King of Sprints

Statement of opinion: The author has written an excellent sports novel and is recommended for those who love sports. 8/10 Points Advantages: 1. The passion for sports writing is well reflected; 2. The water injection is not serious, the article has good coherence, and the overall world view is clear; 3. The emotional line of this article is handled Yes, there is nothing very embarrassing; 4. The character is fleshed out, without facial makeup, and both the decent and the villain are well performed. I sincerely like the villain Li Yan - the image of the sinister, ruthless, cunning and contradictory villain is impressive. Disadvantages: 1. Due to the dark style of the author's writing (Cthulhu), there are many descriptions in this book that are not suitable for sports channels, including assassinations and threats to athletes, which are very dramatic; 2. There is a lack of professionalism, and common sense and professional errors appear; 3. The modification of the text due to the influence of others makes the article structure feel frustrating Subjective evaluation: The book review area is an important factor that leads to the decline in the perception of the book. It is full of hostility. It is recommended to turn off the book review area and read this book. The author has the potential to write in other styles, and there is no need to stick to Cthulhu, if the conflict of writing styles can be overcome (of course, I know there is a loss of readers, but it depends on the author himself, right?) In the end, did the author offend others?

The real bad guy: Tian Shiwei, who becomes stronger when he is strong, and follows Lu Jun all the way to the world stage. He is too strong.

I saw a reader mentioned "outbreak" in the post, and I don't know what type of golden finger the author set for it. Is it ignoring the objective laws of the human body or based on the objective laws of the human body? If it is the latter, then this "burst" must not be used in the last twenty meters (especially the fifteen meters). 100 meters is the ultimate anaerobic explosive exercise. The energy it relies on mainly comes from the phosphagen system, which can be maintained for approximately 6-8 seconds. After the energy supply of the phosphagen system drops significantly, the glycolysis system will take over the energy supply, but only for about two seconds, and the energy supply effect is much lower than that of the phosphagen system, so it cannot "explode". So for the world's top athletes, the last twenty meters basically rely on the inertial potential energy after entering the top speed to maintain the body's stride length and frequency, and try not to slow down in the final sprint stage. So if the protagonist wants to use Goldfinger's "explosion" ability, it is best to start, accelerate, and the first part of the run, rather than run the second part of the way and sprint. Above

Open an Olympic Games and say that all nations will come to Korea? Does the author of this idiom know what it means? Is it appropriate? In a few years, it may be described like this. Can the 2008 Olympic Games?

Goldfinger can actually be shared? Extremely poisonous!

I'm sorry that I may have said some unpleasant things. I just watched the plot of the Osaka World Championships, and I really have to complain about some things... Bolt suffered from injuries in 2004 and 2005, because his body was not fully open at the time, but his coach at the time arranged for him a training volume that was not in line with his physical condition, which led to him "giving up running" directly at the Athens Olympics, and his performance at the Helsinki World Championships was not good. After that, Bolt terminated his original contract and became an apprentice to the legendary coach Mills. Then Bolt spent more than a year treating his congenital scoliosis and spent a lot of time training his back muscle strength. In 2006, in addition to participating in the 200-meter race, Bolt also participated in several 400-meter races under the arrangement of Mills. After the 2007 World Championships, Mills believed that Bolt's 200m level was enough for him to add a concurrent event, and wanted Bolt to choose the 400m. But Bolt knew how difficult it was to run 400 meters, so he told Mills: "The coach asked me to try 100 meters." Mills said: "If you can run under 10 seconds 30, then yes" Then Bolt ran 10 seconds 03 in Greece, which was his first 100 meters race in the official IAAF record. Having said all this, the point I want to express is: Before the 2007 World Championships, Bolt had no chance of running the 100 meters regardless of his physical condition or the training cycle assigned to him by Mills, let alone running a time of 9.6 Seconds at the Osaka World Championships.

