Scientific Beast Control: Omnic Battle Pet

The design is fun Character name: Wang Yanxiang Sophomore student at the Red Empire's first omnic joint warfare academy (the protagonist enters the academy as a freshman, and he is promoted to a sophomore) Omnic beast: Main pet: Swamp Water Source• Omni Frog (mid-level A-level omnic battle pet) basic attributes Strength: c Agility: b Superpower: s Burst: s Endurance: s Omnic Transformation: Sonic Boom Frog Croak: Super attack type, sonic attack. Tiger Roar Shock Wave: Super sonic attack. It emits huge sound waves through its roar, causing a violent sonic impact on the enemy. Modification Rating S Level Water Wave Shield: Super defensive type, creates a shield that can withstand super attacks, immune to water super attacks, greatly weakens fire super attacks, causes refraction and reflection of light super attacks Modification Rating, top transformation, S+ level High-pressure water arrow: Super attack type, water super power, powerful high-pressure water arrows are emitted from the mouth, which can easily penetrate gold and stone Modification rating A level Lightning protection storage box: super defensive type, with three inconspicuous lightning rods installed on the body surface. When attacked by lightning, the lightning super energy is directed into the storage box through the lightning rods. It can store up to three A-class electric super full-power attacks, and is equipped with a plasma cannon to launch the stored electric energy. Top modification, s+ modification Swamp Wetland: A super field skill that can convert quantum black hole energy to form a swamp around it. The swamp has strong adhesion and can greatly interfere with the speed of super energy conversion. If you fall into a swamp, your agility will be greatly reduced Sub-pet: Earth-Shaking Power·Tiger Skin Bullfrog ( Intermediate A-level omnic battle pet) Basic attributes Strength s+ Agility b Super power c Burst s+ Endurance s Tiger skin scale armor, basic built-in ability, super defensive power Omnic modification ，，        ，        ，s＋       Secondary pet: rattan tree frog (low-level B-level omnic pet beast). The third pet is absolutely defensive Special transformation: Millennium rattan exoskeleton armor, compressed thousand-year rattan disintegration bomb, liquid metal structure Plot introduction: First, introduce a special material: rattan, which originates from the sap of the alien plant gum vine. The extract of vine rapidly condenses into amber-like crystal when exposed to air. It is insulated from heat and can only be decomposed by a special catalyst. Based on the growth years of the vine, the hardness of the extract of the vine that has been grown for about ten years is the same as that of diamond. The hardness of the amber from the vine that has been grown for about a thousand years is the same as that of the head of Rupert's Tears. When Wang Yanxiang was a freshman, she had a bold idea and spent all her resources to create a thousand-year rattan disintegration bomb. She successfully captured an alien mechanical beast alive through an amber seal, and received an A-level intelligent pet reward (a tiger-skinned bullfrog) and a large amount of resources

I don't know what everyone thinks, but it's still very good for me. But the author has flaws in character creation, and is more prosperous than Yang Xiu, but no one is perfect. I don't know if the author did this intentionally. A bit alienated. Sometimes you can clearly tell the reason, but you just don't. Very decisive refusal. The author wants to surprise everyone behind the protagonist? It makes people speechless. Overall, it is very good. Please support the author and don't stop updating~~

Keep up the writing, it's a very good article, the fusion of theoretical knowledge and fantasy is very good, my eyes light up, the setting is mostly to better understand the plot of the story, I look forward to the following plots, I have to catch up on my sleep, I read the latest in one go, I am very happy

Although what you can tell is quite detailed, the writing style is not very good, it is a bit watery, and the plot content is a bit confusing, but friends who are not short of readers can still read it.

Suggestions: some of the information detected are redundant, affecting the coherence of reading. It is recommended to adjust. The protagonist's behavior and thoughts are a bit inconsistent, and there is a sense of intentional conflict, causing a sense of division in reading.

