The Puppet Swordsman in One Piece

So many days have passed and he still hasn't come back. I haven't seen him for more than twenty years. Nervous, very sensitive to nerves. … The introduction is weak and just noisy. The protagonist of this book does not lose his breath every second, but is an ordinary person with mediocre talents. Everything still has to start from that chance encounter. … Probably following the boat flow, there was a process of transformation in the early stage. This is a work of practicing writing. I hope you can comment and give me more support so that I can understand my shortcomings.