
The Swordsman Who Started Under One Person
从一人之下开始的剑侠
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- Ongoing
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- 402k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
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- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 12mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Most of the protagonists in Qidian's novels lack strong character. No matter how awesome the protagonist's setting is, as soon as he opens his mouth, he will be stunned.
Why do so many colleagues want to save Chen Duo? Everyone in the world is suffering. Everyone has their own way of living, life or death, so why bother.
Chen Duo is very pitiful, but there is no need for it. If one person is alone, the same person will have trouble with Chen Duo, right? She felt sorry for the protagonist of every fan novel, so she had to touch it, right? What was the difference between this and Huang Rong a few years ago?
Does Zhutianliu write about the heroine? I hope the author can write it well. Originally, the protagonist is a wandering prodigal in a sense, and if he has to bring someone with him, it will be difficult to write it well. It will either become a burden or double the protagonist. In reality, as people who have no fixed abode, our general concept is that it is best not to get married, so as not to delay the other half. Even if we get married, it will not last long.
A strong person should look like a strong person You can already compete with those who are like tigers, and you are still participating in some elementary school competition. The one who participated was inexplicable The one who played the first game was there, but after the game, the one who was inexplicable bowed his hands and said some nonsense. Look at what you wrote like this, and the follow-up below is poor. In every game, Pigfoot is alone, doing some inexplicable things. In other words, if someone has nothing to do with you, but you still get involved in it for no reason, is this your way of writing? You can even change it and write that you have had contact with me, the relationship is not bad, or you have been entrusted by others. Instead of this kind of blunt confrontation, it is simply speechless Where is the pig's trotters on the stage, bowing and handing over, talking nonsense for a long time, and you didn't write a follow-up? For example, the shock of others, the speculations of everyone on the scene, and psychological activities, such as: Lu Jin said hey: Lao Zhang, take a look, you still have enough face. I have heard about this kid. Even Xiao Na can't hold him down. To praise you like this, I thought Zhang Chulan was hanging! Hearing this, the old Heavenly Master on the side rolled his eyes and said calmly: Xiao Lu, this is not because of my pride. I see that young people nowadays rarely respect the old and love the young. If this kid retires for another twenty years, I guess he will have to squat in the delivery room and accept a disciple. Such as this Writing should create connections, rather than writing rigidly. I think a lot of what you write is very blunt. It is speechless to transfer pressure from the company and deliberately transfer responsibility to pig's feet. This kind of alien abduction and trafficking of children has caused the destruction of countless families. It is the responsibility of everyone. But the pig's feet are left here without even mentioning them? Why do you think others are fools? There should be a linkage between characters, instead of just looking for someone out of nowhere and what to write about? A strong person should behave like a strong person Only the weak can grovel This has nothing to do with politeness. If a really strong person still grovels, this is a psychological problem and it is purely artificial. You said you were asking for advice, but you gave up the question mark. This is a matter of putting experts first and specializing in the art. Then you participated in the competition inexplicably, bowed inexplicably, and talked a lot of nonsense. Why is that? The most important thing is, after you finish speaking, will you step down? Then it changes to something else, and there's no follow-up scene or anything? What do you mean by this kind of writing? Having said so much, I still hope to write better and better!
So the protagonist will also be picked up by aliens in unparalleled form?
The protagonist's name looks like the name of a supporting cast
Flying with a sword is when the flying sword turns into sword light and takes people flying away. Both the man and the sword turned into sword light, escaping extremely fast. Stepping on the flying sword is really unsightly and unpleasant😐
The water is real water. It's a simple battle. The four crazy ones can be easily solved according to the settings. I wrote 5 chapters and it's not over yet 🙂
Author, are you unable to get over Chen Duo?
It's Chen Duo again. All fan novels written by one person must have a female protagonist. Eight out of ten of them are Chen Duo. No matter from the perspective of anime or novels, Chen Duo cannot be saved. Why must she be saved? Isn't it better to let her seek kindness and get kindness? If he could get down with ordinary means, Lao Liao would have succeeded long ago. Chen Duo's body, which was riddled with holes by primitive Gu, must be saved with no less than the eight extraordinary skills of the Dacheng level. Zhang Chulan didn't do anything, but was targeted for ten years just because he might possess the source of the Qi body. At this stage in Biyou Village, if you show such a level, you It is the target of public criticism, everyone will come to you, and you can only escape all the way, unless you are invincible. However, the world view of one person's style is about seeking freedom. Once it is invincible, you can't stay in the world for long. Then what is the point of finding Chen Duo as the heroine? Unless they wear it together, then this book will basically not be saved.
