Your Old Man Isn't Some Reckless Fool

The protagonist's combat power is 15,000, while the supporting characters' combat power is 150. The author exclaims, "This isn't an invincible story! Because I added a setting to the protagonist: 90% of his attacks will miss!"

This is too drawn out. And with an invincible physique, the speed should be overwhelming. Can you please stop deliberately suppressing the protagonist to drag out the plot? Is a wish-fulfillment story really that interesting if it's not satisfying? What kind of new era writing approach is this?

First of all, this isn't an invincible story. The protagonist is just an "ordinary person" who has come into contact with the supernatural, at most possessing a slightly stronger physical body. His only apparent supernatural ability is mind reading. In this supernatural world, some of the abilities of monsters and humans are governed by rules, and he's waging an intelligence war.

You never paid attention to details from the start. You're a time traveler with mind-reading abilities, and you've become a so-called tycoon. Nobody told you your daughter was involved in underground boxing matches? You only found out by using mind-reading. What have you been doing for the past fifty-odd years? Not a single connection to your network?

I just want to know when the protagonist's daughter and son-in-law will realize how powerful he is. It's already published, and they still don't know! Don't tell me it won't be until two or three hundred chapters later.

Author, if you're not writing an invincible story, then don't portray the protagonist as so powerful. Deliberately downplaying his strength and dragging out the pace is also problematic.

So this book is also known as "Extraordinary Pretend Play", right?

So pretentious and naive, yet constantly pretending to be low-key and innocent? That's fucking ridiculous! Treating readers like idiots, damn it, that's going too far!

The plot was quite good, although I occasionally felt there were some bugs in the characters, plot, or settings, but for me, the flaws didn't outweigh the merits. The atmosphere was relatively lighthearted, with some humorous moments. Currently, the protagonist's abilities are clearly defined: practically invincible in physical combat, possessing mind-reading abilities, but when it comes to…

This is a very good story. The characters are well-developed, the plot is decent, and the ability systems are well-designed. What I liked most was the pacing of the battles. Each battle wasn't monotonous; it wasn't just a simple encounter where the strongest fighter won. Every battle required strategic thinking, much like the fighting style in JoJo's Bizarre Adventure.