This Simplification Is Outrageous!

I read the channel version. What should I say about this book? The title explains everything "Simplified" (the finale is also simplified, right? It's quite speechless) If I were asked to write a review, it would be, "The blood moon exploded, and so did the book."

The writing is not bad, and the plot is compact enough, but the crushing feeling is not strong enough. I hope the fighting process can be optimized. The only thing that I feel has not been handled well so far is the blind date. Based on the character of the protagonist, Xiaoling should have added money after taking the card and grabbed it all. When I found out later, I could still see the scene of the protagonist being defeated and the scene of the protagonist having a reason to beat Xiaoling. Although it's a little tangled at the back, it's generally good. I don't know what standards everyone uses to judge an online novel, but for me, any novel that can allow me to read it without feeling embarrassed or insulting my IQ is considered a successful novel. The only difference lies in the audience. One more thing, are you deliberately suppressing the growth of the protagonist? I have a very strong feeling. It is said that the only condition for the protagonist's cheating is energy points, but judging from what the protagonist has done, a combat system should have been initially formed. One attack, one defense, one step, and one mind method cooperate with each other. But now it is just fighting around a strengthened body and protective golden light, and nothing else is revealed. Of course, the above are my personal opinions, not teaching you how to write a book. I look forward to your release and your updates. I hope you can handle some sensitive things well. I don't want this book to disappear because of some things. Any mistakes can be forgiven, but the principle cannot be broken.

If I were the protagonist: Hey, I was beaten by the villain and I don't know who the villain is? Just go ahead and eliminate all those in power in the world. As long as you are framed, framed, etc. Just blame those capitalists and those in power. The big deal is that when you become invincible, you can destroy the world with one punch, explode stars with one punch, and destroy small breaking balls with one punch.

，，， Drinking water according to the Yi Jin Jing improves your cultivation! It's also quite shocking. I suggest the author to search for the side effects of excessive drinking of water. The protagonist does not have kidneys that are invulnerable to poison and indestructible. If you want to be glittering, wouldn't the Golden Light Spell be great? The ability of one person is obviously more suitable for your book. If you have to choose between works like Jin Gu Huang Liang, these two exercises are not the most suitable for you to choose. Moreover, I almost starved to death during the previous practice and almost died from depletion of energy and blood, which was also poisonous to me. When I bought the chocolate, it was a watery batch. The reminder said to ask for black spherical chocolate, but I had to buy white and square ones. It was so watery before it was put on the shelves. Who dares to look at it later! The second question is about the formation of the supernatural in Chapter 25. After reading it, if you look back at the plot around Chapter 10, it is obvious that the victim turned into a ghost, which conflicts with the setting. The third question is about the supernatural driver who acted in Chapter 27. The author first arranged for the other party the experience of an ordinary person (what is the meaning of this arrangement? Readers who read the plot carefully will jump into the drama!), Making readers think that the driver is a human and has encountered a supernatural being. Then the reverse is true. In fact, the driver is a supernatural being, and it is just acting! In the end, he played himself to death! The author's hobby is to play script killing, do you want to play with yourself? The spirit told the driver that the mist he released had a hypnotic effect on both humans and spirits. Why was the driver okay? The plot jumps out a lot, and after seeing the illogical development, I have no desire to continue reading. I have to go back and see if I missed it before or if the author made a mistake. The third question seems to be that the protagonist was hit by the same person for the second time around Chapter 34. The boss Gao who hit him has another character design (the same problem as above). He is confused, overwhelmed, scared and other emotions are all arranged, but the result is still not human! Until he was killed, the meaning of his narration design was not explained anywhere! It's as if the author has a split personality halfway through writing! One idea in the first half of the chapter and one idea in the second half, regardless of whether the logic is self-consistent? The word count is quite a lot. If I keep writing like this, I really won't be able to read it... I suggest the author revise the outline.

It's too silly. Can you be more rigorous?

The author can come up with an awakened person whose saliva can cure diseases, or a supernatural spirit. . .

Except for the battle which drags on for a long time around chapter 100, everything else is pretty good. Although the protagonist's strength does not increase quickly, he is invincible at the same level.

The advantage is that it is good to simplify the creativity. I feel like pouring a bucket of gold paint on the protagonist, the protagonist can directly play GG. Later, it is recommended to replace it with gold powder to increase the difficulty and interest. 😃😃😃 Disadvantages, the basic villain of each short story has a little bit of wisdom, and the template is directly followed, which is a bit of a trend of wheel writing, 🪖🪖🪖 Another one is that the Awakener's super power system and combat are not written and applied brilliantly. The book is easy, weird and suspenseful? The three elements are not combined well. 🤫🤫🤫 To sum it up in one sentence, the pretense scene once got out of control, and it looked like there were no special effects in the Ultraman special photo drama. 😥😥😥

The protagonist's character is very off-putting. He is very arrogant. He feels as if he is superior to others. This is okay if he is talking to his enemies, but the protagonist is also like this to ordinary people and friends. Just like when the protagonist went on a blind date, the protagonist said that it was okay if he was late, but he was disgusted when others were late. I really don't know how he had the nerve to say this. The protagonist has a sense of superiority in everything he says and does. He doesn't show the least respect when getting along with others. He is a bit like the Celestial Dragon in One Piece. To be honest, it is very disgusting.

The anti-theft work is good, but I can't read all the new chapters.

After reading more than fifty chapters, I can only say that the introduction is misleading. The author has a good grasp of the plot. It is funny but not too awkward. The protagonist does not think about women all the time. The overall style is more relaxed and funny. He does not deliberately suppress the protagonist's strength, nor is the protagonist's strength too strong. It is very comfortable to read. Friends who are looking for books may wish to give it a try.

