Konoha Tatsuno

It takes half a year for the 8-year-old Jonin Shisui and the 4-year-old Itachi who has an unknown level to take on three A-level missions. Is this reasonable? No matter how you think about it, it's a weird scene! It's really a headache. How much readers' brains must be consumed to convince themselves to continue reading!

Why do time travelers like to be saviors?

Haha, pig's feet like working for Konoha so much?

The protagonist is so cowardly that he doesn't dare to fight. He doesn't even know what he's practicing. He doesn't practice even though he knows he has no actual combat experience. He doesn't even dare to compete with Kai. What's the use of this protagonist?

There's a reason no one watches it, it's all poison

Golden Chapter 3, read two chapters... It's completely water

Worlds like Naruto and Pirates are suitable for behind-the-scenes, dark, and domination flows.

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This book has heavy traces of the Tsenseigan book.

Almost every chapter is inconsistent.

Seal your own psychic beast directly to the sealing scroll? ? ? Dead space in the scroll? What do you think? . . . .

Author, how do you manage to have obvious bugs in every chapter?

I typed a lot of words that I wanted to complain about, but after thinking about it I decided to forget it. There is a reason why no one read it.

For example, if you have Chuunin strength, you will only expose your Genin strength. If you have Jonin strength, you will only expose your Chunin strength. Only in this way can you live in the ninja world for a long time. Otherwise, when others target you, if your strength is fully exposed, you will be dead. Not every time someone will come to save you. Of course, you are the protagonist and you will not die. Do you know that?

There is a cheat in Konoha. I will not hide my strength. I will expose my full strength and work hard for Konoha. I have the nerve to say that I am a time traveler. Have I been assimilated by the Will of Fire? The Will of Fire sacrificed himself to illuminate the top.

I still want to change the tragedy, but I don't have the strength to change it. Did I just waste it because I thought I was the protagonist and wouldn't die?

I am more worried about whether the biochip will be destroyed by Lei Dun.

Take a look at the novel "Konoha Scientific Transformation of the Ninja World". The protagonist often hides his clumsiness. If he has the strength to defect, he will defect. Who can do anything to him?

I feel like the various abilities of the protagonist have nothing to do with the Akimichi clan, except for the secret technique of butterfly transformation?

This book is almost finished. Most Naruto fanfics are basically unreadable at this stage. This is not the author's fault, the first and middle parts of the book are quite good. If you don't know how to write it down, just finish it quickly. With the current strength of the protagonist, the Akatsuki organization can be ended early, and Uchiha Madara has no chance of resurrection.

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

I didn't want to read it after reading Chapter 58. The protagonist is a special jounin. He has never seen any ninjutsu and has no reputation. The elite jounin Ye Cura bows down to him. Why should he listen to you and follow the protagonist to build his power in Tian Country. . . As long as you have Kage-level strength, forget it, you're just a rookie

It's still watchable, but Danzo's villain design is too brainless.

What I want to see is the development and extension of the Akimichi clan's secret skills. I still like to see the opening up of each family's unique abilities.

If it can crack space, why should Obito be afraid?

The writing is getting worse and worse. I don't dare to take the position of Hokage. There is no hope. I guess this book is not far away from being a success.

More than three hundred chapters and less than fifty comments! There is only one comment for every six chapters, generating electricity for love!

With a biochip, wouldn't the suitable path be mainly about physical arts?

Can even entering a library be restricted? Don't you even learn the basics?