The Blasphemous Wizard of the Eldritch World

Personally, I think there are several major problems with this book. 1. The protagonist is probably not a fool. If he can't turn back, he might be sold and have to count the money to others. (Actually, even if it is turned back, the protagonist's IQ may not have been betrayed by others, and he still counts money for others) 2. The appearance of the saint in front of others is too deliberate, and I was so embarrassed that I even cut out the five rooms and one living room. 3. Emotional dramas are sparse. If you don't know how to write emotional dramas, don't write them! 4. The protagonist is like a ruffian, always doing shit. To be honest, can we not just do shit when nothing happens? I really don't like this little ruffian's character. 5. Didn't think about it well. If you ignore the above poisonous points, this book is still good, but for someone like me who pursues both rationality and interestingness, the above poisonous points are enough for me to pass this book.

Alas, I have read Chapter 179. Can the protagonist be less pretentious? A prop that is useless except for the prop is so shameless that he brags about it. I am really speechless. It is the most annoying to see this kind of plot. Lian Na, Xiao Qi, the secret cultivator, and those from the administration. I have seen enough of the pretense.

So far, it's good to watch. I hope I won't be like the protagonist in the Kitchen God book next door, who behaves like a greasy scumbag out of nowhere.

In fact, many people in this book have the same point of view, that is, if everyone else is extraordinary, it doesn't matter if the protagonist is an ordinary person. It is so difficult to be a wizard. If you are not the protagonist, you will never be able to enter the wizard stage. And after spending such a high price, if you still have ordinary extraordinary strength after entering, it will be very meaningless. In fact, the author wants to control the rhythm and can use apprentice wizards to separate stages. It would be very unpleasant for an ordinary person to show off his strength by relying on equipment with huge side effects. Now that monthly tickets are so low, many people may have lost their patience. But now if the author suddenly speeds up and enters the wizard stage, it will feel very abrupt and like an assembly line. This requires a good grasp of the rhythm. I hope that after the author adjusts, he can write better and better.

But the character of the little ruffian...? ? Ruffian is not a complimentary word in the first place, so why do you have to emphasize that you are a ruffian? I hope the author avoids lightning.

Both the protagonist and the supporting character have poor IQ and EQ The Secret Cultivator is portrayed as a wealthy lady from a diaosi's imagination. She is stupid but not stupid, but when it is known that the protagonist is extremely awesome in a game that will affect reality, getting along with the protagonist is not even as good as playing in a workers' camp. Business model, emotional intelligence is not high no matter how you look at it, and the protagonist is asked to say that children from wealthy families are not that simple. This level of emotional intelligence is not as good as that of any worker who still wants to work The same thing with the beauty of the goddess, you don't really think it is so fun to play "single dog" memes all the time, right? Oh, the latest chapters of Secret Cultivator also talk about being single. I remember correctly that the author is married. I really don't understand the mentality behind repeated use of this joke. Do you think it will resonate with people? 😅It just makes people think why they insist on emphasizing being single and making it seem like being single will accomplish nothing. With the ability of the protagonist, he actually arranged for a secret cultivator to say that he is still single. The supporting character should not have the brains

When selecting talents, I thought that there would be a bug. I would choose the Profaned Crow first, then activate the ability and select again. Then I could choose one of the three again, and then set a hidden content (repeated selection of the Profaned Crow can make this talent upgrade and evolve, so that I can go back to the last two selections and choose one of the two; or even the first three selections, choose one of the three), then this trick is good 😁😁😁

It is recommended that the author speed up the pace and make the protagonist a wizard or an author as soon as possible. If you want to say that the pace is too fast, that his ignoring system is awesome or something, and then say that the male protagonist has obtained a lot of good things, then in fact, ask yourself, are those things really good things? Except for the clothes you are wearing now, what other functions do you have? Apart from showing off, it is just showing off, and having a nice name is of no use. Moreover, these are all foreign objects. The patience of us readers is limited. You always think that these foreign objects are the protagonist's abilities, and then let us see that this is simply a fart. Apart from the awesome-looking equipment he obtained, the protagonist himself is nothing. He has no ability at all. Apart from those equipment, the protagonist is nothing. Even if you gain a little extraordinary ability in the early stage, we readers may still have the patience to read on. As a result, you rely on equipment to support you in the early stage, and the equipment effect looks very stretched, and the positioning seems to be very awesome. You say you have epic equipment, but it turns out that it is not even as good as other people's green equipment. What's the use? Equipment also has a bunch of negative effects.

I feel that the protagonist is a bit unnatural, like an ancient novel from decades ago. The author probably thinks that a child actually finds a gangster very attractive. His outlook is also abnormal. The protagonist is a gangster who has no job, no money, and no house. He is single. It can be said that he is a homeless man and is taken in by the landlord. The landlord is a beautiful young woman with a seven-year-old daughter, and she is very comfortable with her daughter playing with the protagonist. The landlady's daughter thinks the protagonist is attractive. The protagonist gives me the feeling that he is no different from a rapist. He drools and stares at women when he sees them and always pretends to be cool. In reality, that woman has a daughter and dares to take in a guy like the protagonist.

The protagonist's character has no sense of empathy. What does it mean to be naughty and play well with a seven-year-old girl? Then he wrote that without the landlady to take care of the protagonist, he might not be able to survive🤔I don't know because the protagonist is yellow-haired