Recruit Black Physique and Practice in the Wasteland at the Beginning

I have read more than 400 chapters. So far, I feel that the author's writing style is okay and the subject matter is okay, but the pace is very slow, wordy, and there are a lot of unnecessary psychological descriptions.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           both each other each map all over the map. In terms of roles, there are too many supporting characters that don't matter, and this book is not a group drama, it is the same: a weak person, a strong person, both trust Pig's Foot, and Pig's Foot also trusts them, and then they die or suffer miserably when the map is about to change, and then another 2-3 people are replaced. When all the supporting characters appeared, a lot of pen and ink and psychological descriptions were given (it felt like a lot of them were nonsense, the number of words was low) and then they suddenly disappeared... It was very abrupt. As a reader, I have just had an image and emotion for a supporting character. In addition, the author gives the illusion of a lot of writing. Frequent substitutions are very tiring, and it is difficult to resonate and invest. From the plot point of view, I feel that the author wants to create a contradictory mental illness, which is both decisive and hypocritical, kind and ruthless, etc. In order to make the contradictory behaviors of the pig's trotters seem reasonable, the author used a lot of psychological activities to describe the pig's trotters, and it felt that it was not enough. He also added minor supporting characters, passers-by A, B, C, and D. The plot that could be described in one chapter or even one page had to be told in 3-5 chapters. To be honest, it's okay to waste money. Which author wouldn't be a little more qualified? It's just a good job, not a shabby one, but don't take the readers for granted, and the key is that the readers' enthusiasm for reading is also wasted. Also, the author's description of the battle scenes is very average, and the description of the climax of the plot is a bit poor. There are also a lot of forced demotions and logical confusion in order to fit the character's character. In terms of combat power, or rank, it went from ordinary people to A level very quickly, and then stopped. After changing two maps, there was no sign of promotion at all. Pig's feet can kill A level at B level, A level and B level (pretending to be a map-length B level), and then it can kill to the highest level. So what's the point of the vest in front (mainly because the authors of these two maps show that the pig's feet's combat power has not changed much). Also, when Pig's Feet had not obtained the Turtle Breath Kung Fu before, other A-levels couldn't see it? There are some other suggestions, so I won't describe them one by one. I hope the author can get better and better, so I'll give them up now because I can't stand them anymore.

According to what I have read, I can divide this book into three stages. The first stage is when the pioneer group is on Raf Star, the second stage is when the pioneer group is on Raf Star, and the third stage is when it is on Hope Star. To be honest, the first stage and the second stage are really well written, with a tight rhythm and exciting content. I can't stop reading it, impeccable, and the level climb is also very fast. But in the third stage, when I first arrived at Hope Star, The dozens of chapters were okay, but after I went to the library, it was so dull. I just remember a slight climax, killing a Supreme, and then running to Planet 4. Then I couldn't stand it anymore. I skipped through reading, and sometimes I couldn't see the name of the protagonist in one or two chapters. And the protagonist's level was not the same as the level of the garbage star. Wherever I looked, it was still the same level, although there were some added skills and so on.

Chen Fengxiao is an old author with rich writing experience, so I won't say much else. I hope that the author can take some time to exercise every day to ensure good health and sufficient energy every day to write more and better books for everyone. As for praising the author for being so handsome, is that unnecessary? We have been able to feed the whole world for 500 years with handsome electricity, so why do we need bicycles? So, here is a simple wish for the author. I wish the author great happiness in his family and a good harvest in love and career! Everyone loves her when she sees her, she loves her when she drives, she loves her when she has a flat tire, Lolita loves her royal sister, she loves the girl next door, and the CEO loves the policewoman and her charming sister! Wen Si is like a diabetic insipidus, who can compete with you! The body is in great shape, and the food tastes delicious; The love fortune is constant, and the waist does not hurt after working all night; There is no need to hold on to the wall when going out, and everything you want is available; The children are all elites, and they will come to the official without any trouble; When I go out, I always pick up money, and I will form good relationships with casual advice. In a word, I wish the author all the best and a happy marriage! 😁🤭🌹🌹🌹🌹

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Long live your understanding. I just want to communicate with the author. You can write for as long as you want. The reader must have the desire to continue reading. Using the author's wild imagination is what motivates me to support you.

