People in the Motherland Cannot Eat Duck Leg Rice Without Paying for It.

After reading Chapter 53, I can conclude that it is tasteless to eat and a pity to discard.

Writing the protagonist as a fool is the biggest sin of this book

Saitama in the original work has always been aware of how powerful he is, but why does the protagonist seem to have no clear understanding of his own strength? And Saitama is not stupid, okay? Many details in the original work clearly show that Saitama's ideological level is very high, but because it exceeds a certain range, it just looks dull. When reading the original work, the author probably did not understand Saitama as an invincible fool.

Is this written as a punch or as a black robe? It would be nice if the One Punch character had a protagonist. With the addition of other characters, Hustle takes over. From the moment Fubuki appeared, it suddenly dropped several levels.

Brothers, I didn't pay much attention to it at first, but more and more people are paying attention to the surname "Mitarai", and it is really necessary to explain it. Mitarai is really two different things from the bathroom. Stop instilling wrong perceptions into others, please🙏.

Well, those who watch The Black Robe will definitely like to see a protagonist like yours? And is there still a market for Saitama's character now? Ever since I saw the reset version, where Hungry Wolf and Saitama were fighting indistinguishably, I instantly felt like Saitama was like a clown🤔

The author should start a new book. After reading the first few chapters of this book, I feel that I have no interest in it. Your plot is too similar to One Punch Man. The key points are just used, but you have failed.

It's a hodgepodge, it's boring to stew. IQ is not online. At first I thought there was only one protagonist in the world of the Motherland, but it turned out to be a fusion monster.

Saitama's character is okay in anime, but it's really not suitable for writing in a novel.

Mitarashi: refers to the bathroom in Japanese, which means toilet hahahahahaha

After thinking about it, I decided to post a comment from the writer, giving a supplementary explanation on the relevant settings of the work. First of all, as the introduction says, this is a story about the One Punch Man universe invading the main world of the Black Robe Picket. Those who cannot accept this setting can avoid it on their own. So as not to waste your time and affect my mood. The relevant characters and fate of the characters will not remain unchanged, but the character will remain consistent with the original work in general. Don't complain about why the protagonist has so few scenes. Invincible will definitely follow the group portrait route and use various branch lines to highlight the strength of the protagonist. The protagonist will not be the kind of person who is decisive in killing (not being good at killing does not mean he is indecisive) and has clear pursuits and goals. Because there is no goal that he cannot achieve, if the protagonist sweeps all the way, the plot will not progress at all. Therefore, the protagonist's character has two outstanding points: he is very nervous and does whatever he wants. As for the supporting roles, the metal bat will be the male supporting role in a lot of scenes. I personally like this character very much, and other characters will appear later. As for the female supporting characters, there will be three. Fubuki and Tatsumaki have already appeared. Visually, the last one will take a long time to appear (the Monster Association Chapter). The characters are respectively Yujie, Loli and Mengmei. The character abilities in the black robe world will be strengthened to a certain extent (otherwise it would not be enough to fight). According to the author's current thinking, Starlight's strength is Gui Dian (slightly stronger than Deep Sea King without sea water), Motherland and Black, at least above Dragon level.

The author wrote the protagonist as, well, a fool. The kind of person who is particularly stunned

It doesn't feel like the two worlds are merging together. The plot is just about writing a punch plot and then a black robe plot without even changing the lines.

Is the protagonist one-punch man 😏😏😏😏? I hope the people of the motherland who punch him will eat milk 🪖

Not a qualified tailor, one punch and a black robe, the plot is blunt. It doesn't matter if you practice writing, but it will be very frustrating if you want to get results.

Might as well go see One Punch Man, so?

Even Saitama himself knows that he is strong

A good Invincible article focuses on shaping non-protagonists, but your writing feels a bit autistic.

It's too chaotic, there is no integration at all, one is Japanese and the other is American, the drama is so serious that no one can watch it.

Why does the protagonist look like a child?

After reading Chapter 15, it seems that the two worlds are combined, but the combination is very blunt. For example, Tatsumaki's character cannot be low-key, but Walter's behavior clearly shows that he does not know this person. If there are other characters from the one-punch world appearing later, how come these unique and distinctive strong men are ignored by companies that sell superpowers? I haven't read much yet, so I don't know if there will be any supplements to this logic chain later on. If so, just pretend I didn't say it. →_→ Then let's talk about the difficulty of writing invincible novels. After the protagonist is invincible, it is difficult to advance the story with the plot. It is necessary to forcibly create distance and misunderstandings between the protagonist and the main line of the story. For example, the protagonist of this book has begun to be indifferent to things, so he will not actively participate in the plot, or because he does not care (details/clues that advance the plot), causing various misunderstandings, there is a story to write. In this case, we need to focus on shaping the image of the non-protagonist characters and make a group portrait, but everyone knows how difficult this is, so I won't comment too much on the expressiveness of the supporting characters in this book. ಥ_ಥ As for the highlights of this book, I leave it to you book friends. You can find them out and write them down below. Some are good and some are bad, so that people will not think that I am here to deliberately discredit 🙏

Without wisdom that matches his strength, the protagonist is nothing more than a sharp sword, no matter how strong he is. Just use it carefully and don't get backlash.

The people of the motherland can really vote for nothing without giving any money.

It's just the story of One Punch Man with a different name, even the plot is the same.

A good introduction is finally here. I am pure and invincible, although I always don't know where the protagonist is.