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The recent plot has been so unpalatable that I gave up reading it.

In order to save the strange woman and child who broke into the martial arts hall, the master was poisoned to death, the senior brother was beaten to death, and he fought to save the child.

It's really not good. It's different from mainstream cool novels. It was a routine many years ago. The protagonist highlights the passion of a young man and then loses it. It's better to write about an aborigine. This time traveler identity is useless at all. Overall, it's okay. It's a good book, but the protagonist is a bit too passionate, which is awkward and seems to be brainless.

Chopping firewood all night, you have some common sense to chop firewood at night, okay? You try to chop firewood at night, you don't have any common sense.

Abuse of the main article? And it's mindless abuse. Bookworm retreats

At 12 pictures, why is your ten-year-old blood Ganoderma missing! ! ! ! ! ! I haven't seen you use it either! ! ! Is this author so ignorant?

Madonna-type protagonists are not my cup of tea. If you have the ability, you can help them. But if you don't have the ability to act like a Madonna, it's disgusting.

Damn it, after learning martial arts for one month, you can kill 800 bandits. And you are not a genius. You can only practice physical training in one month. This is no ordinary bandit, this is a bandit who dares to destroy the village.

The protagonist has no B points. I don't even know how much I weigh, so I just know how to save people.

Please review your introduction yourself. Do you think it is suitable for the time-traveling protagonist and the ignorant boy? No one is in the mood to watch you slowly grow up mentally.

I really didn't expect it to be a novel in 2022. It would have been okay if she had written this kind of novel 50 years ago.

Training with concealed weapons is the cheapest, and it's much better than chopping firewood. Throwing stones every day is enough, and it doesn't cost any money. You can practice whenever you want. You can develop skills with no skills like chopping firewood, but there's no reason why you can't master concealed weapons throwing, right? Carry a few knives or a dozen sharp-pointed stones with you. If you hit the head and neck, at least half of your combat effectiveness will be lost. Isn't it better than rushing forward stupidly with a fist and axe?

It's understandable to chop wood for others in the city, but in the village? For the first time, those who have a man at home don't need you, and those who don't have a man at home have trouble feeding themselves, let alone giving you money? The county government sent people to Heifeng Village to pick people up? I don't understand, I didn't consider the plot properly.

It's too much, and modern people have no wisdom at all when traveling to the past.

The most useless protagonist in Qidian. After having the system, he killed his master and senior brother because he saved a woman...

Is there no money or food in Heifeng Village? Just set it on fire?

Damn it, this plot is based on the routine of martial arts novels from decades ago

I don't know what the author is thinking. He also said that as a time traveler, even the indigenous people will save money and learn advanced martial arts. After almost 200 chapters, they still can't even perform ordinary martial arts or light kung fu.

A book with too neat chapter titles will have poor writing style. Advice from a 10-year old bookworm. All the energy was spent on compiling the chapter table of contents.

In the third golden chapter, as soon as the protagonist starts practicing martial arts, the village where the protagonist grew up is written and wiped out. What did the author think?

You believed in the government before, but when you came to the Xuntian Prison, you never thought of asking for help?

If you don't look at it, get out. Now if there isn't much, then sharks will have more.

If you like Jianghu vendetta, you can watch it.

The author's writing skills are very good, but the plot of this book is not popular.