The Mortal Cultivation System of a Demon-Refining Master
炼魔高手的凡人修仙系统
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 133k Words
- Genre
- Xianxia
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
73Chapters
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324Recs
0Fans
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Did no one really watch it? 😭😭😭
Family members, I want to rewrite the previous chapters, enrich the plot of the story, and highlight the character of the protagonist, so that we can clearly understand the reasons why the protagonist makes this choice. The main line of the story will not be changed, but some details will be added. However, there are too many chapters in the past, which may affect the speed of subsequent updates. I can only guarantee one chapter and two thousand words a day.
Please don't insult mortals. The Legend of Immortality is good. Holy Mother Bitch
Brothers who have read it, can you please go to QQ to read and add it to your favorites? Please 😭
The writing style and ideas are very good, and the storyline is quite reasonable. I don't understand why it is not popular. Is it because the word count is too few?
The more you write, the better. Come on, author!
It would be nice if there were more updates every day. Two thousand words is enough for anyone to read, and they are updated in the middle of the night...
It feels a bit like a copy of the original work, and the storyline has basically not been changed.
I have been following the update from the beginning until now. Although there are only about 120,000 words now, I can clearly feel the author's progress in writing, plot, and character structure. Many things about the original work are also well analyzed. The author also works very hard to write his own things based on the original work. The shaping of the protagonist is the type I like. There is not too much fighting and killing, it is more about the exchange of interests. It is a bit too calm in the early stage, and the sudden attack in the battle later is a bit abrupt. Some are too dependent on external objects and do not pay attention to the improvement of one's own strength. The emotional lines with other characters are a bit... Well, I just don't feel that the protagonist has feelings for other characters. They are all used. It is a bit too cold-blooded, making it difficult for people to substitute. Other changes in the plot are very innovative and reasonable. The simultaneous destruction of Spirit Beast Mountain and the Yan family is a bit unexpected, but it feels reasonable. The items issued by the system are a bit too advanced and difficult to grasp. In addition, the system has gradually been weakened later, and it feels like a classical cultivation of immortality. Generally speaking, the writing style is good, but the portrayal of the characters' emotions needs to be improved.
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