It gradually develops to the point where all the protagonist's friends can reach ten points. What the hell, breaking ten is so worthless, how many people in the world have broken ten. Does Tian or whatever have that talent?

I really can't watch anymore. It's rare for China to produce a world-famous person. Every day when I participate in the competition, people threaten me to abandon the competition. I have ordered every chapter. After you, Li Yan comes and then comes Lee. After a while, there will be others. I won't read and say goodbye.

I just want to ask if you have considered the child's real family when you adopt a child illegally? What will her family do if she is a lost child? How can she go to school without legal procedures? How can she raise a child without good conditions? If the biological parents of the child are found in the future, they must report the male protagonist to death. Do you understand this is called child trafficking?

4 False starts, this author is a villain

The protagonist gave up the book after four false starts. It can be said that the protagonist is very baffled. The protagonist came here to join the provincial team because one of the attribute points of the plug-in was against others. So what if he four false starts and finally won? In order to gain an attribute point and win the game, you run the risk of being disliked by the coach and not being allowed to join the provincial team. Moreover, four false starts indicate that the protagonist has no sportsmanship. This is much more important than level. In the simulation option, four false starts in reality means a false start. Are you an independent person or a robot controlled by the simulator? It really numbs me

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I'm talking about three points of view. If you don't like your own ideas, don't criticize them. 1* I think the target of this novel published on the Qidian platform should be Internet readers. The author can do some writing for the sake of plot, but don't think about whitewashing the villain or forcibly feeding the readers with poison. If the author just wants to I like to write novels. I'm too talkative 2* Personally, I feel that it is better to blindly participate in competitions based on the protagonist's rank than to find a coach who truly cares for the protagonist and can provide training assistance to the protagonist. Although the protagonist can read the feedback on the status board, bystanders have time to see clearly. 3* There is also the issue of the protagonist's outlook and knowledge. If you are a reckless man, it will be difficult to achieve results in sports. Look at Yao Ming and other top athletes whose basic EQ and IQ will not be low, and the protagonist also dropped out of school very early to enter the society. Although he is an orphan, I think he should be more diplomatic in his dealings.

Physical education? This is really unacceptable. Your new book and your old book have completely different audiences.

Why do you want to write about sprinting... You are obviously writing about sports, but you have no relevant professional knowledge. How can you write well? Have you ever sprinted? Do you know nutrition and have tried pre-match training? Have you experienced even a pre-match warm-up phase? Writing this, you really think there are too many readers, right? They were all followed by soul painters, and I even subscribed. But when you write this, your writing style is not very good and you don't have any professional knowledge. Can you just write about sports and history? What readers want to read is professionalism, and there is no room for white text at all. Please read this book as soon as possible and go back to write about the Ke system. Do you really think readers will always wait for you? In another half year, after the soul painter is forgotten, everyone will not even be able to read your book, so why should they follow you and continue to pursue you? Go away and write about the Ke system! Go away and write about the Ke system! Go away and write about the Ke system! Go away and write about the Ke system! Go away and write about the Ke system!

As someone who has written short stories, I would like to make some superficial comments. First of all, I am very happy that the fifth-level boss can write about track and field. I have browsed it briefly. The writing is very smooth and the characters are well created. The author's writing skills are beyond my reach. But I still want to say one thing: the core of sports writing is events rather than life. Without events, there would be no excitement and excitement. Besides the competition, there is professionalism. For example, in Chapter 4, Shen Peng, who finished third at the Asian Games, said, "I can barely make it to the finals at the Asian Games in 11 seconds." This is obviously a huge loophole. Although Asia's sprinting level at the beginning of the century is far from the world's top level, 11 seconds was not enough to reach the Asian Games finals, and it could not even get a ranking in the domestic City Games. A former top athlete in Asia who has won third place in the Asian Games wouldn't say such unskilled words, would he?

