Douluo Dalu: The System Binds to Qian Renxue from the Start

I don't deny that I'm making some speculation, but this is inevitable Why, because the world of Douluo has been fixed, the power system, character settings, and everything else have been fixed. It is easy to write fan fiction, but it is also a difficult problem to write a fan fiction. Especially when I only read the setting of Douluo Yi's story, there was very little I could write about. Among other things, someone told me that Chu Xinglian's martial spirit is the Tree of Life Spirit, which is far from the truth. The Tree of Life is the body of the goddess of life. What can I say? I can tell you that before you told me that the Tree of Life is the essence of the Goddess of Life, I didn't know there was such a setting. I was embarrassed—— The book that shocked me to become Bibi Dong was the first Douluo fanfic I wrote. When I wrote it, I basically broke away from other Douluo fanfics I had read, so every section seemed very novel. This is also the limit of what I can do under a limited framework. But when I finished writing the first Douluo fanfic, most of my ideas for the Douluo fanfic were used in the first book. When I wrote the second Douluo fanfic under the same world view, it was difficult for me to completely get rid of the first one and write the second one to complete new ideas, unless I watched Dou Er and then wrote Dou Er. This is the reason why I gave up on writing this book when Tang San had just ascended. It was because I had a paranoia at the beginning. I thought that no matter how I wrote this book, I felt like I was rewriting it and shocked me into becoming Bibi Dong. It was boring and without passion. In addition, it was the New Year and I had no desire to write it down, so I castrated myself! The second book was influenced by the first one, and it was also a failure of the first one. This is inevitable, but do you want to say that I have no creativity? I also have a group portrait writing method. A licking dog time traveler comes in and controls Xiao Wu and turns Tang San into Xiao Wu's licking dog. It must be interesting to write down, right? When I wrote the third book, I figured out a truth. It is inevitable to overthink things. However, what I can do is to try my best to innovate and bring some plots that are different from the first book. This is what I can do.

I just found out that this is the author's third novel. I clicked into it with great joy and then came out disappointed. The great heroine as always, the invincible system points exchange, and Dugu Yan's three consecutive sacrifices. The emotional author's accumulation was all used up in the first part, and every subsequent one that was rushed into production was temporarily released and in danger. When I was following Bibi Dong, I thought it was the best fanfic I had ever seen, and it was a good one because 1. The main female protagonist has no male protagonist, which is a breath of fresh air 2. The main characters are all characters in the play, but they just changed their positions and there is no sense of drama 3. Although it is an invincible system flow, it can control the plot step by step Chapter 4. Redeeming the mother and daughter instead of mindlessly conquering the world is a step ahead of others. The connection and transition of the 5 parts of the story are very good. The first divine test brought out the feelings for Qian Renxue and patched the plot to explain that Tang San cannot be killed by force. No fanfic I have read can reach a similar level. However, after watching the second part, I felt something was wrong. It seems that the success of the first part has consumed all the accumulation. The princess's goal is just to defeat the evil Tang San in her imagination (not the Tang San in the original Douluo). The most important thing is the third point above, which directly destroyed the balance between the two parties (I said it at the time). I didn't follow the subsequent books, but this book turned out to be a eunuch. Then in the third part, Dugu Yan sacrificed himself again. Everyone likes to complain about Tang San sacrificing his wife, but I don't quite understand the essential difference between the two now, and the image of Tang San in my mind is not that bad. I remember Xiao Wu playing with a 100,000-year-old Blue Silver Emperor bone in Xiao Wu's Rebirth Next Door. The book was very creative no matter what. However, it's hard to see similar ideas in your current books. Tang San was able to make a fool of himself because he had a golden rice bowl and could never starve to death. Author, you are far from reaching this level. We also have some suggestions that I hope you, the author, can take a look at: 1. The market for Douluo fanfics is already booming, and the anime's current reputation is not good either. The fan routines are so solidified that I don't think anyone can tell a Douluo Dalu fan story now. If you want to take advantage of the popularity, you might as well skip Dou 1 and start preparing from Dou 2 to catch the wind. I have an idea just for reference. You can let people in Du 2 use summon cards to summon characters from Du 1 to Du 2. Tell the story from the perspective of the summoned. 2. Author, you'd better accumulate more knowledge. Internet article writers are under pressure, but there is not much experience to learn from writing a bad one. You can change your ID when practicing, but we readers don't know. Write an outline and setting before writing a story. The second and third parts gave me the feeling that they were improvised, and then I had no motivation to pursue them. The biggest advantage of a well-known author is that he has a large base of readers and is highly tolerant of mistakes. Even if the beginning is not good, the reader's tolerance is high. But if you keep failing, sooner or later the ID will have to be reborn. 3. As an author, you must have confidence in yourself. If you don't have confidence, readers will have even less confidence. Every time difficulties are mentioned in the book, I am given jujube pills. I am definitely not the only one who feels this way. 4. Consider who your book is for. Close to their preferences. 5. This is my personal preference, just take a look at it. I don't like the system flow and the invincible flow too much, because they are convenient for the author and at the same time lower the upper limit of the work. There is essentially no difference between having an invincible system and Tang San having an unrelated biological grandfather. I don't create a new male protagonist but use the characters in the old template to make a heroine. I call this Qingliu and I hope you will continue to maintain it. Nowadays, male videos writing about feelings are really poisonous.

In fact, I want to keep this book. As we all know, Typos Douluo is a hoarding rat. But as we all know, he is also the internal manager, and he will die as soon as he is raised. º·(இωஇ)‧º·˚.