Author, your combat power is too exaggerated. Luo Tian Dajiao can plow thousands of meters of land with one sword if pushed forward four years. With this combat power, you can shave your head even if you go to Longhu Mountain with one sword. After four years, even if the protagonist stays on the same spot and Quan Xing knows this information, he still dares to touch the porcelain. I really don't know what to say. It's understandable that the original Master Tianshi can be held back. After all, he is still a human being. What can you do to hold back the protagonist? You can't hold back a lot of lives.
Ever since she was transformed, Chen Duo no longer needs anyone who is self-righteous to save her.
You have one chapter per day, and the plot is slow. I mentioned earlier that the competition was suspected of having bad numbers, and I wrote several chapters later. Let's fast forward to this part of the competition. Anyone who has watched one of them will know that the protagonist doesn't take first place, so it has more or less nothing to do with the protagonist.
It's Chen Duo again, how can one person be so inseparable from Chen Duo?
In one person, does it become politically correct for everyone to save Chen Duo? 🙂
I'm really speechless. It's all Chen Duo. Why does it have to be Chen Duo? I'm really sick of seeing it.
Many people feel that it is not necessary to save Chen Duo. I want to say that if I have the ability, I will save her. It is not that Chen Duo is pitiful or sympathetic. I simply dislike this kind of behavior. It is said that Chen Duo was ruthless, killed Liao Zhong, and hated the temporary workers who rescued her. But as for Chen Duo, growing up in Yaoxianhui, human emotions were wiped out. At that time, Chen Duo was just an object. After Chen Duo was rescued, Liao Zhong wanted to be nice to Chen Duo and awaken Chen Duo's humanity, but I don't believe that the person in charge of Liao Zhong's first district has seriously thought about this matter. The company really can't treat Chen Duo. I don't believe it. Even if it can't be cured, it won't be difficult to send Chen Duo to the Gu Village. I don't believe that Gu Village, which has been passed down for who knows how many years, can't place a Chen Duo, and it can't do anything about a so-called Saint Boy with Gu Body. You know, the idea of Saint Boy with Gu Body was from Gu Village from the beginning. So in this case, Liao Zhong awakened Chen Duo's humanity and taught Chen Duo how to become a human being. But in reality, while teaching Chen Duo to become a human being, he treated Chen Duo like an object. Living in the bunker, he was born. There is only one door in the living room, and there are surveillance cameras in the room. There are explosive collars around your necks. Why are you Tianlong people? It doesn't matter. But Chen Duochen is a temporary worker and has seen the world. It's like a person who was born to live in darkness sees the sun. The sun is so warm, but Chen Duo can never touch it. Liao Zhong orders Chen Duo for the sake of Chen Duo's life. It is always an order! How sad, I am a Gu, an object and a weapon. One day, someone took me away from the place where I lived, taught me knowledge and taught me to become a person like them. I gained humanity and became a human being, but they still regarded me as an object. I had no freedom as a human being, and I had no rights as a human being. They wanted me to endure unbearable situations in a human way. They tell me how warm the sun is, but don't let me touch it. I don't want to be a human being. I hate that I can be a human being, so that I won't feel the pain of darkness. So Chen Duo escaped and touched the sun, but Liao Zhong wanted Chen Duo to go back. Chen Duo wanted to tell Liao Zhong, I won't go back, and if I do, I would rather die in your hands, so Chen Duo put on a collar worn only by dogs. But you didn't listen, you told me to shut up and obey your orders. Liao Zhong died. Chen Duo's life was too sad. She was abducted at a young age and lost her humanity. She finally found her humanity when she was young, but found that she could not become a human being and could not have everything that a human being has. Her inner pain was not understood by others, even the people closest to her did not understand it. Even the last value of her life was used. How could Chen Duo want to make her own choice? Chen Duo wanted to make decisions like a human being. It was a decision, not a choice. Go back to the company? Or die? For Chen Duo, returning to the company would be worse than death. It's your decision to go shopping before you die! Shouldn't you save such a person? Some people say no, but you have to know that Chen Duo can be said to be the strongest individual weapon under one person. If it were any of us, I would probably be at least obsessed with revenge... It is not an exaggeration to say that Chen Duo is naturally kind.
Such an awesome person can beat anyone with two tricks
Why is it that whenever there is a story written by one person, the heroine is Chen Duo? Is there anyone who is not Chen Duo?