I Captured the Body of King Nie in the Storm

The martial arts idiot character is already very unlikable, and the careless eunuch is also unlikable. You have them all.

It is actually understandable that Yan Ying betrayed King Nie. Just like in today's society, I married you for a good life. I admired your achievements and your charisma, but you gave up all that when you got married. If you go to a remote rural area to farm, wouldn't the result be obvious? "Of course this is an outsider's view. If it happens to you, no one will be able to accept betrayal.

I don't have the desire to watch the main character, so what's the point of setting up a martial arts idiot?

I always feel that golden scales are not things in the pond. They turn into golden scales in dragons when encountering storms. It refers to Duanlang, not Xiongba. First of all, it is Duanlang's name. The dragon itself must be the one who makes trouble. The second is his identity. Duanlang is the head of Nanlin Sword. He still holds the Fire Scale Sword in his hand, and his experience, joining the Heaven and Earth Society, following Fengyun and constantly picking up human heads to gain experience upgrades, continuously getting adventures, and even grabbing the Dragon Ball, he physically transformed into a dragon, Finally It was the second half of the comment of the Ni Bodhisattva. The dragon roared and the sky was shaken, and the wind and clouds dived and swam. The broken waves had not started to wave, but the rigid dragon was killed by the wind and clouds. He was killed by Moko Wuliang, the ultimate move that Fengyun fate and Fengyunjihui could only use On the contrary, Xiongba is like the pool where he cultivated Golden Scales. I feel that with Xiongba's ability, he can still unify the martial arts in the Central Plains even without Fengyun. The few comments made by Ni Bodhisattva, except that Xiongba will be killed by Fengyun later, are completely inconsistent with Xiongba's fate.

I haven't read the book, but after reading the comments, many people are confused and confused. I will introduce the early background based on the original work (comics and novels shall prevail). Yan Ying, she is more vain, but she is not as slutty as TV dramas and movies (but I like it). Following Queen Nie Ren, he lived in seclusion in the countryside, washing clothes in winter (beautiful woman, think about her fingers), and doing farm work. He kept complaining in his heart that King Nie Ren didn't notice his wife's mentality and still enjoyed this kind of life. I don't understand this. You can live in seclusion, but how can you live in such poverty? Then one night he eloped with Po Jun. Po Jun gave Yan Ying to Jue Wu Shen in order to kill Po Lang with his unique skills. There is nothing better than this for a beauty to have a bad life, and it is impossible to tell who is who. King Nie, the acupuncture points were actually healed on the night of the elopement, but he did not dare to face him, turned his back, and cried alone. Nie Feng saw it and did not understand it at the time. Then, in order to become famous, he returned to the world and challenged Duan Shuai, but was snatched away by the fire unicorn. Their son fell into the river and was rescued by Xiong Ba. At that time, Xiongba was a force, but they were still more famous than Xue Yin Dao Huo Lin Sword. When he was a child, Nie Feng did not know the Six Aohan Art. What he later learned was not from his father, but from his ancestors. The Bingxin Jue that I have practiced since childhood is not the Six Aohan Jue, no, no. Suppressing Qilin's crazy blood is equivalent to a calming buff. Bu Jingyun doesn't need to be mentioned anymore. The stories about his childhood can be written in a long form. Then the background of the era: The unknown group destroyed most of the martial arts forces in the martial arts world, causing the martial arts in the Central Plains to collapse. The Emperor invaded and was blocked by Wuming's sword, so he had no choice but to retreat to Japan and confront Jue Wushen. At that time, Jue Wushen was considered the number one force in Japan. The weakness of Jianghu is also a factor in the rapid rise of hegemonic forces.

There is also a martial arts fanatic who does not rely on martial arts, pure martial arts, and pure martial arts, but relies on drugs, unicorn blood and other external substances to improve. When fighting Nanlin Swordshead, he does not rely on his own martial arts and relies on crazy blood to win, or is it martial arts? You are insulting the word Wu. You do not believe in your own Wu or yourself. Still a martial artist? Stop insulting martial arts idiots. Let me tell you a martial arts idiot, go search it out! Nangong Hen, the black and white man. He used a common martial art and moves to become the best in the world. He never relied on external things to improve himself, because it was an insult to his martial arts. He had seen martial arts techniques, strange powers, demons and monsters, martial arts that brought the dead back to life, martial arts that transformed other people's thoughts, and similar instruments. A pair of fists and kicks, a master's degree of martial arts, a body of martial courage, and a belief and belief in his own martial arts. He has lost and won to become the best in the world in both human and demonic realms. Wu Chi, you are still a Wu Chi.