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I have always had an idea. Even Bibi Dong, Qian Renxue and Hu Liena, these three young men, can clear their name. Why can't Qian Xunji? There are also fans of the protagonist Chihiroji, but I haven't seen anything to read, and my doubts have never been answered? Doubt 1: What unconscionable thing did Qian Xunji do? It seems to be just a little dark all the time, strong x... Doubt 2: Bibi Dong seems to have only hatred for Qian Xunji. Although hatred can blind people, Qian Xunji seems to have always given Bibi Dong resources before. Judging from the only teacher-student relationship between Shrek and Canghui Academy, Douluo's teachers and students are more like those in ancient times That kind of situation, once a teacher is always a father, in this situation, even if he is locked up by the teacher, I think the biggest possibility is that he will become humble, and may even suffer from Stockholm syndrome. The most important thing is that the original book does not say why Qianxunji xx Bibi Dong. (Quietly) Doubt 3: Qian Xunji is the Pope, one person is inferior to ten thousand people, and the one above his head is his father. Will such a person be short of women? I have always said that Qian Xunji is lustful, but why does he only have one daughter, Qian Renxue? This feels very unreasonable. Doubt 4: Wolong Fengchu followed Qianxunji to kill Tang Hao. They should be Qianxunji's confidants, but why did they switch to Gebibidong as soon as Qianxunji died? (If they released the sea to Tang Hao and deliberately created opportunities for Bibi Dong, the life of the 99-level Qiandaoliu would have been in vain. Even if Bibi Dong was released later, the Crouching Dragon Phoenix chick would still die, so is it possible that Qian Xunji told something?) Doubt 5: Tang Ritian, the "youngest titled Douluo" known to have broken through in his forties, then who trained the enshrinement group, elder group, and so many titled Douluo in Wuhun Palace? (It can't be Bibi Dong, it should be Qian Daoliu and Qian Xunji. There should be no one older than Qian Daoliu in Wuhun Hall.) Doubt 6: The Douluo timeline is too messy and not straightened out. Let me tell you what I think. Picture 1 is hilarious. How did Qian Renxue fall in love with Tang San without knowing that it was Bibi Dong who killed Qian Xunji? He is the son of the enemy who killed his father. When he and Tang San met for the first time, he answered Tang San's doubts about his father as Xue Qinghe, so he knew it was him. As a daughter who kills her father's enemy, as a daughter, she must hate her father so much that she will ignore his father's hatred. Let's not talk about the ancients, let's talk about modern people. There are laws there, the murderer has been sentenced, and most of the family members of the victim still have the idea of ​​killing the other person, but this idea is easily suppressed by reason. This is modern times, but what about ancient times? Can the revenge of ten lifetimes be avenged? Summary: It's nothing. If you think about it, you won't be able to read any of the novels. We are just too busy to worry and have nothing to do. It's fun to read this picture. Can the author write a book without a harem, no cheating, and no time travel? The protagonist Qian Xunji's Douluo comes out. After all, there are no cheats. Qianxunji is the most beautiful Douluo boy! The most powerful force in the world, an invincible father, a disciple with twin martial arts souls, a daughter with a talent level of twenty, and a large number of loyal younger brothers. As long as Zhang does not cheat Tang San and kills Qian Xunji in advance, Tang San may not be able to do it better than Qian Xunji. , There is a lot of room for maneuver here, and the advantage is that if you don't know the plot, you don't have to worry about it in advance. You can focus on developing Wuhun Palace in the early stage, such as eliminating the Ning family and the Tang family first, and then giving Tang San some other opportunities You can write about a lot of characters who are already titled Douluo. The characters here don't have to have very powerful spirits. After all, they don't have titles until they are in their seventies or eighties. You can also write about the love and hatred with Bibi Dong, Qian Renxue's childhood, Qian Daoliu's emotional history. Many fans, Qian Daoliu, licked Bo Saixi. You can write something different. The old man in the comics is quite temperamental, and he became a dog licker... As if the same time and space, different world lines, what would have happened if Qian Xunji had not died? Public opinion will definitely not turn to Tang Hao's side, the Haotian Sect will become more obscene and shrink in power, Qibao Glazed Glass will not casually ruin the reputation of Wuhun Palace, Wuhun Palace will not rot internally, etc... (Anyway, the original work did not say how Qian Xunji handles business, anyway, I I feel that even if I am mediocre, I am many times better than Bibi Dong. After all, Bibi Dong went to destroy the Wuhun Palace and is famous for being a young man. Qian Xunji at least belongs to the Wuhun Palace and will not mess around. If he doesn't mess around, he can let outsiders mess with his family business?) (For reference only~)

There hasn't been an update in 5 days, and I feel like this book is going to be a eunuch. The second chapter is the same. We pay to read books to support you, not to see you eunuchs. Do you deserve us if you remain silent? Are you worthy of the book friends who support you? For those book friends who say they are in poor health, I don't know the author's physical condition, but it's not like he can't even send a leave request form, right? Or maybe post a post saying that you can't even do anything with your fingers? If the author's current physical condition is such that he can no longer move, wouldn't it be okay to tell the relatives who take care of him? Or is it too serious that you can't speak? I hope someone with knowledge can reveal the author's physical condition. If it is serious, I hope I can rush over to see the author for the last time.

Chapter 152, I'll update it when it's released, but I don't feel like I can get many recommendations based on my current results.

Good guy, today I looked through your works on a whim and found a new novel. Even your chief internal officer doesn't want to give you votes to support you.

Kuyiku, why is Xiaogang's gone? It's well written. I feel like many authors have copied the plot. They even copied the original character Jin Yue, the granddaughter of Jin Crocodile, without even changing her name. It's really outrageous. I'm too lazy to name him. He's the author of Level 5. He didn't even name anything of his own.

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