After Rebirth, He Lives with the Queen Who Has Passed Away

It's a little bit less, it looks good, please update, little brother

Generally speaking, there is nothing bad about it, but there is a feeling that it is unbearable. It feels very tasteless and a pity to abandon it. What about the character of the protagonist? It doesn't look like a 28-year-old should look like, it is completely like a junior high school student. The female protagonist is okay so far. Some of the twisted plots are completely caused by the immaturity of the protagonist.

Why is there no smart push anymore? ? ? 🙂

I didn't understand the first chapter. . . . . . First of all, a little star and a has-been queen are two different concepts. Secondly, the landlord is driving away the tenants with a suitcase? Your landlord is a starlet but not a flight attendant. Finally, the landlord made an agreement with a tenant who wants to move out immediately? ? What's the logic? ? He said he didn't understand! !

It's still a bit hard to read after jumping from chapter 70 to 80 to about 100 chapters. Did the author intend to write it as a romance?

The first part was fine, but the second part turned into the rhythm of a romance novel

I really can't bear it anymore. Author, are you planning to keep the pig's feet in the hospital? See for yourself how many chapters you spent during the hospital stay? What do you want to say?

The writing is very detailed, but the pace feels a bit off and a bit draggy. Let the author rewrite the romance.