The Lord of One Sword and All Appearances

Since I work during the day, I can write a little at night. Thank you everyone for your recommendation votes. The update is a bit slow, but it will not cut or break. I will continue to learn. Thank you everyone for your comments and reading. Special thanks {"NickName":"Delayed justice anesthetizes my depression","UserId":331175483} Thank you for your frequent recommendation votes.

{"NickName":"Delayed justice anesthetizes my depression","UserId":331175483} Just feel free to do it as you like. You don't have to vote for recommendations every day, which puts a lot of pressure on me. Haha, thank you, but I hope it won't affect your normal life and work. If you write a novel, I will also go and read it.

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I saw your opinion post. If I want to sign a contract, I need to change the beginning. Don't introduce too many settings at the beginning. Don't write settings and backgrounds in the first chapter. These should be introduced little by little later. Maybe you want to give some foreshadowing, but that's not the way it is given. Your self-set realm readers such as the Era Realm are confused, and there are problems with the logic at first. Since the four major families want to get the Hongmeng Purple Qi, then the question is, how to divide the same thing among the four families. And since you can control the other party's son, you usually use it as a threat to obtain value at the lowest cost, and you will not kill the person at once. This is illogical. As the so-called golden chapter 3, you must write something attractive. If you write that the protagonist is favored, you must ask your sister to join the sect together. This is very unreasonable. Generally, no matter how talented you are, you are still a child and have no say in front of those sect people. This is one. When you write a foreshadowing, the village chief gave the protagonist something, and he gave it to him. He also said that it was related to his life experience. There is no need to write it too clearly. Moreover, if the foreshadowing is given to one, you also want to give it to the second one, and write a person who protects him. Are you emphasizing that he is the protagonist? Who doesn't know that he is the protagonist? This is two. When attacked later, why did the elder protect the protagonist, the apprentice he had just accepted? There is no relationship between the two. This is three. Also, it is best to separate paragraphs when writing, so that you can read them clearly on your mobile phone. If you do not divide a large paragraph into paragraphs, it will be very uncomfortable to read. This is four. Because I have only read the first three chapters, I only give you these opinions. I am also an old reader. I have read novels for many years. I suggest you first sort out the relationship between the characters and the normal reactions when encountering things. Looking at your article, I think you are young and may not have much social experience. I also published a book at Qidian a few days ago. I wrote 30,000 words and just received the website short message. The name is God-given Challenge. This is also my first time to post, but my story line is relatively clear, and the background setting is inserted at the right time. This may be a factor in signing the contract. You can take a look and learn. Finally, I hope you will sign the contract as soon as possible. 😁

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