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I accidentally opened a new book, congratulations to Feng Xiao~ on the ❤️ book! After I finish reading the previous book, I guess this one will also be very fat, hahaha... I recommend and vote every day, and I will work hard~~🦆

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I finished it in one day and would like to share my thoughts after reading it. This book was pretty good before the canyon appeared, but I felt that the level of the story was still going downhill until the canyon appeared. The Hongzi chapter was the most eye-catching, highlighting the feeling of the wasteland and the growth of the protagonist. Everything was fine when we got to Zhou, I felt that it was not much different from Hong's level. It started to speed up when I got to the sky, and the world background suddenly jumped to the modern style. The feeling of the wasteland was almost gone. Finally, when I arrived at Central City, I couldn't stop the accelerator. In order to adapt to the map, the protagonist's cultivation level began to passively increase rapidly. Now I had to open the canyon map again, and I felt like there was another sharp increase in combat power. On the collapsing road, I couldn't stop the accelerator. Personally, it might be better not to write this book in such a hurry. Each map can give the protagonist more time to grow, experience and story. The map level is getting higher and higher, and the enemy level is getting higher and higher. Let the protagonist actively adapt and improve, instead of suddenly throwing the protagonist into an advanced map, and then find that it is impossible to play without raising the protagonist's level. The protagonist's strength can only be passively improved by leaps and bounds, which is really easy to collapse. In fact, the initial dual development of immortality and science and technology was also a way to alleviate the collapse of combat power. The protagonist also had the identity of a mechanic. When his own cultivation was not enough, he engaged in scientific research and relied on technology. Using foreign objects to improve combat power, pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger is also a way of writing, but After actually writing it, I feel that it is only useful for cultivating immortals, and the role of the mechanic has been downplayed into a money-making tool, which is quite a pity. In fact, if the two lines are taken together, more stories can be written, and the rhythm can be controlled to avoid the collapse of the battle force, but it is a pity not to do it. But now I really feel that I have fallen into the data flow. Qi nourishment 1-9, Qi refining 1-9, foundation building 1-9, and probably the golden elixir 1-9 and the like, and the combat power is SABCDEFG. There will be some new map behind the canyon, otherwise I will not be able to fight against the Lord. The realm behind the corner, I personally feel that it is really starting to collapse at this moment. I don't know if the brakes can still be applied. The taboo in the upgrade flow is not to assign enemies that the protagonist cannot deal with and must deal with immediately, so that he is forced to upgrade quickly. Once he embarks on this road, it will collapse. It's really not possible to arrange for the protagonist to go back to the big mountain in Novice Village to fight alien beasts for a few years, but it will be fine.

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I started reading Feng Xiao's books from Guan Xian. When I was writing about Guan Xian, Feng Xiao was still very gregarious and very friendly to readers. When I was writing about Guan Xian's prequel, Feng Xiao became inflated. He couldn't listen to the readers anymore. He was so bold and rushed to sell the copyright. No matter what the readers said, he insisted on going his own way and went up high. As a result, he failed. This book is much better than the prequel of Guan Xian, but the character after the expansion cannot be changed. This can be seen in the writing style.

After reading more than 30 chapters, I feel that the level is average. The reason for such good results should be due to the veteran author. The main poisonous point is the protagonist's fear of joining forces and self-righteousness, especially since the protagonist was a financial giant in his previous life. As a person struggling on the line of life and death, if you have the ability, what reason is there not to join some forces to get a better life? Worried about "eating everything and wiping it clean". As a group, we instinctively protect those who can bring benefits to the group. If the protagonist can really bring benefits to the collective, whether it is the support of the upper class or the support of the lower class, the protagonist will always be able to exert his abilities in a safe and stable situation. Because if a person who can bring benefits to the collective cannot be stable, the collective will not survive. As for whether joining a certain force can improve living standards. There is no doubt that it is possible, because dispersed individuals can be bullied, and the collective can do more. All in all, the protagonist's behavior is completely unworthy of the context. I am too lazy to write down the minor points.

