Witcher Harker

A new witcher fanfic, I personally give it three stars The protagonist is a wolf-sect witcher who was picked up by Ciri and White Wolf and then went to the training class in Kaer Morhan. He has very little ancient blood ability + data system Poison point 1. The protagonist starts directly from the timeline of The Witcher 3, completely ignoring the timeline of the original work and The Witcher 1 and 2. The general direction of the plot remains unchanged, which can be explained by the fact that the protagonist is training, but you should not let White Wolf do it alone to rescue Ciri. In the context that the Wolf Faction is unwilling to train new demon hunters, how the Wolf Faction agrees to the protagonist's revival of the school, and how the protagonist directly ignores the plot of the Wolf Faction's sense of belonging, so that it reads quite bluntly (It is recommended that the author insert recall stories in the subsequent writing) Poison Point 2, as a data flow, the protagonist's data template The ability is extremely broken, which is a common problem in similar online novels (It is recommended that the author re-adjust the template data value) Poisonous point 3: The original sorceress may be an important role, but this one has no characteristics of the original sorceress at all. Instead, she looks like a Mary Sue + a neurotic brain circuit. The interaction between the protagonist and the sorceress is also very speechless. The part about saving the white wolf with a kiss is even more poisonous. (It is recommended not to write an emotional line, marginalize this character, or change a new person) Poison point four, the protagonist fights the water ghosts and demons with the front foot, and kills the baron and his men with the back foot. Leaving aside other issues of combat power, Kaer Mohan is a school for demon hunters, not a school for assassins or a brotherhood of assassins. It kills giant and weak monsters and kills people without any psychological pressure (the author did not write out the previous plot), and the sense of fragmentation is serious. The author's writing level is above average, probably around 70 points. I hope to make some progress in the future and stop being unfinished

I hope the protagonist is not too short. Geralt is 1.88 Meters tall and the protagonist should also be 1.9 Meters 😏

I was numb when I saw him kissing that sorceress

When I saw the sorceress rescuing Huck from the Baron, I felt like the protagonist was still weak despite having a lot of abilities. Why? Logically speaking, Huck has to be Ciri's teleport, and his ability can be moved directly without moving forward And having the protagonist act stupid every time and causing the plot really affects the perception. At least for me, I have no feeling at all and even feel a little disgusted with this heroine I may have been a little emotional after reading it in one sitting today, and I may come back to watch it when I am more than 150 years old But don't overestimate the protagonist's strength, and don't describe such a difficult emotional line. The senses are really not good.

You used sword oil to kill several water ghosts. Where did this wealthy demon hunter come from?

The choice of skills is outrageous. You set the mutation skill to be very rare, and then go to Mirror Lake to create a Mist Hide and Swift at the beginning, both of which cost 50 mana. The Mist Hide requires fog to be used, but it only adds 20% speed. The fog is blown away, and neither smell nor footsteps can hide these shortcomings. Swiftness directly increases the speed by 100%, and then choose the fog to hide. It has not been used in actual combat in more than 40 chapters, but it was demonstrated once. Every time you describe a battle scene, you talk about extreme speed and agility, so why not choose agility? The skill combination is totally lacking, so you choose randomly?

There are many themes like this that can't hold up to 200 chapters, just eunuchs

When I first looked at it, I thought it was food. After watching it, I realized that the plot is boring and the protagonist is powerful and disgusting.

How can I put it, the author's writing is pretty good, and the plot is currently arranged reasonably, but there is one thing that the author has noticed. It is very unreasonable for you to arrange the timeline of the plot directly at the beginning of The Witcher 3. You directly skipped the first two parts of the plot of The Witcher game. It is very unreasonable! Because from the prologue and the beginning, it seems that the protagonist entered the Wolf sect with Ciri to study. If you start directly from the plot of The Witcher 3, how would you explain the period from the end of the original work to The Witcher 1?

The power system collapsed at the beginning. If you continue to write like this, you will either be a master of magic tricks with all kinds of fancy scraping skills, or you will be an existence that can destroy the country by one person. One person will hunt wildly alone. He is so powerful.

It feels like the protagonist has been deliberately suppressed recently. Whether it is force or intelligence (especially intelligence), the protagonist is a bit useless. I don't know the author's intention. .

The last Witcher I read was better written by God-level Witcher. There are too few writing about Witcher 3. I hope the author can work harder 🙂

Great, The Witcher, so well written.

Aside from the male and female protagonists, the scenes are pretty good, but just like the god-level demon hunter over there, should they be called Mary Sues? (It's a romantic drama) The heroine learns from an elf to show off her emotional intelligence (she's not an elf in the first place, but she still has this kind of emotional intelligence) The author made a joke about a planeswalker in the early stage, which was a bit off and a little twitchy. It's not really a planeswalker, but it's still there to threaten the mirror master. The key is to be a fucking threat. The mirror makes the wizard almost invincible. He is a high-end demon who can harvest souls crazily in the wizarding world. He controlled the protagonist, but was fucking interrupted by a sorceress (female protagonist). The key is that this sorceress didn't perform very well later on, she just had strong control.

I have never been able to understand one thing, which makes me feel that the protagonist's IQ is a bit insufficient. The protagonist can teleport, has storage space, and has a hand crossbow in the space. He can fire it quickly. Why can't he teleport to someone else's shoulder and give a crossbow to a certain Duke? Maybe the head is too hard, so shooting in the chest will do! Or why can't the protagonist teleport away like Tracer if he has the talent to make bombs? Has intelligence really been trained into muscle?

Amber flow? Can you really describe that taste? If I can write it down and stick with it, I will definitely order them all...

The sorceress part pissed me off. If you don't know how to write emotional lines, you can write less. It's so embarrassing.

The protagonist has been drifting with the crowd and is a completely thoughtless tool man. It is recommended to ride alone and cut down everything by yourself!

Everyone, those who are still reading can take a look! New books are on the shelves and need to be read in order to be recommended! Let us shine together! 😸😺😻😼