Shen Nong is here, the comments contain no spoilers. As for the mechanical design, the mechanical combat plot is very well designed, and it feels very much like a cyberpunk beast novel. However, the description of the characters is awkward. The protagonist is a bit too arrogant. I feel that the author wants to show the indifference of a genius to foreign affairs. After reading it, I feel that he has used too much force. To give a simple example: the protagonist is walking on the road, and two little girls come to him to shoot a short video, but he refuses. The little girl admires him and asks him how to make a video. The protagonist says: "You are not worthy." The girl says: "How can you be worthy?" The protagonist says: "Just be better than me." Girls, just start Thirty Years in Hedong and Thirty Years in Hexi. Don't bully young people. Remember my name. My name is XXX I was so numb when I saw this person, but it's okay. A little poison resistance seems to be no problem. You can feel for yourself whether you can accept it or not. There is another small problem. The protagonist usually speaks in a dull manner and is a bit funny. Why is he so aggressive when talking to the school leader? After all, it is... Elders, just say "Don't train me, I don't like it" directly in the face of the school leader. Is this... The main shortcomings are definitely many, but there are definitely many advantages, but they are not explained bit by bit. Bad opinions are only for reference. You will know after you have crossed the river

It's a bit like Mr. Qi Peijia's vest.

I can't say that the writing is not good, the subject matter is good. But it's too boring. Not to mention the large amount of data description, the plot is seriously delayed. Abandoned

It's well written, but what's going on with this inexplicable watery feeling? If there are more updates from the author and there are no poisonous points, the results are expected to be similar to those of the next door "Unscientific Beast Control".

The author may want to make the protagonist feel a little arrogant due to his high talent. But when he gets along with his friends, he is not the same person as when he gets along with the principal and director. The former can buy a machine gun for his brother to mount on the Tyrannosaurus Rex, and he can ask his brother for his opinion on the Tyrannosaurus Rex. Some slightly excessive things are magnified, making the protagonist seem arrogant and arrogant. I feel that the protagonist is too torn. He is flesh and blood when he is with his brothers. When he is with other people, he becomes the kind of person who looks arrogant and only cares about chips, but in fact has no brains.

Why is it so watery? It's not a problem of few updates, it's just that the same thing is said over and over again. The theme setting is okay, the writing is okay, but the pace is too slow. Do the book friends at Qidian pay to watch you read? You spend real money to subscribe, and you're just going to watch this?

Other problems are not big. The protagonist's stubborn character makes people uncomfortable. The author wanted to describe the image of a genius with high IQ, but in terms of description, it feels like a failure. He is arrogant and has no emotional intelligence, which makes people feel a little uncomfortable.

The subject matter is quite good, but I don't know which era the author is from? The routine of showing off and slapping people in the face is really repeated endlessly. According to the understanding in the book, the protagonist's ability is beyond the scope and is suspected of being normal. Is it necessary to keep writing? Who wants to see being repeatedly questioned and ridiculed without proving his scientific research ability even a little bit? The word water? Masochist? We just had a fight, it was so funny, you were questioned again before you even finished pretending to be awesome. Did you sublimate the trick of showing off and getting slapped in the face, into a routine where you were questioned repeatedly before you finished pretending?

The writing is very good, but why do I have no sense of involvement? It feels like I am reading a text.

Brother, your novel must be very popular in Africa. Because you are their savior

There are very good pet novels in recent years. As far as we know so far, they have elements such as machinery, space war, cyberpunk, super powers, and academies.

As an outsider, I would encourage you to do your best, but as a reader, I think it's terrible. The subject matter is very good and very attractive. There is no shortage of various themes, but the character creation is very problematic. Originally, as a science fiction novel, a lot of popular science can naturally create the image of a top student, but the various contrasting plots make people feel that the characteristics of the protagonist are very messy. He has everything, but nothing stands out, and the character creation is poor😰. In addition, there are too many scenes with inconsequential supporting roles in that field. The protagonist has not been created, and the supporting characters do not have that kind of outstanding impression and label. It just makes people feel that the number of words is low, perfunctory, and the writing style is average. I feel that I can't control the subject matter. Many pretentious plots are inserted very stiffly and feel awkward. This is not a problem in the first place. A lot of white novels are like this. If I don't like it, I will just leave it alone. Skip it, but I feel like your way of writing is a waste of such a good subject matter. It gave me a completely different feeling in the first few chapters, and I felt like I was being deceived. After reading the first hundred or so, I felt particularly uncomfortable. The world view, the characters, the plot, and a lot of foreshadowing. But brother, it's only a hundred chapters before. Why did you explain so much? Aren't these things meant to be unfolded slowly? There are too many things added, but there is nothing particularly outstanding. It is better to read what you say than to read what you say. I couldn't stand it anymore after about seventy chapters. I read dozens of chapters more in anticipation of the subject matter, but nothing changed at all. I was very disappointed. It's really a pity that this subject matter

