Starting from Hong Kong, Wandering Around the World

The protagonist of this book is simply a teddy. Anyone who is a female would want to fight with her.

The writing gets worse and worse. I mentioned earlier that I have seen Dead Date and I remember the general plot! But A Ping doesn't remember part of it, and Miao Shan doesn't remember part of it. You're better off wearing your uncle's clothes! I, an ordinary person, remember it, but you, a cultivator, don't remember it? Do you have Alzheimer's disease? I still want to accept Wang Zhenzhen and Ma Xiaoling together. Do you think the plot characters are all fools? Anyone who has ever seen a dead date knows that if you fall in love with one of them, the other one will take the initiative to quit! You have a harem for the sake of a harem. Then you might as well write about Little Emperor Uncle, who is either starting to work or on the way to work.

Dead Date can be viewed as science fiction The Book of Heaven is a supercomputer that can predict and intervene in the future, and destiny is the artificial intelligence of that computer. It is normal for artificial intelligence to have problems. The problem with destiny is that it wants to create perfect humans, so it guides multiple destructions and creations. Until it created the human beings it thought were perfect in the last calamity, but because of its perfect ability, it failed to predict fate and created a group of super genetic warriors named Pangu who were not controlled by fate. So destiny intends to destroy the world and reshape it. A small number of perfect humans escaped into a spaceship called the Eternal Kingdom that Destiny could not observe, leaving the Pangu clan to destroy Destiny. Destiny cannot interfere with the Pangu clan, and the Pangu clan cannot eliminate the incorporeal fate. Therefore, the Pangu clan set a fate that they could not refuse. Created a body that can perfectly use the power of the Heavenly Book and move freely. Once destiny enters the body of Our Lady of Yaochi, it will be locked and unable to leave. At that time, as long as the body of Our Lady of Yaochi is destroyed, destiny can be eliminated. The Pangu clan first sent their strongest warriors and generals to protect and monitor Nuwa to seduce fate, and then Fuxi, who was sent to control Pangu's bow and arrow, guided Nuwa to create humans. Finally, the Madonna of Yaochi who attracts fate is introduced. Fate did not take action. Pangu also arranged for Fuxi and Our Lady of Yaochi to fall in love, misunderstand, and break up until they had a fight and fate did not make any move. There is no other choice but to seal the Holy Mother of Yaochi first, and then make the next plan. First, he killed the strongest warriors and generals, destroyed Pangu's bows and arrows, and then let the Madonna of Yaochi destroy the Pangu clan. Finally, the Madonna of Yaochi and Fuxi died together, and fate appeared to take over the body. As super genetic warriors, it is normal for the Pangu clan to have abilities such as immortality, super self-healing, different superpowers, fasting, and the ability to create super warriors of a lower level. The low-level warriors created are genetically imperfect, so they attack the same kind and absorb blood to replenish themselves due to the genetic desire to be perfect. Sucking blood is not for food, but the desire that arises when genes want to be completed.

To write about a deadlock is to seek death, and deadlock itself has its own problems. It is said to be a fantasy, and it is said to be a reversal of time and space. In the end, the director created an alien spaceship and called it the eternal kingdom! The director himself has lost everything after pulling it back and forth, so what can you write?

In the first chapter, he was successfully persuaded to quit. The skill of photographic memory was actually said to be useless. This is how stupid and lazy people would think like this.

Ghost Aping wants to kill you, and her mother wants to kill you too, and you still lick your face to help him reincarnate. Don't you have a temper? What's his relationship with you? Oh, yes, he likes your girlfriend, and you are so good to her, you might as well give Zhenzhen to him and rename the book "Good People in the World"

The combat power system of this book seems to be a joke. The author is constantly increasing the combat power of the main plane without any bottom line (several cultivation levels mentioned in this book: Qi training - Tianren - Shenqiao - Zifu - Sendai). He was able to subdue Fa Hai who was in the Heavenly Human Stage for a short period of time, and later said that he had to reach the Sendai Stage before he could compete with the five-color divine envoy. Are you kidding me? Are you adding fertilizer to the stalemate combat power system? According to what you wrote, the protagonist in the Qi Training Stage mentioned above can fight Bai Xinmei a few times, and Bai Xinmei is still in an angry state. He is afraid that someone else will kill him with a fart.

Everyone is like a dragon. What fool thought this? . . It's embarrassing and speechless that each author is so admired😓. What is the difference between everyone practicing and everyone owning a rifle? Isn't it the American template? . .

The stallion article under the guise of a deadlock is actually full of obscene meanings. Retired.

Author, if you want to have a harem, just write pornographic stories. Don't do it in serious novels. The protagonist is like a teddy who wants to have sex with a girl when he sees her.

Teddy male protagonists have long ceased to be popular. They were uneducated in the past, but later on their standards improved. Stallions no longer feel good, but on the contrary, they are disgusting. It's really vulgar to want to have sex with someone you meet.

The copy of Green Snake was really poorly written. I even drove the car and thought I could win the White Snake. The Green Snake double kill turned out that Green Snake fell in love with Fa Hai inexplicably and the protagonist had no sense of participation in the whole process. He finally rose up at the end and was killed when he returned to the main world. Flood dragons flooded the golden mountains and killed countless people. In the end, Fahai became a Buddha. The dragons were imprisoned for a hundred years and then reunited with their wives and children. Only countless people's homes were destroyed.

