After Rebirth, It's Normal to Be Chased from Behind, Right?

I can't stand Chapter 278 anymore. When I read it, I thought of the first few pictures of Chapter 278. It was like force-feeding a mouthful of shit. Everything was fine before. Why is it suddenly thundering? I have been watching it for several days in a row. It was really exciting. It was thundering. Author, do you understand my pain? 😅

The more I read, the more uncomfortable I became. I couldn't stand a chapter. The author is really awesome. It only took me a few chapters to stay up late two days ago and I couldn't stand a chapter. The protagonist in these chapters is like a dog with the IQ of a five-year-old child. Is this what it takes to live a new life?

The writing is sophisticated, but the characters look a bit familiar. Come to think of it, aren't they Chen Hansheng, Shen Youchu, and Luo Xuemei?

After reading Chapter 242, I found out that my sister is really a bit unpleasant.

It's a bit scummy. To be honest, one is enough. The writing style is still good, but it's a bit unreadable. I hope the author can change it in the next one.

Very good, I really like it. Thank you to the author for writing such a book.

What about today's update? Don't make excuses for me, I'll update it even if I'm kneeling

The relationships between the characters in the early stages of the first and second books are very similar, including sister, family, teacher, and first-blood heroine. In addition, I think Coke did a better job in terms of details. Lao Zhou's relationship handling is a bit sloppy.

The matter of the surnamed Xia was just a matter of no concern and fun. It was just for the sake of promoting the plot. There is also a deep v. Another plot: a gangster sitting in a shop. I didn't write down any marks or wishes.

Just one today? Not enough

It disgusts me to death, this Su Kenian, the author wanted to write her like Shen Youchu, but all I saw was that she talks hesitantly, can't do anything, relies on the male protagonist to handle everything, wears Chanel to apply for scholarships, and even though she is a latecomer, she insists on acting like It was someone else who ruined our relationship. When I met Qin Yiyi, I pretended to be stupid and started crying. When I got to Lin Yi, I just whined, don't abandon me. While I knew that I was not the official palace, I was also self-centered. I couldn't live without Lin Yi, so Lin Yi couldn't abandon myself? I can't say that this girl is not innocent, I can only say that she is stupid. According to the author, how did she live in her last life? The same goes for the author. It is clear that the ranks do not match, and Qin Yiyi is the real palace official, but he insists on writing Su in the same position, and when writing about Qin, he either associates this woman with that woman. Do you think this is disrespectful to Qin, and gave Su the title of little angel? Did he save the male protagonist or something? If I have to give him more drama, I can't write Shen Youchu like that and write her as a considerate lover of the male protagonist. I have to put it on the bright side. Qin saw Su in the pet shop and neither of them spoke. The next day, the male protagonist thought that Su was wronged. I really don't understand why she was wronged. She didn't want to leave later so she should accept her feelings. The identity of the person, the inexplicable heartache of the male protagonist made the readers feel that Su is much more important than Qin. I was really convinced. In the first part, I stayed up late until dawn, and in the second part, I read a disgusting chapter. They wrote Su as a person with no IQ, unable to speak, no emotional intelligence, ignorant of shit, shy, crying and smiling lightly. It was really disgusting.

Personally, I feel that Su Kenian has become useless First of all, this character is not independent, everything depends on the protagonist; The family conditions are not good, and he is not independent, so he is set according to Shen Youchu, and his appearances are few; In order to establish his gentle persona, I compared Qin Yiyi to Personally, I think it's quite a bad character; In addition, this character is said to have no IQ, no emotional intelligence, and no ability to deal with any emergencies. Especially when it comes to raising cats and opening a shop, all the consumption depends on men, and he has no productivity. Now every time he appears, he is crushed by other female characters. If it doesn't work, just be a mistress, a caring mistress, gentle and not making trouble, it's pretty good

It's a bit of a pity. The early period of "Feng Shen" is really good-looking. It made me stay up late to read it. The characterization of Qin Yiyi in the early stage is really great. She is quirky, innocent and carefree. It is really very likable. But starting from chapter 275, it becomes unreadable. I want to know, as a normal person, would Qin Yiyi really not feel any stab in her heart after knowing that the male protagonist was dating other girls behind her back? Can you really let go of the male protagonist's betrayal of yourself so easily? The further you go, the more naive the protagonist becomes. As long as he doesn't admit that other women are his girlfriends, he can have sex with them casually, and Qin Yiyi won't be angry, is that right? If you're not good at surgery, don't do it. I'd rather the author kept handing out the word count than seeing some shady plots.

It's okay in daily life, but when it comes to business and struggle, it reveals the author's lack of experience and he just takes it for granted.

