The Ultimate Domineering Power of Pirates

It's a classic novel from fifteen years ago. The original parents were killed, and the protagonist traveled back in time and was affected by the spirit left behind in the body. Now readers don't like this, it's uncomfortable to watch. The description is quite detailed. How did the pirate tie up his mother and grow strawberries for her in front of the original owner? The author's taste is a bit strong, so I can't just brush it off. There is also the mental impact left behind by the body. This is really classic, a classic within a classic.

Seeing that the protagonist is not afraid of water after eating a devil fruit, it is a bit poisonous, and he also forced to explain that if you set it like this, Blackbeard will not be afraid of sea water.

Good guy, I'm just good guy. This is my first time reading a time travel story. The first three chapters are used to foreshadow how my enemies and parents died. Don't you know the Golden Three Chapters? The key is that the protagonist only appears in the fourth chapter, and he is awesome.

I can't stand watching anymore. I don't want to watch anymore after seeing that the protagonist can still go into the water after eating the devil fruit.

I looked at the title of the book and thought it was a domineering protagonist who doesn't eat fruits. But within three chapters, the protagonist ate them. I didn't look down on the unique fruits of pirates, but isn't the core of the theme domineering? Isn't it possible to enchant items with fruit abilities? Isn't this a magical weapon? The difference is just a systematic application development. This is what I want to see.

Black Beauty

If I want to travel through the world of pirates, I must first have a natural fruit. Secondly, I must have the strength of a general. Then I can open a harem. Perfectly, I must have pure gold and immortality.

Well, it's like a diary, just like a bunch of sentences. Well, let me give you an analogy, Vic drinks water, Vic is surprised, Vic stands, Vic runs, Vic is awesome. The coldness at the entrance made Vic feel that there was something strange about the water. After hesitating for a moment, he stood up But before he could do anything, the pain in his stomach forced him to run faster. The bursts of smoke rolled up on the road made the people around him feel very scared. "This kid is so awesome." A gray-haired elder said slowly, looking at the hundred-meter-long smoke. Well, that's probably it. You can't start writing like a diary all the time. That would make people feel like a diary, and it would be boring. You can use everything around you, sensory objects, anything that may be useful to reflect the protagonist's behavior sideways, so that the narrative will be more normal.

The failure of the book lies in the fact that the introduction is full of compliments, which makes me succumb to the embarrassment.

The details are so poor. The author himself forgot what he was talking about before, saying that he only needed the last metal "eternal black gold" to make a knife, and then when he found it, he said that the materials were lacking, so he could only make it in advance and could not make a supremely sharp knife. You might as well just say that if you don't have enough materials, you can only make it into a sharp sword. It would be more reasonable to use domineering to upgrade the supreme sharp sword. Including emotions, it is obviously ambiguous, but the protagonist is made into a character who does not respond to anything. The most important thing is that some of the ambiguity is done by the protagonist himself, so it cannot be said that it has nothing to do with the protagonist. Then, these female characters are shaped into self-defeating images, which are very different from the images in the original work. It feels like reading a harem novel, but in the end, it is nothing without a harem. Also, the foreshadowing is very embarrassing. Someone else guided the protagonist to eat the fruit, and he is not afraid of the sea water. The protagonist knows it but doesn't know who it is, and doesn't explore it. Why is the protagonist used as a pawn? Does anyone know that you are a time traveler? The most important thing is that this foreshadowing has appeared many times, but there has been no progress, and I don't know what the protagonist is thinking. It's like doing a task, but the result keeps reminding you that the progress is 0%. It doesn't make you feel better, only unhappy. Including the knowledgeable blind man at the back, the protagonist pulled him in, and then described it too poorly. Maybe the author was enjoying himself, so I pasted the original words: "Fedek looked at Vic's flying confidence and firm eyes, and thought of Vic's super swordsmanship before, he believed what Vic said." A blind man can "see" "confidence" and "eyes"? Isn't this description unreasonable without considering that others are blind? It also includes some memes, which are used inexplicably and embarrassingly. Including some descriptions of the environment and the like, the author does not describe any big scenes. It is obvious that the battles in One Piece are devastating. As a result, the author likes to write about the psychological activities of people around him, just like Long Aotian, which is too embarrassing.

I want to see novels with heroes like Oden, Whitebeard, Roger Shanks, Luffy, Garp, Blackbeard, etc. . But I've read a lot of novels that are all about intrigue and gaudy stuff. Many novels have the strength but are really not big enough. I think it's better to have adventure travel banquets in One Piece... There is a novel (I'm in Rocks 996) that barely has that flavor. I think it's good if there is no system. It should be very good.. The protagonist in my mind (Oden's character + divine avoidance + three-color domineering + Momo fruit + navy + ordinary idle fish. He is the kind of carefree person who goes on adventures and holds banquets. He has a deputy with a better IQ. He doesn't suffer from deep hatred. He eats and waits for death. Qiyu is very strong with casual practice)... Haha

With more than 2 million words of comments, even if it's shit, I still have to taste it 🤫

I don't know why, but it was fine in the past, but now every time I see the soul of a time traveler passing through, it's really annoying that I am the one who wants to fulfill your wish.

The world of One Piece is about fighting, destroying the sky and the earth. The swordsman fights and cuts through the earth and the sky. The sword energy stretches for many kilometers. The protagonist can defeat the lieutenant general in the battle. It is like a martial arts novel. It is a sword-to-sword clash. It depends on whose sword is stronger. In the whole process, a house cannot be destroyed 😥

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No wonder few people read it after writing thousands of chapters. It was so poisonous that I couldn't bear it after reading about ten chapters and slipped away.

Overall it's good, but the writing style is a bit long-winded. Sometimes there are too many descriptions of irrelevant things, and it also feels like the protagonist is pushed too hard. There are too many contradictions that are overwhelming, and the fun points are not highlighted, which is a bit unnecessary. I think we should also write more details about the relationship with our partners. It is unnecessary to write the protagonist, a 30-year-old man, as a straight man. Sometimes it is okay to respond to the feelings and send some sweets. When it comes to love, I always write with caution and fear of this and that. It doesn't feel like an adult's thinking.

The title of the book says that the ultimate domineering power doesn't even have a hint of domineering. Also, if you take Kaido's blow, you can clearly write about the outcome of awakening. Also, Gion was almost killed by Barrett, but in the end he was just angry but didn't awaken. What the hell is that?

I can't keep up with the plot, so why bother updating it?

Come on, I'm optimistic about you. The monthly ticket has been handed in, keep working hard.

You 1.5 Million son, you only have so many comments? Isn't it just a trick to trick people?

Damn it, you persuaded me to quit when I read the third chapter. I decided to learn swordsmanship, but ended up buying a knife. The fourth chapter was so awkward.

The protagonist starts on an empty island and eats the thunder fruit. It is a half-invincible story and half-farming story. It is fast-paced and you are welcome to try it.

Why is the protagonist so short?😥