You can be a martial arts fanatic, but that will not cut off love. Feng Yuxiu also has a lover, Ximen Chuixue also has one, and so does Gu Santong. It is not necessary that he is a martial arts fanatic and will not love. Just like a basketball paranoid like Jordan Kobe, he has a wife and children, and he says he doesn't love him. There is a big problem with this character!

Regarding the character design of King Nie Ren, although the "martial arts idiot" setting is indeed a bit biased, I don't think it is as bad as what was said in the comment area. The King Nie before the time travel was clearly similar to "Feng Yuxiu". He was obsessed with being the best in the world and obsessed with martial arts. He could indeed be called a martial arts fanatic. After time traveling, with the help of Mad Blood, Blood Bodhi, swordsmanship and martial arts, I have learned a lot, not rejecting anyone who comes, and so on. In my opinion, there is nothing wrong with this. Duan Shuai has already been defeated by Feilongqiu. When it is obvious that he cannot defeat him, how can he break the situation without relying on the power of crazy blood? Are you still thinking about using the fists of low-level martial artist Feng Yuxiu against high-level martial artist Danshuai? What's more, Crazy Blood is his own thing, why can't it be considered part of his strength? Let's talk about blood bodhi, fire unicorn essence, absorbing other people's internal energy, etc. Why can't these things that enhance strength be used? If others eat it, it's a chance, but if Wu Chi eats it, it's against his character? Martial arts idiots are not fools. Who would be willing to read this if they practice dryly and painfully? And the author has also clearly written that the idea that King Nie Ren is a "martial arts idiot" is simply nonsense. What King Nie Ren pursues is to climb to the top of the mountain and see all the mountains at a glance. He doesn't care at all whether he is a martial arts idiot or not, and he doesn't care whether he uses external force or not. All he wants is to be the best in the world! Finally, let me use the original words of King Nie: "Li Jinxiu, you want to ruin my state of mind with the term 'martial arts idiot', and you want to make me defeat myself... Huh, you made a wrong calculation!" The above is just a personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it, you are right. Finally, I would like to ask the author, is the pace a bit too fast now? It's only been a few chapters and I'm about to hit the ceiling of Fengyun's combat power. What should I write next? Should we go on to another world?

There is a big problem with the character design. You are a modern martial arts madman, a master of Chinese martial arts, you also like swords and you are the best in the world? Learn about criminal law! I thought it was a previous novel! People who don't practice martial arts dare to engage in weapons, and usually just use fists. It's better to become a weapons fan or a martial arts fan. Anyway, it's useless if you are invincible in fighting, so you still have to learn Feng Yun's martial arts! Second, being a martial artist and coveting the best in the world are very inconsistent! It's normal for you to want fame and wealth, but you also want to make the protagonist look like a martial arts fanatic who is heartless and has only the sword in his heart. But in fact, the protagonist is a social person who understands the pros and cons, makes good use of information gaps, loves fame and wealth, and is not a martial arts fanatic at all, okay? Compared with Wu Wuwei, there is really a big difference! This kind of person usually cannot be the best in the world. He is not confident in himself. After he runs out of information and reaches the bottleneck, he is finished! If you are a martial arts fanatic, you should upgrade again. Even if you integrate everything from King Nie Ren, your martial arts will be greatly reduced, and then you will gradually improve and develop your own style! Otherwise, it would be funny to combine the memory of a master and you, an ordinary person, completely unaffected, with no interest in other people's wives, no love for their sons, and nothing else, and then retain all the martial arts skills, not to mention that the difference between the martial arts idiot and my own practice is like a green tea bitch among bitches! In the end, the upgrade is like a robot, and the plot is like a side-scrolling game... But the biggest problem is still that sentence. The character design makes the whole novel full of contradictions. You may say that I am a modern person who does not take the blame of King Nie or thinks that my wife is a slut, but I only have a knife in my heart. Emmm~ It feels like Emperor Shitian keeps emphasizing that he is Wu Invincible... It's good for a martial artist to make great progress in martial arts when he encounters an opportunity, but it doesn't look good for a martial artist to actively seek evil ways, because that's not a martial artist, he is obviously Emperor Shitian. The scariest thing is this. I, Emperor Shitian, can't just be Emperor Shitian. I love my name. I want to be the best in the world! This feeling is very bad, let alone forcing someone to be a eunuch out of desire! Otherwise, you, a martial artist, will just be a sweeping monk and be the best in the world. I just want to know that I am invincible! So this character is really a failure!

