I Created an Era

I found this by scanning the list of authors of the same genre. After reading more than 30 chapters, the plot is actually okay, but... The writing is a bit too hasty, and there are some places that lack the atmosphere and are not well-done, and the dialogue of the protagonist's era is also the same. That is to say, there is no problem with the plot, but it looks a bit weird... The psychology of the characters is a bit unclear. As for the divinity and epic feeling in the comment area, the plot of this book can be written with divinity and epic feeling, but... The same problem is still there, the writing power and the rendering of the atmosphere are not that good. Of course, if you want to write that kind of divinity and epic feeling, my suggestion is to immerse yourself in that grand feeling first, and then try to understand it, read about theology, and do it step by step. (In this regard, my method is to rely on the power of writing, plot and my thinking about theology) I see that the author is also a newcomer, so I come here to comment, I hope it can help you.

I think that if you want to write an epic story about "I am a god" for Hush, there must be several elements. The first is divinity. Divinity depends on the individual's understanding, but it must be written with a sense of separation from mortals and the world. It may be condescending, it may be casual, but it must never be deviated from it, and it must be strong. Refer to Barbatos, the god of wind, and Baal, the god of thunder. The second epic feeling, this is about writing and plot. Writing is mainly about the cognition of characters and the rendering of the environment. If you want to write a desolate and primitive feeling, you must remove the connotation of words. For example, primitive people have just learned the written language and cannot understand what God is without culture. They do not understand faith and only have fear but no respect for God. In the final analysis, respect is cultivated, and fear is indeed innate. Then the plot is There is nothing more worthy of modern people's imagination than the creation of history, especially the source of fantasy, the first torch, the first tribe, the first country. This is the epic of ordinary people, the first god (the first god of wisdom created?), The first god of death (the beginning of the fall of the original three gods - death?), The second world (the creation of the underworld), etc. Can all be used as inspiration, similar to epic farming. That's about it

Emmm, I almost didn't mean it. How should I put it? Bin, it's a bit too taken for granted. The evolution of belief is too fast. Compared with I am God, it feels a little bit like a tiger but not a dog. Of course it's okay as a newcomer. Here I can explain in detail why faith is evolving too fast. First of all, you did not explain the lifespan of the Isis people, so when I watched it, I subconsciously brought in the lifespan of ordinary humans, which is 120 years. As a nascent race, except for the first two who have inherited memories, it is unlikely that other people without these would have such complex ideas, or have such complex ideas, but they cannot do the so-called operation of giving the darkness to themselves and the light to Les. In fact, the biggest problem, in my opinion, is that you are a little anxious to advance the plot, but your writing does not show the long sense of the evolution of this belief, so it will be very abrupt. How to put it, to use an analogy, it is like completing something in 100 years that should have taken 1,000 years. It feels very awkward to me. I am not good at expressing myself. I may not be right. I would like to apologize in advance.

As long as the protagonist doesn't have any disease, how about a normal person for the God of Creation?

Come on! This kind of book is really niche and there are too few authors. You can still see the author's own thoughts from the article. The writing is very good, but I feel that the author's naming ability is not good, and there is an indescribable sense of disharmony. Also, I hope the author will update and not study on a certain Saturday!

I'm considering updating twice a day, but being too diligent doesn't seem to be my style.

What type of god does the author want to write the protagonist as? So far, the male protagonist is really not like a god but more like a DS

Every time I read the Creation novel, a bunch of people and the author say that it doesn't feel as good as I Am God. You have to act like I am God. In fact, most people who can read Creation Novels have read Humble Game and I Am God, not to mention the writing. If you really give me everything, God will lead you by the nose. The rhythm is your specialty, so don't worry about the difference.

It's so embarrassing. The main character smells so bad that I can't stand it.

Brother, it won't affect you. I am doing this for love, and I only signed the contract at 13W. You are the first person I have reviewed critically, so you must keep it!

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When I came in to read it, I thought it was almost the same as I Am God. After dozens of chapters, except for the first few chapters, the protagonist did not even show his face or describe the protagonist looking at these Isis people. I almost forgot that there is a protagonist. He is really just a creation tool and has no other role. After reading the whole story, the plot is good, but it is a little less interesting. Without the desire of me to read it, I am God.

I am the savior, compose an epic. The name is a bit crude, but it does look good. I think it is only slightly inferior to I Am God, but his advantage is that he not only has an epic spirit, but also has a belief in God. If you like epic fantasy, you can check it out. And the religious atmosphere of this book is particularly strong

Write about other races. Don't let humans become the masters again. Let a hundred flowers bloom.

As a newbie, the writing is great. It's a pity that there is a copy of I Am God in front of you, otherwise the rating would be higher!

Your three chapters may be regarded as someone else's chapter

Why is there no response from World Tree? The home is almost gone.

This dragon died so pitifully, and the writing is getting worse and worse.

Hubie was attracted to it when he saw the cover of "Game Life Zero"... He didn't expect that the allure of the content would be as great as this. Ganbade!

When will the double update start? The single update looks a bit uncomfortable, as if I am working while the author is taking care of his health.

What's going on with the Pig-Headed Emperor? The new chapters are becoming more and more confusing. The era has come and the earth is barren, with only a few microorganisms. Even if the mother of life has been sleeping for a long time and new species appear, there are not a lot of creatures that suddenly appear without a certain degree of intelligence. I am baffled by this.

I have read the Creation text several times, but there is nothing new at all. Slipping away.

Come on💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪Come on ! ! ! !

After looking at it for a while, it looks like I am a god.

What does the pardon in the introduction mean? Pardon should only mean to absolve sins. Should it be an edict here?

Su Geng, platinum appearance, can't sleep at night😁