Qin Yiyi in this book is so lovable that she has surpassed Xiao Yuer. Comparatively, Su Kenian is too weak, and does not have Shen Youchu's style, and it is difficult to achieve the feeling of the two heroines being equal The picture drawn by w is very similar to Qin Yiyi and Lin Gou.

The business written by the author is a mess, read more books

I don't understand why I have to raise money. Is it just to write about Jiang Qingluan? 100 Million for shared bicycles is far from enough. Just to write about Jiang Qingluan and give her 15. Really nb

I don't understand. You spent so much time describing that Gu Yang has always liked the protagonist. In the later stage, you accepted so many women, but not all of them liked the protagonist more than she did. As a result, in the later stage, you were confused about whether to accept Gu Yang or not. In the end it was the divine sculpture. Sigh~ I'm tired and don't like it anymore. I may not want to read your books in the future.

I don't understand why this author keeps writing about the great success of oranges😅 That sister is so disgusting, and she also makes a lily, which is not fun at all

Is it normal to be chased after you are reborn? It's not normal at all. There is no such thing as rebirth. Then it's normal. Just make it up. Let's see what level you can achieve with your nonsense.

Su Kenian wanted to write an image like Shen Youchu, but I don't know whether it was due to the writing power or the reason why the author didn't like this character in his heart. I felt that Su Kenian's character was completely incapable of standing up, and instead looked like a silly girl with a bad brain. She had no character highlights except that she was good-looking. She had no character attraction compared to Qin Yiyi, but she had to be shaped by the author to look like she could compete with Qin Yiyi. Does she have this ability? She didn't. I hope that this character's role will be reduced or that he will be better portrayed.

Reading the book review, I think the follow-up to this book is unfinished. I just read about 200 chapters of a sequel about the heroine being caught in an act of rape. How can I put it, I am so addicted. I want Qin to be independent and self-reliant, but I also want to write her like an accessory that cannot be separated from the protagonist. It makes people feel disconnected and exploded. The same goes for the other heroine. You want to write her to be sensible, but she seems to be pitiful and scheming, which is contradictory. The resolution of the shield is also sparse, just like there is no big conflict that you have to write about. You don't have a few particularly lovable characters and stories in the whole book. I know that the fun thing you wrote first was the rebirth of harem love, and the heroines have their own personalities. But the problem is that the characters you write must be more three-dimensional and excellent, otherwise why would they be inseparable from each other? If you want to write about a heroine with a strong and independent character, you either don't have a harem or you write better. If your writing skills are not that good, don't think about controlling so many people with different personalities. The feeling I have now is that the protagonist is selfish and wants to be outstanding. The heroines are even more important. The Qin family is actually able to accept the protagonist's flirtatiousness in the end. Su's growth is even less effective. Compared with Qin, he is more like a fish that died after leaving the protagonist. So how did she survive in her previous life? The other few related ones are more like NPCs, purely to expand the number of people. This is the feeling I have so far. Of course, the author's daily writing is okay, but the storytelling and character building are really not good. I suggest that the heroine be more sweet later, and write some brother stories to lead the brothers to start a business. The impression is much better. Of course, I am only making my own comments and suggestions for the chapters I have seen so far as a reader and consumer.

I see that many people don't like the character Su Kenian. To be honest, I really like her. Over the years, Qin Yiyi has talked a lot, but Su Kenian has never met anyone. Now she is afraid of marriage. I really want to find someone like Su Kenian who will not fight or fight. No matter how busy and hard you are outside, she has no time to take care of the home. She can also manage the house tightly. You When you get home, she won't complain to you, saying that you only work at work every day and doesn't care about anything at home, and she won't get angry with you. Instead, she will give you a hug when you open the door and tell you that your husband has worked hard. She can hold her in her arms at night and talk to her about her worries at work. She will continue to comfort you without comparing or causing trouble.

The relationship between the two heroines is really messed up, and I immediately lost interest in it. I have been chasing this book for three days, and I have reached 277, but this lump suddenly comes in, and I still can't skip the plot. It feels like the protagonist who is obviously invincible suddenly loses to Lu. I met a random passerby. I don't know if he can understand my feelings. Although I was a little reluctant, I thought of this plot after reading the next chapter. I felt a little forced to have sex 😅. That's it. It's really fun to read the previous chapter.

Come on, author, the writing is very beautiful. The character design of Qin Yiyi is much better than that of Xiao Yu'er. You can give other female characters some daily life scenes instead of just mentioning them in one stroke, such as Xu Wanting and An Lan. Just writing about Qin Yiyi will make people boring.

Change the title of the book, change the names of the main and supporting characters. Another new book, a joke

Who has the extras for this book and that book?

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