Pokemon Descends: This Researcher Is Forced to Become a Champion

In the discussion thread, I was surprised to see that the author had changed the settings. First of all, let me say that the first three chapters are much better than before. There is really no need to describe too much about the reason for being injured. Writing a compensation to get the elves is a good beginning. If necessary, you can start the plot with the institute later. I would like to add here that there are some ways to advance your plot. Come on, I really want to see the process from Squirtle's birth to training (please like this if you have similar friends). Here you can add the protagonist's current living environment and daily life to enrich the protagonist's current situation. Then during training, the preliminary focus should be on how the protagonist responds. Use your own knowledge to improve Squirtle's understanding of skills (this is written for readers. There is no certain hard-core training process. How to highlight knowledge and change cognition. If you just rely on so-called professors and friends to praise you from the side, it always feels a little tasteless). Here again, I will give the author I would like to suggest that you slow down the pace first, train first, and then compete. After you stand out from your friends and peers, you will be valued by the so-called professors, and then you will start to stand out, start traveling, and have participated in travel for the purpose of participating in competitions, or you have other goal-setting processes. Personally, I feel that such a hard-core approach to cultivating elves should be one of the important highlights of your book, at least that's how I feel.

Why do some authors always like to weaken the settings of Pokémon? The healing wave of the auspicious egg takes more than half a month to heal a person with a fracture. Then the auspicious egg is still useful. Why don't you write that the fire-breathing dragon's flame temperature is 100 degrees, which is slower than that of an eagle or a sparrow?

Elves such as Cady Dog, Riolu, and Darubi are very loyal to you.

If you post a Pokémon picture, try to write the name of the artist Please improve it. The previous post was deleted because of my poor skills. I feel bad😭😭😭😭😭😭 The artist of the work cannot be posted. , The starting point is very confusing. In the comment area, you can see it in reverse order

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As soon as the Rockets came out, I felt that expectations dropped a lot.

After reading a few chapters, I am a little confused about the author's core point of view. Since the author has completely substituted the laws of physics into the elf world, many problems in the elf world have become contradictory. First of all, the power of the mythical beast contradicts the author's physics. Not to mention other evolutions and moves.

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I have read a similar book. In order to highlight the main character, the whole world has been dumbfounded. Other people's research is either stuck in the same place or wrong. The main character has changed the whole world by himself.

When I saw the resume, I thought it was a story about traveling to the elf world and hard-core cultivating elves. It turned out to be a story about a parallel world and the slow development of elf culture. It was a bit unsatisfactory and a bit disappointing. This resume is for fishing, and it doesn't tell you about the general situation of the world at the beginning. The overall world view should be a resurrected elven world. The whole tall scholar at the beginning did not make me feel that the protagonist was happy, but was a bit contradictory.