiple marriages? Hey, there are so many female protagonists in this novel, it's really uncomfortable˚‧º·(˚ ˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅ )‧º·˚

I finished reading it in one go. The creativity was okay, the plot was average, not much interesting, and the overall plot was bland and had no ups and downs. I was unhappy. Hope to see more. The setting that the protagonist is a useless person is really a bit of a flaw. Although it will be fixed, the process may take up a lot of space. Generally speaking, it will take more than 20 chapters to recover. I guess it will not be fully recovered. The article says it will be a long process. According to the general line, the protagonist should enter the main line after recovering, which may take some days. Overall, it's watchable, but not very enjoyable, no matter in terms of plot advancement, protagonist settings, or the number of updates.

Your setting is actually okay,,, but the plot feels very flat. The main problem is that you have written dozens of chapters about making money and the daily plot is not good, and you have not seen any interesting card content. Moreover, the game planning in your book is related to the plot of selling lights and drawing cards, and then describes the talent of card making in a long way. If you click in to read it, you will inevitably feel that it is a bit of a trick. (Personally, I think game planning can actually be put to better use in business)

You are obviously a card maker, but you have to write a long paragraph about business war? The writing is so childish. If you don't know how to write, I suggest you skip it. Wouldn't you use your strengths and avoid your weaknesses?

Change the skin of the card? The world's technological development is so strong that it would be useless to imitate it for you in minutes.

It was well written, but I didn't have the patience, so I ran away. I couldn't stand it after watching a similar one (although it wasn't a card-making one). It took a lot of patience and made me very tired.

Having a patent seized shouldn't happen to time travellers. The plot is somewhat cliche.

The cost of a chapter of dry fire cards is 40, which can be used for a month. This is no more economical than carbon power generation, and you can't make more money by directly integrating technology. Think about the fact that modern society still uses fire to cook, how is it different from primitive people?

Just start with the waste material flow. Once you cure it, it will probably be on the shelves. What is the difference between this and the waste material flow? I thought it would be more than ten chapters. I am really speechless.

Forget about the suture monster and the cool article, you still have to cooperate with your roommate later, and confidential information was stolen, but you still don't give a shit? Or is the boss's son robbed by a shareholder? Is he such a waste? If this thing is just about making cards, fighting, and making games, what kind of business war is there? What kind of society is this? If you are a rich man, you can just find a killer. How can a businessman with tens of millions of dollars have more information than you and dare to rob him? You yourself wrote that this is a society of card masters. How dare you, a black man, know something if you don't know anything yourself? Then the protagonist immediately forgives his roommate for making a similar thing to compete with them? PK yourself? What about relationships? If you don't use this kind of relationship, you shouldn't write about how the protagonist's background is awesome, and that 7x6x are all masters and juniors.

My new book "The Almighty Card Maker: Starting from Zhong Kui", all the weird things, important characters, cards, and materials will be illustrated I have completed the work without any unfinished work, and my character guarantees that you can enter the game with confidence. The following is a brief introduction to the work: [Mythology, history and folklore, academy flow, secret copy, illustrator] Mo Bai traveled through the card world and became a new trainee card maker. Here, everything that forms collective memory can be used to make cards and play extraordinary and wonderful roles. Popular culture, celebrities, social occupations, hot events... History, myths, folklore, legends, all can be used to create cards. Among them, cards made from historical myths and folklore have great power! Unfortunately, due to the invasion of monsters, this world has suffered a civilization fault, and historical myths and folklore have long been lost. However, Mo Bai, who is familiar with these, can use them to make cards as he likes! Encountering red and white demons at the beginning, in order to save his life, he decisively made the divine summoning card [Zhong Kui], and since then he has embarked on the path of an all-around card master: A summoning card that no one else can create even if they try to break their brains? [Huang Feihong], [Guan Yu], [Black/White Impermanence]... I can choose any historical heroic spirit or mythological god! Equipment card? [Embroidered spring knife], [Zhangba snake spear], [Golden cudgel]... Swords, guns, axes and pickaxes, there is no best, only better! Vehicle card? Friends, have you heard of [Wood Cow and Flooding Horse] and [Kunpeng] which cannot be stewed in one pot? Venue card? After passing this [Naihe Bridge], your card will forget you as the card owner, I am so awesome! Trap card? I activate the [Spring Festival] effect, and all cards on the field must be returned to the card owner for reunion! A few years later, Mo Bai Muran looked back and found that he was already at the top of the card master!