Douluo Dalu: My Martial Soul Is a Simulator

I wasn't planning to read this novel at first, but later I discovered that it has a lot of the legacy of Wei Wu and the Prime Minister's legacy. Then I watched and read it, and I was very happy; so I read it quickly, and I couldn't calm down for a long time after reading it. I complain that the content lacks details, the article has too few words, and the update speed is too slow. I have this resentment in my heart, and it is hard to forget, so I made this post to express my feelings and give feedback to the author on the big mistakes in his article, which are the slow update and the small number of words.

Anxiously waiting for Tang San to travel through time and be entangled by the protagonist's daughter Blue Silver Grass😁

This author is really invincible when it comes to Douluo fan fiction. I've read every one of them. I hope the later ones won't be too unfinished.

How can I put it this way? The plot of the main character who is not careful is even more uncomfortable than the original one. It feels like his true nature has been exposed. The feeling of the male protagonist in various pornographic novels makes even the top master of the simulator look like a wretched one. The image of the protagonist still needs to be paid attention to. Let me talk about the novel that I am reading now. Said, although there are only three worlds in the world, the first Hong Kong TV series has written a lot, the second martial arts movie ended too quickly and was not enjoyable, and the third one started with the zombies of the Republic of China. I don't know if they will jump at the beginning. The protagonists are crazy people who do whatever they want, and they drive a car to show off. As a policeman in the world, he resisted drugs and ghosts resolutely and made no mistakes at all. Even though he could do whatever he wanted with his hands and drive without a bottom line, his image of a good person stood firm. The author was too attentive to do this, and the character image was biased. Moreover, the various evil scenes similar to those in the original story really ruined the character, just like the original author of Douluo. Each character is more disgusting than the last, because the protagonist has double standards and no bottom line. The protagonist's image is really important. I can't say how this book will be, but I will still care about the protagonist's image sincerely. Even if the protagonist is a villain, there should be a bottom line. Just like drug trafficking, you must not do it. Don't write the protagonist as the male protagonist of a villainous novel. It is really not good. How should I put it? The author's personality should still be suitable for writing gentle protagonists like Blue Silver Grass and Guardian Spirit. If you force the protagonist to have a kidney transplant, I feel like you can't write it.

Don't end up with an anticlimax. Every time you have a good idea, but in the middle, you start to waste the plot and accept women. You wish you could take all the female characters that appeared in the original work, and then end it hastily. Author, I hope you will not let down your awesome ideas and stunning opening. I support multiple female protagonists, who is not an LSP anymore, but don't just accept women when you see them, just pick a few. The female protagonist will not be stereotyped, and the quality of the book will not seriously decline. As long as you don't write emotional dramas for those female characters you don't accept, will anyone still say you can't give them away? Some are also good at leveraging

After reading Chapter 16, I really can't stand it. There were a lot of bad points before, so I just have to bear with it. But you describe Bibi Dong like a green tea and double-standard bitch. I really can't stand it. The protagonist will also say domineeringly from time to time, saying that you are too big, and you will get annoyed casually, which makes me angry. For this kind of trivial article, you have to subscribe to 50 or 60 chapters before you can post a comment. I don't want others to comment. You are really good at it. After reading more than a dozen chapters, you can't stand it anymore. Those who subscribed before are just like feeding dogs.

I don't want to read it. It's completely forcibly balancing the strengths of both sides. Tang Hao has lost one hundred thousand year soul ring and you give him another one. The protagonist is of no use. Haotian Sect has not paid any price. The price paid in the original work is not at all. It is just to strengthen Tang San to write a few more words. It's boring.

Just to make a few suggestions, I have read several of the books you have written. Let's just say that you can't just do Sesse Cao Thief, you have to add some other content. Do you still remember the book where your protagonist's martial spirit was a gold coin? What I feel is the best part of this book is the imagination, the interpretation and application of the Douluo system, the thunder and lightning body forging, the self-created soul skills, and the fixed soul power circuit of the soul ring and soul bone that you didn't fill up the hole in the ending. The second book uses blue and silver grass leaves as hidden weapons, which is a good idea, but the advantages are not reflected at all. The writing in the middle is dry, and half of the people ran away. At the end, it is all the second generation of the Secret Chamber Douluo who hangs those people up. Once his patience is exhausted, he naturally stops reading. In this book so far, to be honest, I don't see any creativity or imagination at all. It's all about the thieves. You can see the change in popularity just by looking at the results of your books. So just driving is a dead end, adding some creativity and imagination or anything else is the best.

To tell a joke, the poison on the spider legs of Bibi Dong's Death Spider Emperor is not fatal, it only has a paralyzing effect

Since Tang San's martial spirit only has the tip of the soul-breaking gun, and he also likes to play darts, then give him a sunflower spirit beast and turn it into a real dart directly, and don't evolve into a soul-breaking gun.