After reading the introduction, I thought that the protagonist would level up quickly and fight monsters happily. After reading more than a hundred chapters, I found that the protagonist's tricks are indeed very strong and interesting. However, he has always been suppressed by the author. The first few dozen chapters were very easy. Later, the characters with the same level as the protagonist have special abilities, but there are no special abilities. The level of special abilities is higher than that of the protagonist, so the protagonist is very passive when facing the enemy. He just fights wits and courage. He keeps looking for clues and getting props, and has to fight beyond the level. He is restrained in various ways and seems very frustrated. This is completely different from the introduction and the style of the previous dozens of chapters.

It feels like the author is deliberately suppressing the protagonist, and the cheats are obviously very strong. For example, in the "Yi Jin Jing", you can practice by drinking water. In the early stage, the protagonist obviously felt that there is an upper limit for drinking hot water, and the author also wrote about it. So why not find a method that can improve metabolism and simplify it for a while? I drink so much hot water every day, and the upgrade is extremely slow. I thought it was a cool article, but it was frustrating to read. I don't recommend it.

Whether it's internal strength or moves, please help me think about it, below the level of martial arts. Elixirs, body skills, weapons, moves, internal skills... I see that there are book friends in the comment area who are really talented. Sometimes I didn't expect it. For example: "Legs of the God of Wind" Simplified to a fan blowing the legs (this book friend is really talented, I really didn't expect it)

Good guy

I don't think there will be many beauties in this world in less than ten years. Any second or third level little boss will be surrounded by a bunch of beauties, and they are all consumables. They will kill them whenever they get upset. How come there are so many beauties to kill for them?

Crumbs

When I read the beginning, I thought it was a sequel to the spirit of Youqi, but it turned out to be so bad that I couldn't stand it, and it wasn't fun at all. It kept suppressing the main character's strength, and the main character seemed like a fool.

When I saw Chapter 10: Eliminating the Female Ghost, my back felt numb. The author's writing style is very good. With this level of writing style and plot control, it should be a good book.

After watching half of it, let's briefly talk about my feelings. Personally, I still like this setting very much, and the protagonist is also my favorite sand sculpture type protagonist. But at first glance, and after careful reading, the biggest feeling is that it is awkward. The strength setting is not on target. The foreign spirits and awakened ones are said to be powerful, but the result is still in the low martial arts category. Like the possessed supernatural spirit and Lu Yu's very special abilities, the original target is at least medium martial arts, but the result is low martial arts to solve. What's even more awkward is that these two events have so much foreshadowing and could have been a close-up of the climax, but in the end the BOSS jumps out to fight the protagonist. Since you want to forcibly increase the protagonist's ability, don't set the enemy's ability to be so outrageous. In the end, it will be too high to go low, which will be very uncomfortable to watch. I have seen people using cannons to kill mosquitoes, but I have never seen people use a knife to chop Godzilla. In the end, the knife actually killed Godzilla. It turns out that Godzilla is made of paper. Do you understand this feeling? This is the feeling that this book has given me so far. Originally, the setting of Goldfinger was novel and interesting. However, I had the desire to write a refreshing novel, but I didn't have the consciousness to write a refreshing novel. I spent a lot of time to conceive a lofty plot, and was very picky about cheating. The author imagined that if the protagonist had been equipped with the Huntian Treasure Book during the two plots of the possessed spirit and Lu Yu, and finally defeated the enemy in a crushing way, there would be no sense of violation. On the contrary, it would increase the enemy's strength and add a bit of excitement to the perception. After all, the possessed spirit can definitely compete with the Thousand-faced Demon of the Supreme Being. At that stage, Xiao Mengdu had already learned the Ananda Breaking Ring Sword, and Qi Zhengyan had practiced several levels of the Huntian Treasure Mirror. But you, who have only reached the 3rd level of the four low-level martial arts, can solve this problem. Then this Wouldn't it be awkward to practice a few low martial arts to perfection to break the void? After all, the progress of the appearance is arranged according to the weirdness of the opponent's ability. At that time, if the enemy is not strong enough to defeat Yang Shen, isn't it awkward?

Don't overwhelm your combat power in the Invincible style. You should learn from Fang Zheng, who has a demonic aura here, so that you won't get this result.

The content is good, but the writer is very bad. Although I can't write, keep up the good work.

Eight points for creativity, three points for writing power, five points for plot, summary: food and grass

The premise of being funny is that you are invincible. Every plot is like trying to survive in a crack. This battle is too overwhelming.

Sexy operation, forced to operate.

It is a novel that I like very much. I am a martial arts fan, so the setting of martial arts skills is very attractive to me, and it looks very relaxing. The mysterious recovery is indeed a bit scary for me, but I also like the subject, so I particularly like this recovery subject because it is not so scary. The author also writes very well, without all the bells and whistles of Stallion. I can completely read it. Good luck to the author.

I saw the charge stamp, so I ordered it and read a bit. The beginning was pretty good and interesting, but the world described later was a bit too dark. I can't say that there are really no good people in it, but there are very few good people, and most of the bad feelings are perverts. . It looks a bit depressing, which is not my style. . Just see this

As the saying goes, there are three golden chapters. The first three pictures are already enough, and the next few pictures are also at a very good level. When I met the mysterious resurgence, it lacked a bit of terror, but it was a bit more silly and refreshing. Horror, systematic, not a stallion, not a holy mother, punchy to the flesh, and written fluently. This is my feeling from the few chapters I have read so far. If the author continues to write at this level, the great master will not be able to escape. He only needs to accumulate and promote it. Come on 😁

I would like to ask if the male protagonist is a eunuch?

Please post more fanart pictures (sad)