After the Immortals Disappeared

This map was posted in the book review area in the early stage and has been modified several times based on the opinions of many book friends. It will be continuously modified and improved in the future. I hope everyone will give you more opinions It will continue to be updated in the future 😁😁😁 I was on a business trip a few days ago and didn't have time to update. I have time today, so I will make a small change first: a lot of place names have been added. , Modified the problem of Panlong Desert being close to the sea, adjusted the position of Rongshan Sect, bordered Blade Port and Bailie, and added Fu Kingdom 😊 Thank you for your help and suggestions. We will continue to update them in the future. There is an error in the mutual positions of Bejiamu Kingdom and Shining Gold Plains, which may be changed in the future. Thank you for your attention 🌹🌹

Hastily drawn Master Sun🥺

Starting from the conclusion, this book is a rare good book. When I found it, it had been updated for two years, and it only took half a month to catch up with the progress. Whether it was the character portrayal, the richness of the plot, the ingenious conception, or the sense of rhythm, I was satisfied and satisfied. But after I caught up with the update progress, the book gradually faded from view. I extremely suspected that the data of this book was not good. (The current plot has developed to the point where the protagonist has just arrived in Yao Kingdom) Looking at the comments, some people say that the plot is delayed, some say that the description is too detailed, some say that there is too much psychological description, and some say that the Panlong City part does not want to be read, but this is not the essence of the problem. The core of the problem is that the author's writing style cannot adapt to the rhythm of daily novels, and the external manifestation is that everyone feels that the volume is too small and not enough to read. The evaluations given by readers who have not caught up with the progress and those who are already catching up will probably be divided into two levels. Any plot in this book requires several chapters to be read consecutively to be complete, so it will inevitably lead to a long period of time for everyone to read the book, and the real-time data will become worse. After a month of reading, the reading experience will be greatly reduced because the plot has been forgotten. Human energy is limited, and it is impossible to update every day while maintaining quality. Therefore, how to maintain popularity is a problem common to all daily novels. I have some immature suggestions on how to make this good book more adaptable to the daily rhythm, and they are put forward for discussion only. First of all, let's change the current ghostly way of breaking up chapters. Just forcibly cut off the plot and stop the challenge? The last few sentences of each chapter are crucial to maintaining the popularity, because the memory of it will last up to 24 hours, leaving a reasonable, thought-provoking, and artistic ending. It will not only create a sense of completeness, but also stimulate readers' desire to leave messages, allowing readers to spontaneously comment on the last sentence. The continuous guessing and discussion not only makes people feel involved, but also increases the length of each chapter, greatly alleviating the problem of small quantity caused by insufficient daily updates. For novels with good data, the last sentence of each chapter must be the most commented. This book fails to take advantage of this at all. Second, even if you write slower and put more golden sentences, there should be a few interesting sentences in each chapter to attract comments. Whether it is the author's complaints, funny jokes or jokes, readers must be guided to comment. Excellent comments will enrich the reading experience and create a positive cycle. The most important feature of genuine novels at present is readers' comments. Many readers come here just to read the comments. Good comments can significantly extend readers' reading time and keep readers excited for a longer period of time, thereby alleviating the problem of low daily updates. This book lacks this carefully designed feeling of excitement, so there are very few comments on each chapter. Third, naturally put some reminders about the past. Due to various reasons, readers will keep the book for a long time, and often they cannot remember the plot and characters when they come back to read it. At this time, naturally putting one or two reminders can reduce this frustration. There should not be too much of this kind of content. If it is not appropriate to put it in the main text, make full use of comments and guide or organize representatives of the Justice Historian discipline to mention them in the comments. Characters that have not appeared for a long time and plots that have been foreshadowed in the past can be dealt with in this way. Finally, I am not a person in the field of writing novels, and the suggestions I give may be superficial, but I sincerely hope that this novel, which is good in all aspects, can develop better. This book will be completed in the future, or will be published as a paper book, and the reading experience will be very good, but if it does not adapt to the current fast pace, I worry that it will not be popular until it dies violently, which would be a pity. I really hope to see the day when Commander He and Master Sun achieve righteous cultivation and He Shenzun defeats all the demons.

