The World of Heavens Begins with One Person's Martial Arts World

I just finished reading the book and I feel very tired. How should I put it? The author has a certain level of skill, but he is too showy. I don't know if this is the author's own style, or if it was written like this on purpose. Anyway, the author's writing style is a bit floating. It feels like reading Gu Long's book, trying to make expensive food through relatively high-end sentences. But this is an online novel, a small stall on the street. We read for leisure, so reading this book is too tiring. I hope the author can work hard to tell a good story.

The author, you write about the heavens. It seems that you want to write from low martial arts to mythology. You have to skip some worlds with similar levels. The first world has reached its ceiling, so why go to the Republic of China? It's just like Huang Feihong and Huo Yuanjia. There is no sense of satisfaction from going from weak to strong, just to pretend to be cool in the Republic of China, but this kind of pretending is so realistic that it cannot be substituted, because it will create a sense of alienation from the previous one. You can just jump to Xiaoao. If you have Xiaoao, try to skip Yitian or Shendiao. Xiaoao's ceiling is just as good as Tianlong Murongfu. Do you understand what I mean? The protagonist is here to seek strength, not to pretend to be a slap in the face. Other than the Deer Cauldron Smiling Proud Chair of the Republic of China, the God of Heaven, the Eagle Shooting Condor, the Heavenly Dragon, the Great Tang Dynasty, Zhu Xian, one level jump, one is too slow, and the other will not understand. For example, now, there are several people in the entire Republic of China who are better than the protagonist.

What the hell are you writing about, and a spiritual creature appears behind it?

I just read a few chapters, and I feel like the main character is a psychopath, right? Returning the time-travelers, you really embarrass the time-travelers. You are learning both civil and military skills, but you have not learned any heroic spirit. Instead, you are like a rat in the gutter.

Everyday poisoning is a useless thing, so find a factory to screw it in...

Damn it (*｀へ´*), what a talent, I read so many chapters and didn't even understand what was written!

Is there any Shen Nong who comes here every day to introduce poison?

Messy, messy, messy

When I saw the Taoist priest coming down the mountain, I wanted to know if I should go to the boss lady? Just take it away

The more you write, the worse it gets. This book is really terrible.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​The story is not sorted out at all, and some causes and effects are not explained clearly before jumping to the next part. It is incomprehensible, incomprehensible, and tiring to watch. The second one is not happy. The story line is one line, but the characters must also be one line. The problem for the author is to write a character in a hurry, leaving some bonds, and then hastily send them away before the bonds are resolved and understood. It makes people confused and extremely unhappy. Generally speaking, the author's writing style is not good, he doesn't grasp the words well, and he doesn't grasp the story well. Let's work out hard!

No wonder no one reads it. Who reads this dog-licking article? Either you won't have any contact with this senior sister in the future, or you will change it to killing the senior sister to preach. You still have to read it.

I always feel that Peng Ganwu leads the protagonist to the governor. It's such a long plot. I seem to have seen it somewhere... At the beginning of the book, in the Republic of China, the protagonist is a killer-like person who wants to get rid of certain people... And then there is that plot. Has anyone seen it?

It's too realistic, I don't like it. It doesn't look like a college student at all. The character is like a middle-aged person, and I feel aggrieved.

What is this? Can you understand it yourself? Why don't you tell me what you mean. I can't even understand it. What's the point of your book?

Will you update one chapter a day? Author, you are stunned.

The first picture made me sick.