I can tell that every plot writer in this book wants to break it up, crush it and feed it to our mouths, and then give us some water for fear that we will choke. They were even afraid that the water we drank would be tasteless, so they put some classic ingredients into the water to flavor it for us.

The protagonist's emotional intelligence is really low. . . . Really wooden character

The writing and creativity are all good, but too weak. I repaired a robot tiger and edited it for more than 30 chapters. I played competitions and still registered several chapters. I designed a chip in 2 hours. I didn't assemble the robot tiger for more than a week. In the end, the principal couldn't wait and changed the main character's class before putting it together. Just to slap the face. Reading it every day feels like I haven't read it. It's a good book of fairy grass, but I just have no interest in reading it.

The writing can only be said to be okay and watchable, but the opponents or enemies assigned to the protagonist are a bit intellectually demoralizing, the characters assigned to the protagonist are too dull, and some of the pretense and slap-in-the-face plots are a bit awkward. In addition, it depends on whether the author should optimize the description of skills and make it more concise. The number of words is too low. I don't know how many people skipped reading the part about transforming or upgrading skills. Anyway, I basically didn't read it, and it didn't affect my subsequent reading experience. Anyway, I finished reading it in less than one afternoon. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes more!

Personally, I think the mechanical tiger should look like this. It comes from the BEASTBOX toy store and is available on Taobao.

I have read Chapter 93 and would like to share my opinions. First, there are too many side-details that make people feel uninvolved. For example, when the mechanical tiger failed to connect for the first time, the small talk of several staff members was really meaningless. Second, the so-called battle has no skills at all. This is a matter of setting, command? Is it true that Mao's command just calls for caution? And the command relies on shouting? Third, I don't know the willingness behind it. I can't see it at the moment. If this kind of mechanical beast goes to the battlefield, what is the use of the owner? Is it a hindrance? Just organize a mechanical army. With such high intelligence, what kind of master do you need? Don't say that one person can only have 9 mechanical beasts. Why do we need people to order the mechanical beasts instead of through chips? Emotions, why do we need emotions in this war? District 4, how should humans protect themselves on the battlefield and merge with mechanical beasts? Then why not just use the mecha?

This Zuo Muxi is so annoying. She said that she can't have too many emotions, and she is so verbose there that she always wants to see the protagonist make a fool of herself. Did she arrange to come here to cause trouble? Is she the one you use to improve your word count? It's not as good as the original Li Jiaxin. I don't understand why you suddenly made this happen. What's the point?

It feels good. If the number of updates can reach that of Eagle, I think this book will be another masterpiece 🤓🤓🤓QAQ

New readers, this book is very good and can be read, but the pace is a bit slow. If you are a reader, it may not be recommended, so in order to continue to recommend it, we will leave it for now. Anyway, the author's level is obvious at first glance. The book is good, and we can only rely on it to be released.

If you are fast enough and use some exposure, it will look like a masterpiece.

I seriously doubt that the author is Qingquan Liuxiang or learned from him. This update is completely consistent! The sea! You are all water.

I have been reading books for more than 20 years. From the earliest novels of Huang Yusheng and Huang Yi to modern novels, my comments are as follows. This book has a modern plot, the content of the story is novel and unique, and the details and ups and downs of the characters in the book are interesting. The prerequisite for being able to write about 500 chapters and become a small hit after about 1,000 chapters and become popular after 1,500 chapters can be rated as a classic is not to procrastinate. The details of those few words are a bit more confusing.

Yes, it has the potential to be a masterpiece, and it has the same sense of anticipation as watching "The Favorite" for the first time.