I secretly think that the two works are somewhat related, but the degree of connection is quite weak. Please see the following analysis: 1. Qu Jianlei In "Big Data", Qu Jianlei is a supporting character with quite a personality. , When he appeared, he was already a 420-year-old white-headed old man. He served as an honorary guest minister in the Chifeng Sect of the Kunhao Plane under the Tianqin Plane that Feng Jun traveled to through his mobile phone. He emerged from the ninth level of cultivation and had the experience of failure in attacking Baodian. Later, with the help of Feng Jun's deduction and the blessing of Tian Xiang Guo, he successfully entered the Dan Bao stage. In "Tricks", the protagonist Qu Jianlei travels from the modern earth and an artificial intelligence lake soul to an eight or nine-year-old orphan on a garbage planet, and begins to rise from the garbage planet. In this wasteland world, the earth is part of a prehistoric civilization that has died. As of the writing of the latest chapter of the work, Qu Jianlei has already reached the golden elixir stage in his early forties. Except for the fact that their surnames and first names are exactly the same, there is almost no connection between the two Qu Jianlei. One song must be different from the other. 2. Earth/Blue Star In "Big Data", when the supporting character Qu Jianlei and the protagonist Feng Jun met, from Feng Jun's perspective, although the earth's aura was gradually exhausted, it did not die. It had gradually transformed into a technological civilization. Later, with Feng Jun's help, it gradually moved towards the road of aura recovery. In "Recruiting the Black", the protagonist Qu Jianlei traveled from the prehistoric earth relative to the wasteland world. In the time and space of this wasteland world, the earth/Blue Star has long since perished, and the Blue Star Chinese characters have become historical materials for people to study. Some people think that Blue Star and the Earth are not the same thing. Regarding this, the fragments of Blue Star's "Three Character Classic" stolen from Gubenlou by the Tufuzi organization can help explain this. The earth appears in both books. If there is a certain connection between "Big Data" and "Into the Dark", this is probably one of the rare supporting points. 3. Division of realms of cultivation "Big Data" Earth planes: Qi nourishing period, Qi refining period, foundation building period, golden elixir period, Nascent Soul period, out-of-body period, distraction period, integration period, tribulation period, Mahayana period "Big Data" Mobile phone plane: Mortal transformation stage, Qi refining stage, coming out of the dust stage, elixir holding stage, infant condensation stage, out of body stage, distraction stage, integration stage, tribulation period, Mahayana stage "Zhao Hei" has disappeared. Earth plane: Qi nourishing stage, Qi refining stage, foundation building stage, golden elixir stage, Nascent Soul stage. . . The wasteland world of "Recruiting Evil": C-level ultimate warrior, B-level ultimate warrior, A-level ultimate warrior, supreme warrior, and supreme above. . . The division of cultivation realms between the two planes in "Big Data" only differs in some names, but is completely consistent in the cultivation structure and direction; while the two planes in "The Black Man" have obvious differences both in the cultivation structure and the direction of cultivation. 4. The five-element attribute superpower training system of the two worlds "Big Data" The five-element attribute superpower training system of the Zerg world and the human race: After the Xuanhuang Sect and Yuangang Sect took the lead in opening up the Zerg world, the cultivators of the Tianqin plane came into contact with the high-tech civilization of the human federation that was fighting against the Zerg. Considering that they are both human beings, in order to enhance their strength, led by Feng Jun's deduction and gathering the strength of the big guys in the plane, the Tianqin cultivators made certain deletions on the basis of their own cultivation system, and designed a five-element attribute superpower cultivation system specifically for the Human Federation. This cultivation system can be practiced in the environment where there is no spiritual energy in the Zerg world, by developing the attribute Qi sea and practicing based on it. In addition to metal, wood, water, fire, and earth, this system also includes mutant powers such as light, darkness, wind, and thunder. There is no doubt that due to the above reasons, this system has clear roots and inheritance. The Wasteland World Empire's Five Elements Attribute Superpower Cultivation System: During the excavation of some pre-apocalyptic ancient ruins, the Empire discovered the remaining writings of the Blue Star Chinese Civilization, which the Empire called "divine writings". The imperial power training system is a training system with metal, wood, water, fire, and earth as its main attributes, based on the current level of science and technology, through the study of these sacred texts that are of great research value. Of course, in addition to the five major attributes, the cultivation system also includes various mutant attributes such as light, darkness, wind, thunder, ice, stone, electromagnetism, and spirit. As mentioned in the previous article, the earth where Feng Jun is located and the wasteland world of "Recruiting the Black" are by no means in the same time and space. The empire in the wasteland world only got some inspiration while studying the divine inscriptions and started the cultivation mode on its own. Although the empire did learn the cultivation theories of Blue Star China's cultivation civilization and benefited from it, due to the unknown number of years between them, the empire's cultivators cannot be regarded as the successors of Blue Star China's cultivation civilization in the strict sense. Furthermore, if the empire's five-element attribute power cultivation system was passed down from the human federation in the Zerg world of Feng Jun's mobile phone through time and space, then they should know the existence of cultivators, and its five-element attribute power cultivation system should not be as full of flaws as it is now. In any case, although these two five-element superpower cultivation systems have very different origins, they are very consistent in system structure and cultivation direction. They can be said to have reached the same goal through different paths. 5. Aura "Big Data" There is no aura in the time and space where the Zerg World and the Human Federation are located. Therefore, Feng Jun and others have specifically designed a five-element attribute superpower system that can be practiced in an environment without aura. "The Darkness" There is some free spiritual energy in the wasteland world, and there is even a lot of spiritual energy in the Sky Hook Mansion. The Empire is also aware of the existence of spiritual energy, calling it "alien energy." After Qu Jianlei transformed the Qi Gathering Array into the Spirit Gathering Array, he could gather spiritual energy through the formation for cultivation.

