People of the Motherland in the Super World

Well done and very enjoyable to write, but it's only a few chapters long and the protagonist's force level has increased so quickly. How to write about it later? You can't just change the map when the level has reached the end.

I feel that Pigfoot is not a pure native of the motherland, and of course, he is not a superman. What I refer to here is his character, more like when he was weak, in order to survive, he swallowed his anger and suffered hardships. All the troubles were hidden in his heart. When he has the power, he can talk to the current world on an equal footing. , Completely free from the moral and legal constraints of the world (here it refers to being able to defeat the strongest armed forces in the world, ignoring public opinion in the heart, and not being bound by morality in the usual sense). The official has absolutely nothing to do with him, and he will not accept soft and hard, and will not accept oil or salt. At this time, you will do things and behave according to the ideas born from your childhood experiences In short, if someone does not offend me, I will not offend others. If someone offends me, hey, if you feel that you will be retaliated against, and if the other party is capable of retaliating, or even resorts to crazy means, then I'm sorry. Those who are kind to me are good, and those who are evil to me are evil. If you don't want to bear the possibility of being retaliated, then you can only eliminate the root cause. After all, you are invincible. Why should you live according to other people's ideas? You can guarantee not to take the initiative to harm others, that's all. But it is basically impossible. People who are used to being aloof and in power will not allow uncontrolled things to happen. They are used to taking their own actions as a matter of course as laws. They will definitely try their best to control them. Then the two sides of the pig's feet conflict. This is probably the case with the pig's feet. Suddenly, when I think of this kind of eradication, I can refer to Baili Hydrogen Madness, "Everyone is in the enemy's country within a short distance"

After reading Chapter 42, there are currently no logic bugs or emotional thinking errors. The protagonist has super-level abilities. Ordinary people have a bit of a drifting mentality after gaining powerful abilities. The time-travelers have a unique player mentality and have their own bottom line (at least there has been no cross-line situation yet). Don't bring in people from the motherland. The protagonist does not lack love, but is decisive in killing. (Stack a buff). Is the protagonist a time-traveler who suddenly gained near-invincible abilities as an ordinary person, or an ordinary human god with relatives and friends who has experienced doing good deeds and being harmed in return. ps: Those who don't like murder and arson, cannot accept decisive killing, and cannot understand the thinking of time travellers, can leave directly. Those who don't like the non-orphan (descriptive, not scolding) protagonist can leave. ps: The author has never considered changing the partition. Light novels, heavens, and strange are all better than moving to the city.

Don't you insist on reading a book to become a god? Who do you think you are

After reading Chapter 5, the protagonist lets himself go when he has the power? You don't even know if there is anything in this world that threatens you, so you act unscrupulously? I'm not an orphan. Do you want to become a big devil who is the enemy of the world so quickly? It is said that it is a pity that Big Super does not use his brain. The protagonist has abandoned his reason and is completely swallowed up by desire. He will wait for a year or two and then use his super brain as his ability to join the empire to explore the deeper aspects of the world. When he becomes invincible, he can directly rule the world. Those who achieve great things must stay calm.

I've never seen a government agency, or an agency like this, push people to death from the very beginning. Don't you feel sick to the author of such an old-fashioned plot?

A suggestion to the author, since you are writing about Superman, then implement invincibility to the end. Don't say that Superman is not invincible from time to time, because the world view you wrote does not seem to be the kind of existence that can defeat Superman. Qidian has written dozens of novels about Superman, and none of them has been criticized, because all of them are selling sheep over dogs. As a person who is attracted to Superman, most people would first want the protagonist to bask in the sun and become invincible before coming down, instead of coming to swim as soon as he wakes up, and then meeting a strong man and then hiding in the sun in despair. It would be strange if this kind of writing is not scolded. It is the same routine as other fantasy novels, and it is nothing more than a faster upgrade time.

After reading a few chapters, I can tell you that even though it was weak in the early stage, it was still so bad, honestly. If it weren't for the protagonist, he would have been killed in the previous chapters. Reading between the lines, it seems that the protagonist was a soldier in his previous life, just such a soldier. Killings on the spot inside government agencies. You just traveled through time, so it's okay not to agree with it, but after all, my country has been in power for more than 150 years, so there are merits no matter what. Once he became a superman, he was the boss of Heaven and the second child of himself. He was completely in a bad state of mind. Fortunately, he was not a cultivator, otherwise he would have gone crazy. It's not that the article says it's not a parallel universe or Great China. Otherwise, just write it like this for ghosts to read. In any kind of society, government departments are full of rat shit. We have already explained that the country is currently suffering from internal and external troubles, as well as alien races. The country can still guarantee the lives of ordinary people. There is no redeeming feature in this country, and the Alien Management Bureau has no redeeming features. The protagonist killed someone in the Alien Management Bureau, crashed into several buildings, and killed many civilians. Can't see

Quickly read Chapter 4, I guarantee you will see the brothers of our ancestors die of poison, and they are simply selling sheep over dogs! Slipped away

Does the author have an outline? It's really fun to write about the protagonist being unscrupulous now, but how to maintain this feeling of fun in the future?

