Grinding Everyday Skills into Immortality

I have written 140 chapters, but I don't feel that the protagonist has become more powerful. On the contrary, the more I get along, the more I fall back. It seems that I have just gained some skills, but in the end I have to turn into a paper man to cultivate my body. There are conflict points in the plot, but there is nothing exciting. The key is that I seem to have learned a lot, but when encountering problems, I still stick to the combination of hatchet + martial arts.

What is this plug-in doing? It's over if you just hang around. Find a safe area and don't run around. When the snowball starts rolling, you'll crush the situation.

The start is too difficult, and I don't even want the protagonist to survive! This author, alas!

Not bad, but the pressure from the front is too heavy for the protagonist, and there is almost no chance to breathe. On the whole, it's OK. The writing is good. Has it been cast internally? I hope the results will get better and better.

No big brother, your golden finger is obviously Gou Daoliu, and it is suitable for the style of the Shilipo Sword God. To put it bluntly, most or even 99% of the battle scenes must be crushing rounds to be enjoyable. Otherwise, why would the protagonist practice so many skills?

I just have to be patient if I get you, and I'll be invincible soon. If I'm running around, I won't do it. Is it because I don't have enough brains?

When you are not strong enough, please keep your head down and be a human being. At least don't play the same tricks as in Hedong and Hexi in thirty years. Even if you play this way in modern society, your leader will not give you little shoes to suppress you. I would like to trouble you, the author must start from the perspective of others when writing novels.

It was frustrating to read and I wrote more than 200 chapters. Still have to be a bastard

It's uncomfortable to watch. This kind of golden finger is either too good or too awesome. You feel like the protagonist may die at any time.

The writing and storyline are actually good, but it is too heavy and long. There are more than 40 chapters in a tomb exploration. I felt a little discouraged after reading it in one go. You asked me to follow it at the beginning. I read it every day, but I am still in the tomb after half a month. Are you planning to imitate the Japanese long-running comic strips? The Li family imprint is even longer. In fact, this is not a good idea, because once the plot is too long, the staged ending will make people feel that it is finally over, relieved, and stopped. The next plot is not known to be long, so don't read it now, keep it, and then read it after a while, but it is not easy to pick up what is left behind. Book writers and old bookworms all know that books will feed you to death. Of course these are my personal opinions. I really think the book is good, and I don't want to see the book collapse or the eunuch just say a few words.