My Jinyiwei Girlfriend

After writing 150,000 words, many writing problems that I had not thought of before were exposed. Obviously, before writing each chapter, I made a detailed outline a day in advance, but as soon as I wrote it, I wrote it crookedly. I didn't follow the detailed outline, causing the plot to become more and more crooked. The chain reaction is: some plots that I wanted to write were not written, and some plots that I didn't want to write were crammed in in order to continue, so I stopped for a day. The most important thing is procrastination. I haven't noticed that my procrastination is so serious even if I don't write novels 😭😭😭 I started to adjust my status this month and sprinted to put it on the shelves.

Please change the fourth and twelfth pictures! Looking at it now, I don't see the shining point of the male protagonist at all. I haven't asked the female protagonist to take other people's money to pay off the debt without authorization. I just gave 1.5 Million as promised. Didn't I consider the future of myself and the female protagonist? Does the hero owe his ex-girlfriend? Seriously, now that I've read this book, it's all about the heroine! Skip the male protagonist directly. I hope this male protagonist's character can be changed. Personally, I think the male protagonist is the biggest poisonous point in this book. It's a personal idea, please don't comment, I hope you will adopt it, thank you!

True snow

The beginning was good, but later on I wrote about ancient martial arts families and foreign powers. These things won't really appear in the end, right? I originally thought it would be a sweet urban love drama, but don't end up making it into a fantasy drama!

How do people usually praise beautiful women? Can you teach me something in the comments?

My vision is not wrong, come on!

I haven't finished it yet, but after reading the first few chapters, I think the author is a novice in writing. Some of the sentences in the first few chapters are not very smooth, and the meanings are not well connected. It is difficult to get into it when reading. The author can learn personal pronouns. He can usually read more books and practice sentences here. It is not rigorous but smooth. Accumulate some materials, so that he will be more fluent when writing. Articles on love are more challenging. The writing style needs to be described more delicately. The author can work hard in this aspect. The main content of the article remains the same, and the sub-line is written around daily life. Other elements can be appropriately mixed (it is recommended to focus on daily life, otherwise it will easily collapse in the later period). The author can learn more about the writing methods of other big guys in the industry. There are also relevant training and skills at the starting point that all authors can learn about (it is purely a suggestion not to criticize if you don't like it).

I want to hit the male protagonist!

You are so poisonous, you are so poisonous, you are so poisonous, poisonous, poisonous

Chapter 12: Change it, don't be afraid of trouble

Why write about China Entertainment well? I lost most of my interest in an instant, and no one knew what Huayu was like. If you look at Huayuwen, you are less interested in this kind of natural girlfriend who has a girlfriend. If you are disgusted with Huayuwen, you will lose most of the audience of entertainment articles.

It would be okay if only the male and female protagonists were extraordinary, but there would be a lot of them later, which would be boring.

Really cut? 😰😰😰

What to do with the ring? Still playing games