In fact, it doesn't matter that he is a martial artist. The most disgusting thing is that he took over the body of King Nie Ren and didn't want to take responsibility. Yan Ying didn't say anything, but how could Nie Feng have done anything? He robbed someone's father and still ignored him?

Ruthless, meaningless, and irresponsible. These eight words completely describe the protagonist.

This book will definitely not do well. The character of the protagonist created by the author is too bad.

Martial Arts: The magical skills of a beautiful woman who can drink strong wine and roam freely in the world. You are a ruthless eunuch after traveling through time. Go and practice the Sunflower Manual as soon as possible, and you can transform into gods and humans without desires or desires, which is exactly what the author wants.

Too much water! There are too many character problems, too many unnecessary dialogues, and the protagonist has been semi-retired.

If your writing is poor, try not to play the martial arts route, as it will directly reduce your points again.

This protagonist's character design makes it difficult for most people to watch. . . . Martial arts fanatic? Ruthless? It should be added to the list of brainless! I'm speechless. . . I'm extremely embarrassed after reading less than three chapters. It's not because of the description, but because the character of the protagonist makes most people unable to read it. He's such a ruthless martial arts idiot. . What an embarrassing character. . .

The protagonist first fought against the God of Immortality and was trapped in space for sixteen years. Recently, he became invincible in martial arts and is still in a coma. What's amazing is that the protagonist has seen the Xuanwu True Kung Fu and Maha Wuliang, but the martial arts has been repeated over and over again, but it's just the Eight Colds and Six Techniques! The chapters about letting the Japanese devils go are also very encouraging!

When writing this kind of thing, I will directly arrange it in the Sunflower Manual. There is no desire or need to practice this skill. It is not appropriate to practice Sunflower to practice anything else when the main character is like this.

He keeps saying that in order to reach the top, Yan Ying should be killed. From then on, the sword will be his companion to conquer the world, and Nie Feng will be the chess piece to take the next step forward!

You are better than the Green Man King when you write Shuai

It's boring. The traditional martial arts background setting of the character design has already been broken in the first three chapters, and the swordsmanship is still rampant. . The foundation of Chinese martial arts is control. If you don't react to this, it will break. It's just mediocre.

Where is King Nie? Even if he's injured, he's still voluntarily discharging his kung fu. Can't his combat power be suppressed? Read another two chapters, forget about the main character yet

The situation is worse than writing about Wuming or Xiongba.

The plot is as expected, and the latest chapter will forcefully tease Xiongba.

To be fair, this book has a very small audience.

From chapter 75 to chapter 89, it's really good. If you can write clearly in chapter 3.4, You have to write 15 chapters all the way to the shelves.

It's pretty but too little! This coding speed... Still has to be left on the bookshelf to gather dust.

From now on, there will only be one Haonan in Causeway Bay, and that is me, Chen Haonan.

Many people came in and read the book and said that the author's character portrayal was not good, that he was a martial arts idiot and a man who looked like a eunuch, with no emotional line. But I want to ask, if you have traveled through time, can you seamlessly connect everything in your original body? Status! Love, family? There will always be some resentment in your heart that does not belong to you, so there is nothing wrong with not choosing, ignoring, and finding a martial arts outlet to vent it! Then when I read the second volume, I can see that the author wanted to change the pig's feet and become humane! It's pretty good, but updates are a bit slow! Come on author

Write quickly. Even the donkeys in the production team dare not be as procrastinating as you