Master of Destiny, Versatile Mage

It's a very interesting article. I can see a good-quality article in Qidian. As long as you fill in the gaps in the later stage, it won't be too bad. However, it will also bring about a problem. Many readers are calling for multiple female protagonists. However, from the direction of your current article, it can be seen that it is the direction of a single female protagonist, and the male protagonist also refused for the single female protagonist. After all the ambiguities, if he starts to accept all kinds of ambiguities from other girls in the later stage, it will make his character collapse and fall from the altar to the bottom. I don't think this article will have more female protagonists because it is published in Qidian, because every girl in Full-Time is very good. Even if Mo Fan pursues his two wives, he has to put all his effort into it.

Are you going to rob the heroine? 🤔 If not, I will chase her.

It's very messy, really messy. The system explained earlier, the girlfriend in the previous life thought it was the protagonist's goal or something like that. After reading more than 70 chapters, it seems that the previous settings have been abandoned directly, and I have no idea what the protagonist is going to do. The scene switching is very stiff, and the author basically writes wherever he thinks. That's it, slipped away.

After reading about 10 chapters, I felt baffled. The scene suddenly changes after a while. Sometimes I always write useless plots. When I saw the second picture, I was a little confused. What the hell was written? At the same time, suddenly the protagonist jumps to another scene. At the same time, do you know what it means? Why, the protagonist has the ability to clone himself? I can only say that the scene change was too abrupt and felt inexplicable.

It's very puzzling. First, what prompted him to fake his death and escape? Second, what is a bee sting? It connects the previous and the lower, but there is no upper, just the lower?

Mo Fan Ye Xinxia

The Eye of Cthulhu specially traveled from the continent of Terra to make a guest appearance in the Evil Temple. Yes, it's me. Eyes of the spectator

The writing is really good. I have a wish. I hope that the author will slow down when the protagonist is at a high level or is super low, and take us to see the forbidden lands that are not mentioned in other original books, and see those extremely powerful emperors. I hope that what we see in the battle for national servers and international competition is not the China that is frequently oppressed. I hope to see that the Holy City and other villain organization countries are also invaded by demons. I hope to see a different France.

As a young mage in the early stage, it seems that there is no one in the world who has not turned around for a while. What a great person you are. You are the first among all the fics I have read to drop out of school on your own initiative, and you only went to school for one semester as a freshman in high school.

Did the author read the original work carefully? Salan is about to be banned from the curse? When Salan was so strong in the ancient capital, he could just kill Han Ji and run away. Why did Mu Zhuo have to use information in exchange for his escape? Can the Pope of the Black Vatican control the emperor? Isn't the Pope of the Black Vatican now the Mother of the Palace? When did she become so awesome? Authors can create a second setting for a fanfic, but they must also consider the development of the plot in their second setting. Many plots will not hold up after the second setting.

Wu Liang

I can only say that it's really good. It's a full-time book with a lot of brains. The last book I read was the full-time summoner.

After reading dozens of chapters, I feel that the author's writing is quite good, and I'm not too embarrassed. I just don't understand it. (I read it in junior high school. I saw One Thousand Seventy-Eight at the time, and then stopped watching it, and I didn't watch the ending.) I don't know if there are some plots that I just didn't watch, and I don't know what I was doing. Come on, author

666. The protagonist actually has no magic system and needs system rewards to awaken.,,,,,