Become Invincible from Konoha's Stall

Aren't bullets priced in hundreds of millions? (Funny)

Can you unify the names of Konoha White Fang? Now Hatake Soshige, now Hatake Sakumo, Hatake Sagumo... Although there is nothing wrong with these three names, it is a big problem for your work to have three names appearing in one chapter at the same time.

The timeline is messy. It starts with Konoha 40 years ago, Kakashi is 3 years old, and it is said that World War II ended 3 years ago. Let me give you some clues Naruto was born in 1948. Judging from Kakashi's age, the three wars lasted 3 to 5 years, which means that the third war started in about 43 years, and the middle years of the second and third wars were about 10 years. Three years after the end of the second world war, it should be Konoha 36 years, and Kakashi should have just been born at this time.

To be funny, you also need basic logic! For example: Ice Escape is wind and water, but the protagonist has no wind attribute. For example, Konoha Gate God, and Kakashi's generation. I really can't stand it with a little bit of obsessive-compulsive disorder.

I don't understand why you can't just fight Danzo if you can defeat White Fang and Minato? Why was White Fang disabled?

It feels like this hang has no sense of existence. Shouldn't we just go out and do business, and then cheat? I wrote about cheating, and then I went to explore the world by myself. The inexplicable original characters all have a good relationship with you. It feels a little weird.

So many 30,000 yuan,,,

Except for the third generation and the Nabekage family, all other families in Konoha began to reduce their numbers after the third generation came to power! Including the so-called three major families, and the fourth generation and White Fang! It is obviously the final counterattack of these families and the small families! And it is obvious that after the two of them, Konoha will not allow geniuses to appear (Moonlight can prove it, a little genius)! ! This is to pave the way for his son and grandson! Who would have thought that Orochimaru and Akatsuki gave him a hard blow, but fortunately Naruto was deceived and became lame (not necessarily other gods, otherwise I really don't understand! Who can be so hurt and still be so sunny)

The heroine is Tsunade. Yeah? Author.

Get up quickly. It's time to update. It's time to learn magic.

I'm so speechless. With such a useful plug-in, I can dive invisibly for 3 years and emerge invincible. However, the protagonist always has to deal with plot characters and gets himself into a lot of trouble. The biggest drawback is that the protagonist tries to commit suicide many times, always putting himself in danger. It gives the impression that the protagonist is completely brainless.

The author has always been suspected of writing watermarks. Zhang Zhang opened the system panel data but couldn't even afford it. Hhh!

Have you accumulated enough trillions of bullets to hit Kaguya?

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I've read about seven chapters so far, and I finally found something weird! The character dialogue and Danzo's tone don't quite fit his character! The content is somewhat boring. If you say it is not well written, the thinking is okay. If it is well written, the rhythm is not good. Overall, it's okay to watch, but not for me. Come on author

The dialogue between the characters and the inner activities of the protagonist are a bit too naive. It seems that there is a serious sense of separation and the character's personality is not well grasped. Who is Danzo? How could he use you and not give you the Seal of Disaster...

I have an idea. Based on the characteristics of the protagonist Goldfinger, we should first contract with those capable ninjas who are quick and cool, such as White Fang, Minato, and Xin Jiuna. I just deleted them later.

Do you want to trade Ninjutsu? You can learn it by building a good relationship! What ninjutsu can't be learned if I change my Sharingan?

No, you can cripple White Fang, but you can't kill Guanying directly? In order to prevent White Fang from committing suicide, why did he beat White Fang into a cripple first? ? ?

When I got the Earth Reincarnation, I just wanted to recruit people to fight. The people I recruited didn't have the peak strength of my predecessor, so I couldn't recruit people to teach the other party the ninjutsu. The second Hokage's forbidden jutsu, simplified water escape, Raikage's thunder escape, Tsuchikage's secret earth escape, sand shadow's magnetic escape, just recruit it and let the other party teach it. 🐶

Are you writing about Naruto if you haven't watched it?

Ah, I have never watched Naruto, but I have checked the information and dare to write.

Why is there a stick-spoken language in Chapter 2?

The daily routine written by this author is quite interesting, but he can't grasp the key points and always makes some small problems. He has exchanged a lot of ninjutsu in the past, what's the use? The upper limit of blue mana is not high in the early stage. It is enough to have a powerful ninjutsu to kill people in battle. The important thing is to seize the opportunity to use the ultimate kill during the battle. Moreover, the protagonist said that he must hold on, but in the end he wasted so many exchange points on the ninjutsu. It's boring to use them all in one battle, but if you keep them all, you can exchange them for the Boundary Wood Escape (if you average 300 points per day for four months, the author priced the Wood Escape at 19,000). The most important thing is to learn the immortal mode inexplicably? The premise of Sage Mode is that you have a lot of chakra to learn it. Sage Mode does not increase the upper limit of chakra (1:1:1), but increases the power of the technique, so there is no point in learning chakra mode in the early stage. In the middle and late stages, you can trade it directly, and it also eliminates the risk of death if you fail to learn Sage Mode. In the end, it is too watery. Let's not talk about the system data. I killed a few dragon routines and the armor was lost for six chapters.

After reading Chapter 17, the plot is not attractive.

Toxic, highly recommended, guaranteed not to survive 20 cards