There's Something Wrong with Your Sect

There is a serious discrepancy between the title and the content. People who clicked on the name of the book wanted to know about the sect, but it turned out that it was indeed helping the government to do tasks, wandering around like an independent player. It can only be said that the core of this game is not about sects and sects at all, and it is not popular at all.

The subject matter is okay, but the idea that tens of thousands of lords still need to report to the official is a bit uncomfortable. It is completely different from the power development I want, especially when the Jin Yiwei threatens me to do something during the report, it is even more uncomfortable! After looking at the table of contents of the following chapters, I feel that they are for individual players rather than the development of lords 😒

The size of the Lingtai depends on the heart, and the sect is in the Ming Dynasty. This should not recruit Wang Yangming to the mountain.

The subject matter is good and the content is okay, but I suggest changing the title. The title of the book attracts people who read about the sect's development and farming, but the book focuses on the personal story of the sect leader. If there is a big sense of gap, no one will like to read it. Those who like to read this book will leave when they see the title and cannot be retained at all. Furthermore, there are too many loopholes in this game in the book. When the small loopholes are stacked up, it will either eat up the settings or collapse. What should non-game warehouse players say if they are forced to log out? Since the game allows you to rely on personal understanding to teach disciples without using cheats, then the Green Lotus Sword Technique that the protagonist has practiced for so many years cannot be used and taught to others without being passed down, right? The same goes for player upgrading. If the per capita upgrading speed is faster than the destiny qualifications, the game will not be able to operate for a few years and the player base will be lawless. If the protagonist is a special case, and if players generally upgrade at an average speed, then there is no way to recruit geniuses. If the master's cultivation level is not as high as that of his disciples, who will listen to you? In other words, most players officially start after becoming elite warriors. So how many players spend their energy on this game? In the late game before the protagonist is reborn, are there probably only a few hundred leading players with well-developed sects left playing the game?

The difference between the ordinary mind method and the Guiyuan mind method is not too big. Aren't these two systems, one immortal and one mortal, but the result is that the cultivation speed is slightly faster than others? Don't understand

For ordinary books, most people will probably leave if they don't like it. You're just trying to trick people into coming in, and those who don't like it will be scolded before they leave.

It can be seen that the writing style is still very green, and the outline of the story is clear and clear. It is a dark horse work. I look forward to the growth of the protagonist's sect in the future, and also look forward to the surprise that the author will give us next time 🤓

It's hard to describe the plot of this martial arts competition to find a bride. Are you sure you want to get married, not enmity?

No, you just kidnapped someone and poisoned her to death, and you still talked to someone about accepting that woman as your disciple? Why is it so disgusting? . .

Your sect is too good to be different from others.

Author, I'm not here to watch the adventure, but the development of the sect.

Great subject matter, and the writing is extremely sexy.

Are you building a sect or fighting for hegemony?

It's been more than 200 chapters, and the protagonist hasn't reached level 31 yet. Your level is too damn heavy, isn't it? Did you level up very slowly at the beginning, but then it skyrocketed in a big way?

Although mainstream has become popular recently, this book really shouldn't be classified as mainstream. It's a clique! If classified, it should be classified into a similar game gang. Even in the later stages of founding the country, wouldn't you do NPC tasks?

Let me just say a few words. The author is not good at writing. I didn't read the first chapter carefully. At the beginning, I thought that the protagonist was reborn, and it has been paving the way for the hatred of the previous life. The good guy entered the game and the protagonist found out that he was reborn... In addition, the rebirth and revenge routine is old, but it is good to mention it a little. There is almost no foreshadowing. It is particularly embarrassing to see the top three protagonists having another wave of inner drama. Come on, I talked about asking questions earlier, but with this kind of mentality, I actually passed...

However, the sect upgrade set by the author is really a bit slow. Although there are many upgrade directions in this game setting, becoming the master of a force is the main gameplay. It took more than a month after the server was launched to level up, and it was still among the top players. This really means that the value settings are a bit out of control. If it is a normal game, in fact, if it is a martial arts sect, after completing a few basic buildings, plus the first assigned disciple training, you should upgrade to a level after getting started. In the novel, it should be the first big competition of the protagonist sect, select the top three, and then go up to a level before setting off to find the Qinglian Sword Immortal. If you escape to other types, such as bandits, you should be able to upgrade after the first successful robbery. When it was first established, it was just a grassroots team. When standards are formed, such as for example, all the disciples of the sect are practicing and starting, or how many disciples are practicing and starting, this means that the sect is on the right track. The same is true for bandits' robberies. If you recruit a group of people and successfully rob, you will become a bandit. If you just recruit a group of people who don't do anything serious, it's called a bandit. Only when you officially succeed in robbing can you set a flag. Since the author's game setting is more realistic, this division of power upgrades should also be closer to reality. In the large stage, you can be a cultivator or something with different force levels or development levels, but in the small stage, it is best to be similar to the real self-employed small and micro enterprises, small enterprises, medium-sized enterprises, and large enterprises. This division is more realistic and more reasonable.

Selling dog meat on a sheep's head, but you don't need spiritual roots to cultivate immortality?

The author's writing is good. I liked your last book, which started with the leader... Why was it removed from the shelves?

Are they all so curly?

I remember that I picked up a book by you before. It seemed to be called "The Master's Unlimited Flow". Why can't I find it after I picked it up? I don't see that book on your homepage? Are you giving up that book? Or did that book violate some taboo and was removed from the shelves?

Why did I only see Li Xiaoyao and not Zhao Linger?

No, I can't stand it. After being reborn, I spend all day thinking about life! Speechless! Just a little bit of sect building! Why bother with this Fangcun Mountain? It's not as tiring to watch as an ordinary sect!

Is there another one? The author has finished this book and still has more to say.

The right way is to look at the development of the sect. It is recommended to compress the copy appropriately.

In the past, the advantage of rebirth was not great because the places were different. Now that the map is bigger, the advantage of rebirth can be greater, right?

It's a pity that a good book was criticized so badly and ended so hastily. Throwing out the topics you are struggling with, it looks pretty good in itself.