
Naruto: Unifying the Ninja World Begins with the Creation of Lock Release
火影:统一忍界从创造锁遁开始
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 152k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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70Chapters
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Lock Release is something I never expected. I usually get tired of watching Sharingan and Wood Release. Being able to create my own ninjutsu is also quite new. I hope the author doesn't write it to waste. I've just read a few chapters and it's okay. I'll get used to it first and then read it. Come on.
To be honest, I couldn't stand this book. Maybe I'm too picky. Have a good time together, keep writing!
Some explanations
First, this article is not a dark article. The unification of the ninja world is a matter of the later period. It is impossible to kill one by one, because the world of Naruto is too small, and everyone is dead. The plot cannot be developed and the writing is not long. Most of the people are gone in the middle and late stages. Secondly, it has not been decided whether there will be multiple female protagonists. If there is a single female protagonist, it must be Xiaonan. There should be no more than 4 female protagonists. We will see their feedback on whether to accept them. (Whether there are multiple heroines or a single heroine, many male and female characters in Naruto will be in the protagonist camp) Third, a spoiler first. In this article, due to the special physique created by the protagonist, the strength of the entire ninja world will be raised to a higher level. The plot will change to a certain extent starting from the middle and late stages, and the protagonist's Akatsuki organization will not be the original team. Fourth, everyone has feelings. The protagonist is not the Virgin, and they all have to die in the end, but the way and meaning of each character's death will be different. Fifth, in order to make the plot full and tense, this article adds original TV elements, but important characters will not be added or randomly created. In addition, some ninjas have very little information, and I will add some of my own original creations to some ninjutsu. This addition itself is a poisonous point, and many readers will not buy it, but it is not enough without adding it. I try to destroy the original attributes of the characters as little as possible. Sixth, I am also tired of watching Naruto with all kinds of anime abilities. I am planning to write a brand new one to create a new atmosphere. In fact, everyone knows what to write when they close their eyes, so fandom is like this. It is too difficult to innovate, because everything I can think of has been thought by others, so I can only try my best to write something different. Likewise, if you have any good abilities, you can leave a message. I will add it if the voice is high. But I have almost created it myself, and there are no particularly good ideas for swordsmanship. I ask book friends to brainstorm and come up with a handsome set. It doesn't matter whether it is powerful or not. The protagonist just likes to be cool, and he just needs to be more handsome than Sasuke. (updated from time to time)
The book collapsed from the moment he called out Obito. Unless the protagonist is immediately cheated and strengthened, the ninja world can search for souls without torture, just read the memory directly.
This book is well written and the author's screw driving skills are better.
I don't care about any other issues, I just want to make fun of Xiao Nan and watch the protagonist pretend to be B (it's okay not to pretend to be B, but it has to be strong). If not, then forget it, there's nothing interesting about it.
It's inconsistent. The first part is so miserable, but the second part is so funny that I can't laugh. It's too rough.
I'm quite speechless, I feel like I just wrote it casually. The plug-in is too invincible and can only be compensated by lowering the character's IQ. Can't the S-level secret technique, Flying Thunder God, escape Obito's pursuit? If you choose the Eternal Kaleidoscope with a super S-level bloodline, you can't beat Obito or what?
It's no good to never look at this kind of thinking. The losers brought in by the system are the losers' garbage everywhere.
Come on, support me, I like Xiaonan when I see her.
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It looks awkward, so I'll stick with it for a few more chapters! If it doesn't work, we have to withdraw. Come on.
Lock Escape sounds too low. . .
The protagonist should be the same age as Shisui. Shisui also came out at the end of the Third War and is not famous yet. Because there were still small-scale wars in the years after the Nine-Tails Rebellion. What really ended was the kidnapping of Kumogakure and the plot of Kirigakure and Ao running away after seeing Shisui's green chakra. The Uchiha clan was soon exterminated. The protagonist went to collect the Sharingan.
The introduction reminds me of a dubbing: All things are attracted by heaven, spicy and filling... Pa. Pa. Pa... Konan... Drink drink drink
It is better to have a blood inheritance with many properties. The lock is conceptual, and developing it is like a castle in the air without feeling. I once saw a book about the development of Golden Finger. The first blood stain was mercury escape. It has the properties of water, poison, and metal. It can liquid, atomize, and be poisonous. The writing is particularly good. The ninjutsu developed is very imaginative, comparable to the first generation of wood escape.
Your attributes are displayed for almost half a chapter, which is too watery. I hope it will be displayed as little as possible or simplified.
I don't read much. What's the second character of the protagonist's name? It seems that this scumbag is not worthy of reading this book.
There is no need to show your personal panel all the time, it is annoying to look at it, just do it a few times occasionally, or make it more streamlined, and the number of words is not like this.