I praised this book a year and a half ago. It was really good. I found this book from more than 100 monthly votes. At that time, I felt that this book would do well. It is not toxic in the early stage, and the plot is not procrastinating and exciting. But now the writing is really too slow. Many places can be omitted. I wrote a hundred chapters in a small copy of "Don't Confiscate My Citizenship" that I abandoned before. I am really speechless. After fifty days of updates, I have conquered several subordinates. The problem with this book is that hegemony is not what the author is good at. The author writes travel notes very well, but when it comes to hegemony, many parts of the writing are not rigorous. In terms of military training alone, can a qualified army be trained in a few months? Military training should start in two years, but in the current part, it feels that the protagonist's army is already very elite. I hope the author can write more about what he is good at and keep other parts simple. For example, if he is not good at military training, he can be brief and rigorous in carrying it through. The plot also advances faster. A friend said it well. It took dozens of chapters to defeat a general, and it really dragged on. What everyone wants to see is the protagonist conquering the world. That is the highlight. The current plot is not attractive at all. What is the use of creating an image of the protagonist conquering evil and promoting good? It is more attractive to create an image of the protagonist conquering the world and collecting incense I gave some personal opinions piecemeal. Overall, I hope this book is better

I invited He Lingchuan to drink a latte, giving him a comfortable environment and letting him quietly immerse himself in the fragrance of books and coffee. Matcha latte is a drink with a rich taste and strong matcha aroma. It's unique and delicious, combining the flavors of coffee and matcha beautifully.

At the beginning of this book, everyone is invited to eat boiled cabbage, various soups and soups, simmered slowly and carefully, and the heat is enough to emphasize the freshness. If you are too impatient, you will not be able to taste the food. But without these foreshadowings, how can we show the big fish and meat behind? Then we have vigorous sea fishing and a Manchu-Han banquet. If you are not satisfied even with this, I will treat you to dragon liver and phoenix marrow later on, which you cannot taste anywhere else. Old diners all know this. After all, they have been eating here for eight years, and their appetites have long been gone, so they want to see if I can come up with new tricks. But if you want to eat better and better from beginning to end, you have to be patient. The most important thing is to have a sense of humility.

Autumn is here, so of course you have to treat He Lingchuan to drink the latest durian series of drinks. After repeated preparations and tests, the R&D team finally found the right durian and its partner. The Houdao durian series launched this time is divided into two types: Houdao Coconut Durian and Hondao Mango Durian. The raw coconut version mainly consists of durian puree + cool jelly + meat + raw coconut milk, etc., Focusing on the richness of durian; the durian version is durian puree with diced mango, cool jelly, etc. The durian and mango version has a slightly lower proportion of durian, which is suitable for first-timers. When the sweet-scented osmanthus leaves the branches and turns into a osmanthus rain, in order to retain the fragrant fragrance of autumn, come and drink the Gu Ming Honest Durian series of drinks! Delete the brackets for 50 cents in this article

Let me first talk about some of my personal views on this book. The story structure and combat power system of this book are a bit like "One Piece". Different chapters correspond to different copies, and there are no clear restrictions on combat power levels. This structure is very suitable for telling stories one after another, and it also makes it easier for readers to focus on the story itself. However, this will also have a big flaw, that is, it is not easy to develop the world view in the early stage, and it is difficult for some readers to survive the relatively less exciting stage in the early stage. Coupled with the debuff of the author's first male channel, the early potential of the new book has yet to be tapped. Let's talk about the characterization of the characters. The description of the characters in this book is relatively delicate, but it lacks tension and does not make readers feel goosebumps all over their bodies. Stories can be fascinating, but it's the people who resonate. I think this resonant core is mainly the unyielding and fighting spirit of the characters. For example, the sentence in "The Immortal Rebellion": "We, the monks, would rather fight"; for example, the red-haired monster... There are too many red-haired monsters, and he is a master of this. For example, in "One Piece" Robin shouted: "I want to live" on the Judiciary Island, and Sauron folded his arms and calmly said: "Nothing happened" when he was suffering great pain and bleeding all over the ground. Stories have a shelf life in people's hearts, but the spirit of the characters is like a brand. Even if the plot of the story is forgotten many years later, the thought of such a famous scene still makes one's blood boil with excitement, and there is an urge to open the starting point and complete the novel. In short, this book is a rare masterpiece. I hope the author can take things as his bones and people as his soul to bring readers one feast after another. Come on!

The tail of midsummer has not yet left, but the beginning of autumn has already arrived in a hurry. I still remember the bowl of apricot cheese that Miss Qingge prepared for Lingchuan. It was warm and fragrant. It also had flowers and fruits in it, which was very fresh and delicious. Therefore, for the first cup of milk tea in autumn, taro paste almond milk tea (added with flowers and fruits), of course I want to invite the intellectual and considerate Li Qingge ~ I hope she can also taste the mellow and sweet delicious milk tea, and stay young and happy forever!