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I have saved more than two hundred chapters, and when I came in, the opening scene was lightning strike, and the character list was only Youyou. I had already read it as the heroine, so I just gave it away? Tell me that I can't accept it. I won't say anything if you gave away Flower Scorpion. After all, I don't even deserve to have a character sheet for so long. I still can't accept it because I have been left out for so long. I really want to criticize the author, but it has been so long and it doesn't help. I can only give up.

🙃…It's boring, but the early stage is more attractive.

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The 18-year-old boy is about to set sail again 🌹🌹🌹 About the work: Before time travel, he thought that man could conquer nature and that he could change the environment and class through his own efforts. After traveling through time, I realized that some things are born with us and cannot be changed no matter how hard we try. In the cage-like Proton Mansion, your position is destined, so you can only work hard to change your destiny! The long road ahead is full of involuntary journeys, hence the title of the book "Reverse Journey". He no longer insists on "rewriting everything with hard work alone", and learns to follow the trend and use force to break the situation. In the whirlpool of disputes between countries, he breaks free from the fate of the proton chess pieces, tears away the shackles of blood and position, and finds his own path to survival against the odds, stirring up the world. Core highlights of the work 1. The core of reality: Breaking the idealized perception of "efforts are all-powerful", discussing the limitations of family background and innate pattern on life, the background of the plot is realistic, which fits Chen Fengxiao's usual description of sophistication and interest games; ​ 2. The main plot of Proton's plot: the whole process revolves around the courts and diplomatic calculations of various countries, and there is no brainlessness. Cheating relies on the protagonist's mind and layout ability to break the situation, and the main focus is on wits; ​ 3. Growth contrast: From the ordinary people who believed in the omnipotence of struggle in the previous life, to the protons in the troubled times who recognize reality and adapt to survive, the character's mental state changes are full; ​ 4. World view: a classical overhead background of nations competing for hegemony, integrating palace intrigues, secret wars in diplomatic relations, and the undercurrent of the struggle of noble clans.

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I highly recommend this book. The Doomsday Wasteland is so exciting.

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