My Information Life of Cultivating Immortality

The author's writing is quite good and quite relaxed, but some details are not handled well, but that's not a big deal. I have only read a dozen chapters so far and found several problems. First of all, it is the setting. The realm setting is very classic and very basic. Needless to say, this setting is also good. The second setting is the plot. The author should be a novice who has just written a book. It is a taboo to revise the published plot again. The author has already committed it. The plot of Jun Xiaonuo can be like this. Cooperate with the protagonist, one person makes alchemy, and the other concentrates on practicing and collecting materials for alchemy. , The most important thing is that Jun Xiaonuo has an old grandfather. This kind of setting is not that the protagonist has an old grandfather, but that the companions have some. It is very novel and interesting. However, the setting of Golden Finger is too buggy, and it seems that Jun Xiaonuo's old grandfather only has the usefulness of cultivation experience. The third setting problem is that some settings from other books are copied mechanically, which is also a taboo. These are the only problems I have seen so far. The author's book is not too bad, but he lacks experience. You can take your time, there will be confusion, and there will be self-doubt. Don't get stuck in it, and don't give up on yourself. Write what you want to write, and learn from the experience of making mistakes. Who hasn't made it through every bumpy step! Take your time and come on!

How should I put it, if you can fight, don't fight, if you can suppress, don't suppress it, it's very unpleasant to watch! ! !

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It's unreasonable to have a low-grade bone. You have been raising a low-grade bone for the sake of it since you were a child?

This book review is so polarizing, and it only praises one sentence, and criticizes it to the extent that it only mentions one, two or three points, which is very strange.

Isn't this a bit too oppressive? The highest cultivation level in this area is to become a god, but all the shops can only buy low-level exercises and low-level spells? Intermediate and above are all monopolized by sect families? Is there any way for this casual cultivator to survive?

In eighteen years, your master found a low-grade spiritual root to seize his body. Is he sick?

The first chapter is extremely toxic. . . The author probably thought that telling the natives about golden fingers was a joke. . .

I feel like the logic of this book doesn't make sense at all. Low-grade root bones + drug abuse = high-grade root bones ➕ drug abuse? If you were cultivated by the high-grade Gengu Sect, would you still be short of elixirs for daily use? And it is said that medicines are three parts poisons. Even if your quality is top-notch, it is impossible not to contain them completely. The setting of not having drug resistance is outrageous.

Just kill well. Just pretend to be a show-off every time. Don't use all your strength in the beginning. If you don't kill, you will make a lot of enemies.

The first few chapters are okay, but things get worse later on. Will Jin Dan talk to you nicely? You two are not of the same species. If I don't kill you, you will have a good temper.

Author Goldfinger, don't say it casually, if there is a reborn old monster, you are dead. The second level of monsters, what kind of 10th level monsters, speechless, how can they be divided like this? Direct low-level, middle-level, high-level monsters, each point is before, middle, after, peak, and third. Directly going sailing is the worst choice. It's just an idiot. A newbie, relying on his golden finger, he is not afraid of anything? And when the divine thunder fell, you predicted it so easily? No price?

It's weird, I feel like the main character is cowardly and reckless

There are several most poisonous points in this book, and one of them is that more than one person related to the pig's trotter belt will die.

The golden finger was mentioned in the first chapter. Who in the real world would tell such a secret casually? What's more, this is the world of cultivating immortals, which is not rigorous at all. Alas

Food and grass card, it is concluded that this book will not collapse, and there is hope for fairy grass

The good guy showed his cheating finger at the beginning, sand glyph?

Such a good ability is not used to study the art of weapon refining?

In the first chapter, I felt that the protagonist was very stupid 😤, especially if he was the villain, he would have died several times! 😤

I don't understand why so many introductions always talk about the protagonist's future achievements, such as the Supreme Immortal Path and the Demon King. I feel like there's a lot less expectation and I don't really want to click on it.

It's very well written. Come on, author. It would be better if there were 10 updates every day.

This book tends to be low-intellectual, with few big poisons and small poisons. It is suitable for people with little social experience to read.

It's really poisonous. He only wants to be a desperate man, but from time to time there will be plots about Long Aotian getting a son-in-law. As soon as the plot is activated, the cheat will disappear without a trace. And to say it is brainless is a bit too much, but it is true to its name of being stupid and cliche.

Such an awesome golden finger, the protagonist insists on not using it

I have never seen such a childish person, he is stupid and simple, his heart is overflowing with the Holy Mother, it is also very embarrassing to watch.

It's difficult. Killing the master is attributed to a child's skill in playing with sticks. Even if he is reasonable, it is really outrageous to pretend to take off without learning the light body skill. You can fly without learning. It is just an ordinary skill. If you master it, you can't teleport 😥😥😥 Congratulations on successfully completing the Hello, World prompt page 🙂 The next step is to make a complete app.

It's good if your IQ is online. It was a little disconnected in the front.

It's all set, just wait for the update and add some chicken essence 🤓

Goldfinger is very strong, but the protagonist is useless

A little less restrained and a little less exciting, it is more like playing house than cultivating immortality.