I thought I had found a good dark Superman novel, but a few chapters into it, I saw that it was Tuo Xiang. Someone gave me a monthly pass, and I was speechless.

Chapter 25 is so disgusting that you feel like vomiting. A stranger threatens you with jumping off a building, but you compromise. Are you still a citizen of the motherland?

It's too self-indulgent and contains too many private goods, so it's not recommended to eat it!

You can be anti-human, but you can't be anti-human.

Tsk tsk tsk! I decided to read this book after reading his reviews. Then I regretted it after reading Chapter 8. He kept pushing Lai Lai, saying that he had a bottom line. But as soon as he started, he beat people to death. Let's not talk about his relatives who have traveled through time. Just say he is a time traveler. How old is he? If you kill people at the slightest disagreement, you bastard, you might as well not say that you have a bottom line in the first place. The main character to me is a paranoid person. In addition, I lacked love since childhood. I really admire him for being able to read Chapter 42.

? Understand

To be honest, the protagonist lives up to the title of the book, and it is quite refreshing. However, the more I read, the more I feel a senseless fire rising. The anger is too strong, which affects my mood. I still like the kind of LSP plus a talkative person, which can make people laugh, rather than make readers feel inexplicably depressed. Of course, it is not impossible to empathize, but it feels like it is a bit too hard. The above is purely a personal opinion, and I don't say that the author is bad. Uh-huh, I'm leaving.

As soon as I awakened my ability, I encountered three extraordinary events in one day. The more than ten years of my previous life were like living in vain. You said you saw it because you awakened your ability, but what you heard is okay. This plot makes it look like the malicious intention of heaven...

When a beast comes out of the cage, it needs to hunt continuously to determine its position in the food chain and demarcate its hunting grounds. Why do people make trouble and test the protagonist all day long? Because they don't know how heavy the price is! When you become a button that destroys the world, no one will press your button, they will spontaneously support you...

After reading fourteen chapters, I can only say that it is a daily introduction. It talks about the setting in long paragraphs, and the logic is a bit confusing. Although the subject matter is good, the writing is unbearable, so I gave up.

If I had the superhuman ability to kill all the black and red people in Sugar Mountain immediately, and then kill them all over the country,

It was fine at first, but when I wrote about women, it immediately changed.

The book itself is good. This is probably the performance of an ordinary person after gaining superhuman powers. It is not as twisted as the people of the motherland. Maybe the Virgin bitches will not understand it.

Let's talk about the update. From Monday to Friday, there will be one chapter around 7 o'clock and one chapter before 12 o'clock. It will be earlier on weekends. The author is writing a book for the first time and is not working full-time. He usually only has time to write at noon and evening. Although I can't write 10,000 words a day like Tentacle Monster, I can try to keep two updates a day, and maybe a little more on weekends. Ps: The newbie has little experience and has no preparation to save the manuscript Please also support me from all readers, Crab~

It feels a bit of a pity. It feels a bit boring after switching from the original plot to Marvel. Although the original plot also involves killing and killing, at least there is a foreshadowing. He and his family are killed only after the 13 hits the door. However, Marvel just kills and kills if they don't like it. Moreover, it is a nuclear bomb that explodes a fish pond. After watching the scene where he shoots up the frozen ice, he doesn't want to watch it anymore. The review is too strict, either 404 or it becomes boring.

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Fortunately, I jumped to see it. When to stop loss🙂

This book is not interesting. Of course, if you like violence, you can read it. The male protagonist is not a person defined by reality. He has no sympathy for others and has the ability to transform from an ordinary person to a citizen of the motherland. In fact, for online articles, it is not a problem to write the protagonist as inhumane, but there are not many such writings because it will be criticized. The pace of the male protagonist is too fast. The meaning and foreshadowing are not as deep as Korean food. It is too abrupt. In fact, it is written that for this kind of protagonist setting, it is best to understand some psychological knowledge. This kind of thing can be attributed to the unfortunate tendency of violence since childhood. It does not consider whether there is a more powerful person who does something that poses a potential threat to the family. At least find out or do something behind the scenes. Maybe the author thought of a setting where there is a super criminal in the family and everyone in the family is fine? These bureaus don't understand human relations and accidents. I don't think they will abide by this setting. Normally, you hide and your family threatens you to come out. Forget it, I wish you become platinum soon

A middle school novel written by a middle school boy...

The writing is in line with common sense. How can there be so many Holy Mothers in the world? After all, the first law of the end of the world is to kill the Holy Mother first.