The real body enters the dungeon, but the cultivation level has gone back again. It's boring.

I'm really convinced, the protagonist clearly knows about the general, the human king, and Yao Chi (Chapter 140). You want to guess who will destroy the world? Does this pig's foot know the plot of the dead date? If you don't know, don't write that the protagonist knows who the characters are. Sometimes the protagonist knows the plot, and sometimes it's like he doesn't understand anything. I was really confused when I saw it.

Author, use your strengths and avoid your weaknesses. Just feel comfortable. Don't show off your culture, okay? You can say that your poem that persuades people to stay away from women is an obscene poem (The beautiful body of the twenty-eight-year-old woman is like a brittle body, and she kills ordinary people with a sword at her waist. Although no head is seen, secretly she teaches you that her bones are dry. How do you know that this poem is an obscene poem?), With your language skills, you write about the ancient world, promise me, you will definitely show your "poetry" level?

To be honest, the writing is okay, but the setting is a bit ridiculous. Fa Haixiu's Happy Zen, pig's feet must also be practiced, and then open a harem everywhere. It feels a bit like the author is writing a pornographic novel that he likes. The heroines of several worlds have various love ideas, and they may not look like them, but they can basically be obtained by teasing the pig's feet. Alas, I really can't stand it after reading Chapter 76. I'm out of the trap. The poison test is over. If you like YY and harem stories and don't worry about the rationality of the setting, you can join the trap. It's over.

The Green Snake Scroll is a bit poisonous. Xiao Qing was given to her in vain at the beginning, and it was ambiguous. The protagonist's LSP turned out to be a gentleman immediately (the character is contradictory), and then arranged a plot of Fa Hai kidnapping Xiao Qing, and then falling in love with Fa Hai. In the end, Fa Hai abandoned Xiao Qing, but it poisoned the readers. It is better to stop practicing in the beginning, and finally fight against Fa Hai's evil dragon, which is better than this plot.

After writing the stalemate, I suggested that we come to the Eternal Kingdom spaceship of the Pangu tribe in the world of super seminary technology. After connecting to the three systems, come on, the author will write a few million words

The first or second picture clearly stated that the protagonist has watched Deadline, and has watched all three of them. However, later on, the protagonist does not know about the Five-Colored Messenger or the Ma Family Curse. He only knows Kuang Tianyou, Ma Xiaoling, and Wang Zhenzhen, and does not know anything else.

I saw Chapter 40, what kind of garbage protagonist, abandons his wife who just gave birth to a child and ran away?

This is a book that you can't even read with any brain. The main reason is that the copy is too bad. I suggest the author cut it off. The main reason why people don't want to read the whole book is the writing style. Secondly, the first copy is too terrible and the plot is too suspended. The most ridiculous thing is that the Buddha has come out and the Antarctic Immortal has also come out, but it is impossible to tell that the protagonist has traveled through time. It is simply outrageous. I saw the final boss in the first dungeon, but it was no match for the plug-in. There was no logic left in the entire book. It was rare for it to be bullshit to this extent.

After seeing the latest chapter, let me share my personal opinion. I personally like dead dates, especially the first and second series. I have read most of the fics in Qidian. Com. Although there may be loopholes in the original plot, the idea of ​​a sequel may not have been considered at the beginning. But you have to admit that this is a good childhood drama, and it was very imaginative for that era. Talking about this book, the author should have an outline. For example, drawing the photographic memory first is a foreshadowing for White Snake to learn skills later. Including that my current major practice is Huanxi Zen, which in my opinion is the entry point for having relationships with various heroines. For practicing Qigong, don't shiver. Moreover, it does not blindly copy the original work, but has its own designed plots, such as tigers, Taoist priests and so on. At least the first copy looks okay!

Do you know how many nests of snake eggs a female snake will lay before she becomes a spirit? I feel sick just thinking about it. I absolutely support heaven's rule against shemales having sex with men. I just want to ask if there are no more women? So disgusting.

The timeline of the dead date is so confusing that the author even said that he had watched several dead dates. The first time the world was destroyed must have been in 1999. As a big boss, Yamamoto would not care about the life and death of anyone except his daughter. His subordinates were his subordinates. The bond between Kuang Tianyou and Ma Xiaoling is fatalistic. Pig's feet can poach people, but it cannot be written that Kuang and Ma have no intersection. It's okay to mess up Hong Kong dramas, but the timeline can't be messed up. I'm very confused when I see the current timeline.

If you take Taoist things, you will leave them as gifts, and if you dare to take Buddhist things casually, are you not afraid of karma? !

Can you still use Taoism to become a zombie? You created an era

This novel has the flavor of praising Buddha and restraining Taoism! The practice is based on the Buddha as the main way and as a supplement. In the first world, Tathagata appears to whiten the sea of ​​Dharma. In the second world, the Taoist underworld is described as being extremely evil.

It feels like the protagonist has never seen Dead Date and the plot is unclear.

It's too dramatic. The dialogue between the characters in Dead Date is the same as that of a gangster. By the way, has the author seen Dead Date?

The title of the book, "Hong Kong TV Series", is actually completely irrelevant. The Hong Kong TV Series is devastating at the beginning?