I talked to you last year about this subject being terrible, right? I told you that your editor is not smart, right? Giving blind advice. I said that continuing the Cthulhu universe is the right path, right? This book is indeed a hit, so just go back and continue the music department in the Cthulhu universe.

I really admire that you can continue reading. In the first chapter, I am an 18-year-old who was tested by the provincial team. The triple buff of 12.3 Seconds immediately persuaded me to quit. There may be many people coming out to argue. The protagonist is not in good condition just after crossing, that is, you do not understand sprinting. First of all, you want to join the provincial team, especially if the competition is fierce. Sprinting, at the age of 18, you are eliminated in the first step. Unless you can run 10.7 Seconds at the age of 18, you still have a chance. In China, it is only based on age or performance. The younger the age, the lower the performance requirements. If you are 15 years old, you can definitely join the provincial team if you can run 12 seconds. There is no such thing as a late bloomer. It's not legal, and secondly, the issue of poor condition is even more ridiculous. As long as you don't have any serious injuries, even if you run with your eyes closed, the error from your PB will not exceed 0.5 Seconds at most (take me as an example, my PB is 11.75 Seconds, I ran in the school sports meeting in my senior year of high school. When I got to college, I exercised less and still I often play games, and my condition can't get any worse. As a result, I was able to run 12.3 Seconds in the sophomore school sports meeting. I was surprised when I finished the run. I really can't imagine how far it would have deteriorated if I didn't get injured.) So the 12.3 Seconds the author wrote was called talented by the coach, which is unimaginable to me.

Why rush? Is the standard of the provincial team so low? What is the concept of level two? Work hard to add some talent. The first level is the threshold. Without talent, it will be difficult to reach the first level in your life. A strong person is the natural barrier. You just casually say that you can enter the provincial team by running to the second level at the age of 18? Go ask the coach, no coach will care about you

After watching the reopening of Su Shen next door, I am already picky about track and field articles.

The author's Zhang Zhen must have taken medication. Pan Kai's prototype's best score suddenly increased from 10.3 To 10.15, And Zhang Zhen suddenly went from 6.58 To 6.50. This result would be considered normal if the more scientific new generation after 2015 ran out. It would have been almost impossible to run out in 2005. The protagonist used the system to cheat, but they didn't. Unless they used drugs to cheat, Pan Kai's is still normal. After all, the prototype does have talent, with a talent of 10.1, But it is difficult to run out of a non-system background. It is difficult to suddenly increase 0.15 Seconds, but 6 .50 Is too outrageous. Even now, there are only two people in China who have reached 6.5. The best score before 2008 was only 6.58. Judging from the previous description of Zhang Zhen, he does not have the talent to reach 6.5. He must either cheat or take medicine, otherwise it will be too disgusting to force the villain to kill. A coach has a secret method that can improve it by 0.15 Seconds. This is the god of coaching.

Reward 1500, congratulations to Rousseau for breaking the record~

140Seriously? Is Loli underage?

I saw 66%. First of all, the author of this book must not have a deep understanding of the field of sprint track and field. There are few game scenes and the passionate and exciting descriptions are far less than other high-quality track and field articles. Most of the professional knowledge is copied from the reports, and the description of the achievement growth curve is also very unreasonable. Besides, when it comes to such an exciting moment as breaking a record and winning a championship, you wrote it in a calm and calm manner. Even the description method is no different from the usual competition. . It's really bad The biggest poisonous point is what do you think of gambling trading? Bankers really dare to threaten or even shoot players in official games? There are thousands of trading methods, but I wrote the stupidest and least technical one.

You are not as good at writing zombie dance.

She's a pervert and a loser, and she doesn't have the common sense to write about chicken-feather sports

After reading the first six chapters, how could the author write so many poisonous points 🤔

Seeing four false starts makes me feel a bit 🤢

The writing is okay, but the setting is disgusting

This is the first sports article I have read. Overall, the experience is good. Although I think the ending is a bit unfinished, it has a beginning and an end. Thank you author.