Swallowing the Starry Sky: Traveling Through Li Wei, Just Resurrected

The author, I cannot blindly emphasize the highest level in Devouring. Just like the latest chapter, it looks very depressing. The sources of depression are: first, the protagonist is too weak. Although he has an identity at the Hunyuan level, to be honest, his combat power is only the warrior level, which is too weak. The protagonist appears to be too weak everywhere, Secondly, you have not grasped the essence of Swallowing Starry Sky. I don't know if you have read Lord of All Things. The current length is very similar to Lord of All Things. First of all, you have to understand that the original work of Swallowing Starry Sky is a cool novel, and you cannot break away from the framework of a cool novel when writing a fan. Your current conspiracy theory is too depressing, and the mastermind behind the scenes is destined not to be popular in Swallowing Starry Sky. It is recommended that the plot of Luo Feng's game with the mastermind behind the scenes be cut. Finally, I would like to say less about plots in which people are tricked by others. Even if you don't want to write mindlessly cool stories, they still have to be cool stories. Do you think readers will feel happy when they are frequently backstabbed, framed, and assassinated? The writing style of this book is much better than most other novels, but if the overall tone does not conform to the framework of Devouring, readers will not be able to buy it.

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