Entertainment: Great Writers Starting from Metamorphosis

Metamorphosis is a cancer, I could have endured the darkness, just because I have never seen the light

Let me ask you, don't you feel embarrassed to read it yourself after the author wrote it?

Newbies who write books may not have a good grasp of the rhythm. If there are any bad points, I hope you can point them out and I will correct them after careful consideration.

Personal feeling: Liu Yifei perfectly combines all the advantages of men's visual sense of women.

When I saw Liu Yifei as the heroine, I didn't want to watch it. Liu's husband at the starting point was not even a thousand, but maybe five hundred.

What you wrote is too poisonous. Do you think a high school student who has never experienced the world in a remote and impoverished area can write these things? Does the author have any common sense? You should find a job in a factory and stop writing this kind of garbage.

I don't dislike Mango Channel, but Metamorphosis is the most vicious program I have ever seen. It is a program that I hope the people who plan and promote this program no longer need a household registration book.

I can't stand the first chapter. A little boy who is in his first year of high school can still write an inscription on a shabby house. It is undeniable that there is genius, but it is impossible. A young man with no experience, knowledge and lack of cultural background can write it. You can do anything at any age. It does not mean that you can do anything as a time traveler.

Quiet Song of Time

Sorry for my mistake, I shouldn't have read this book in 2023. In my opinion, the whole 2 words of this book are embarrassing😅, 666

Doesn't anyone think that reading this book is better than reading Su Ye? That book is much better than this one.

There is no need to start talking about the Analects of Confucius to these villagers. No one can understand it. You might as well create the image of a child with sharp teeth and a sharp mouth. You can use normal vernacular to say it. Who are you pretending to show this to?

The amount of dividends for the Metamorphosis Room was not specified in detail before. The buyout was tens of thousands of dollars. I can endure all this and watch it. I really can't stand the fairy. If I saw the fairy licking harder than the protagonist, but I don't want to see the protagonist licking like this. Real life is already very frustrating. But when I read the protagonist in this novel, I immediately broke my guard.

It feels so messy, it gives me a headache. . . .

I really don't have high requirements for reading books. I need to have a correct outlook on life and good logic.

Is your profile meant to make you stand out? No matter how awesome you are, you're still going to ask readers for help when you put it on the shelves.

I was really looking forward to this book, because there is also a book from Metamorphosis. What is it called? The female protagonist is also Liu, and the male protagonist can also deliver pigs. I have seen more than 20 chapters so far, which feels like a pity. There is nothing wrong with the plot arrangement, and the characters are also good, but the author perfectly avoided all the plots worthy of being written as a fun point. I don't know if he didn't notice that it was a fun point or because he couldn't write it. It can only be said that there is no harm without comparison. I have seen chapter 200. The author has made progress, but it is already after it was put on the shelf, and this progress is not enough for readers to read all the way. After all, this progress is only an improvement in details and does not surprise readers. So it can be predicted that the results of this book will not be much better.

I saw a lot of people saying it was embarrassing. I don't know if it was embarrassing or not. Anyway, they sent me away after the second picture.

The first twenty chapters are very good, and there are minor flaws that don't hurt. But once you get to the heroine, it's all a mess. If you don't know how to write emotional lines, don't go into it, okay?

Don't be someone like Shenhua who studies music. Don't copy poems and classic articles if the protagonist doesn't have a deep foundation of cultural knowledge. Once you exchange some professional knowledge with professionals, the prototype will be revealed!

How should I put it, this book has two lines. The literary giant failed to write well, and the young genius he wanted to portray was embarrassingly written. The key author always forced himself to be high and strong. At no time, no matter the occasion, no matter the main theme, going to the Yueyang Tower and climbing the mountain simply hurt my lungs. This is how Li Bai's Hundred Poems on Doujiu came about. The author was crazy to try to concoct a character. He climbed up Mount Huashan and wrote a hundred poems. He had to read all the famous mountains with their names... Entertainment is just like that, the way of general entertainment articles. Anyway, everyone in the entertainment industry will get involved in various opportunities and coincidences. Everyone in the entertainment industry will let you know that I am very... The most awesome thing is that the author wrote about the protagonist who is a senior in high school. I have always been dissatisfied with my grades, how many points I missed in each subject, and clamoring to work harder! While emphasizing on studying hard to prepare for the college entrance examination, I am traveling around the country and abroad, including various figures in publishing houses, entertainment circles, and officialdom. I want to let you know that the protagonist is very awesome. Every now and then there would be a quarrel, and they would still hide in a small building and unite, letting the wind blow from the southeast to the northwest. First, people scold the protagonist, but the protagonist doesn't pay attention to it. When the fuss gets louder, the protagonist shows off his holiness in front of others. I have never seen a chapter devoted to describing the protagonist's life at school. Don't even say he is studying! ! I went back to school to criticize myself because I picked up girls. Damn it, isn't this a double standard? What if you fast forward through this period of your high school career? The most impressive thing about the author is the issue of time. After so many things happened, the first semester of the senior year of high school has not even passed yet! ! ! I would like to make a suggestion. Does the author think it will have an impact to describe the following things during the college entrance examination holiday and college stage? The soup and medicine are not changed, and the recipe is not changed? Is there any impact? ? ? ? ?

I would like to recommend this. The entertainment started in 1999. You can take a look. The female protagonists currently include Gao Yuanyuan, Qin Lan, Li Xiaoran, and Liu Xiaoli. Newcomers are struggling to survive. Please forgive me if there is any offense. 🙏

The beginning is so disgusting! Don't you vomit when you look at it?

I have read 30 chapters, and overall it is good. The language is fluent, there are no major flaws, it is not verbose, and it is within the acceptable range. But the more I read, the more strange it becomes. The protagonist has just started to pursue a career in literature and art. What the hell is it that he later left Liu Yifei's mobile phone number? Even if she is a fan of your book, you still have to know that fans are immoral, right? What's more, a reborn time traveler doesn't know the situation in the entertainment industry? One day the king said, good girls, it is best not to join the entertainment industry! So if the main wife is from the entertainment industry, it will be very uncomfortable because the protagonist always feels that the top of her head is a bit green. In addition, Liu Tianxian has been badly written, and it looks so embarrassing! I hope that the protagonists in the future will not go into the entertainment industry and can stick to the path of literature!

I got to my knees, I got to my knees. It's okay, but it's developed too slowly. I see that I'm still in school and don't really like reading school literature.

It's much better to watch a single heroine than some heroines who are embarrassing as soon as they are written. Those who have golden fingers just to pick up different women are really outrageous. It seems that there is no other pursuit in life. How is your health? The overall emotional description in this book is quite normal.

Okay, I'll just comment without reading. I don't feel bad if you feel bad. It doesn't look good. You said so yourself.

The first chapter of Goodfellas embarrassed me, writing a shabby room inscription? ? ? ? ? ?

I recently wrote a new book about the Christian novel "God Can't Look Directly". I don't know if it's finished. If anyone is interested, you can check it out and give me some guidance. Thank you!

It is the most shameful thing to write ancient prose and pretend to be modern. Even if you copy it from modern times. It's also good to bring everyone in. Otherwise it would be so embarrassing