American Comics: Starting with the Treatment of Moon Knight
美漫：从治疗月光骑士开始
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- 315k Words
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- Infinite Flow
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- 4y ago
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- Qidian
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American comics and comprehensive comics are all fine. If you try to put DC and Marvel together, it will be very easy to collapse. The worldviews are all very different. You can often see them in books. However, there are too many eunuchs and there are too many poorly written ones.
Before an event is finished, it starts to change randomly. The characteristics of the characters are not obvious. Now Egypt, now London, now New York. The places are not clear. The little spiders have gone to Egypt. How did you write this? You can expand it appropriately because it is too compact. The appearance rate of the system is either too little or too much in one chapter.
After becoming a father, I realized how desperate Wanda was after losing her two children.
It feels a bit like watching TV, and suddenly a naughty kid grabs the remote control and tries to change the screen. Tired
It's a mess, and before one thing is over, it suddenly goes to another world.
It feels a little confusing, okay?
,,,, At least I have to finish writing the events of one copy. The events are randomly passed through before they are finished. Moreover, this system is intelligent, but it is very disgusting. I feel that this system is more like the protagonist's split personality. All in all, it's not to my taste.
The fucking started in the first chapter... Is there anything wrong with imposing punishment when the crime is clear? What does "the end justifies the means" mean? Human beings didn't know where they were when this law was established.
I saw how everything went crazy in Chapter 13 and is this system so useless? Just press it? It was quite easy to do this before? Identify yourself
The connection is a bit messy in some places
The concept of longevity does not exist in the power system of the Ancient One. Some of it is spiritual projection.
There are too many worlds, and the writing is short and fast. The protagonist has no chance to explore other good things in the world. And it also introduces the concept of multiverse... A Marvel multiverse is confusing enough, but there is also a DC multiverse... If you write it like this, you are not super careful, and the chance of success is not high. But if you excel, you may become a god. But currently I have a bit of trouble watching some places, there are too many fusions, and the timeline is too confusing...
It's an urgent article to be published, and I'm afraid I've already compiled the outline.
There is also such a function.
I feel like not many people have read it. This first book should be regarded as gaining experience. Come on.
Others say it's confusing, but I think it's pretty good. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง
Can the author not see so many typos?