Douluo: Protect Our Soul Hall

I read this book at the beginning because the title came in. It was really refreshing when it was not on the shelves, especially Bibi Dong, my favorite and most tragic character in the original work. Until I finished reading the latest chapter today, I have a few things to say to the author 1 Personally, I think fan fiction is just to make up for some of the original work's inaccuracies. The author is very good with Bibi Dong, but later on, I found that as long as there are famous supporting actresses, they can do a few chapters, which is a bit uncomfortable. 2 As a fantasy novel, fighting is indispensable. However, this novel does not write about it at all (those that look like playing with children are not included). It is full of daily words. The experience of the protagonist and supporting characters makes me tired, and there is no passion at all 3. The portrayal of the protagonist is really poor. Throughout the story, he is polite, but too polite, and imposes a silly and sweet character. When he meets various female characters, they are all serious and flirty, and they explain that they have been single for three lifetimes and do not understand 4 There are so many Douluo fandoms, it's just the disgusting hypocrisy of Gou San and Dashu (the author of Tang Xing is even more disgusting), but it's more than 400 chapters. The author said it slowly, but it's too much. It's all a combination of water. Tang San and Dashu have more appearances than a fire dancer. There's no sense of pleasure in sanctioning these two 4 It's over one million words now. Because I've followed the beginning, I just went to Shrek's gathering for the first soul hunting ring, and Gu Yuena appears in this book. So Ditian Those ferocious beasts and the two-and-three plot with Tian Meng Can, Snow Emperor and the like, are you planning to write 8 million words? Finally, first of all, I liked Bibi Dong. That's it for this book. I won't follow it anymore. I feel like falling asleep after reading 2 chapters.

Is the author planning to earn more than 5 million? This fanfic is too much, the first part is pretty good and the later part is all kinds of tricks. He flirts with girls and pretends to be young but doesn't get on base.

Qian Renxue

It's a good novel. It spends time at the beginning to make up for various loopholes in Sangou's original work. It's much better than the brainless Douluo fanfic at the beginning. The subsequent foreshadowing is also reasonable. The only shortcoming is that some of the narratives are too long. In summary, it's a Douluo fanfic worth reading with your brain.

Overall, it's okay. The author's plot and other aspects are well written, and the characters' emotions are well shaped, but it's a bit wordy. But it's not a big problem, unlike other fanfics that make me feel like I can't stand it anymore. The author is quite talented in writing novels. The first book was okay like this. I'm looking forward to the author's follow-up content. I am a student and usually don't have much money. But I will still let him read it. If I have book coins, I will support the author.

What the hell, that kid was promoted to level four in five hundred years, the protagonist was promoted to level five in one thousand and five thousand years, Tang San was promoted to one level in four hundred and fifty years, and the co-author was promoted to three levels in so many decades. It's too poisonous.

I still can't let it go. In my eyes, if I hate someone, then what I do should make the person I hate feel unsatisfactory. The more unsatisfactory he is, the happier I will be. But this book made me feel very contradictory. Does Bibi Dong hate Qiandaoliu? Hatred! Qian Daoliu made Bibi Dong the pope because it was for Bibi Dong's benefit? Pure fart! It was just because he didn't have a suitable candidate, and he said it was to compensate Bibi Dong... In fact, if there was another suitable person, he would never give his position to Bibi Dong. In his eyes, Wuhun Palace is the most important thing. If I were his enemy, I would definitely try to destroy the important things in his heart instead of taking care of Wuhun Palace according to his wishes. So I think this hatred is too impure. Carrying impure hatred is far more uncomfortable than pure hatred in my opinion, so I can only abandon this book... And never see it again!

Personally, I think it's quite good. Although some storylines are relatively long, it's acceptable and can be understood as being written in more detail. I don't want to say too much. I hope the author can write well and not be affected by some bad comments. Come on💪

I'm actually very confused. Most of the people who write about Douluo fandom now say how disgusting Tang San is, but the protagonists they write are no better. Very strange

Wife

The heroine doesn't need much. Bibi Dong, Hu Liena, Qian Renxue, Xiao Wu, Zhu Zhuqing, Zhu Zhuyun, Ning Rongrong, Dugu Yan, Meng Yiran, Huo Wu, Shui Bing'er, Shui Yue'er, Qiu Ruoshui, Bo Saixi, Bai Chenxiang, Liu Erlong, these dozen are enough, there are too many to write.

Dear Qian Renxue's smart fans, listen to my advice and stop being obsessed with Qian Renxue. Let me tell you what kind of person she is. Qian Renxue is not a good person. She is a standard villain, and she is also very stupid. She is self-centered and does not care about the people who sacrifice their lives for her. She exchanged the lives of Ju Gui Douluo and other subordinates who had chased Xiao Wu for Tang San to join the Spirit Hall. How could anyone with any conscience do such a thing? If she didn't succeed, it could only be said that Tang San's bottom line was higher than hers. If Tang San rejected her, how bad could she be? Even if Tang San agrees to join, can you believe it? Would he be worthy of his mother, wife and mother-in-law if he didn't take revenge? Can this be believed? And if she does this, it will make other people in Wuhun Palace feel cold and lose their hearts. How stupid can she be to do this?

Change the name of this book! Change it to My Happy Life with Liu Erlong. Damn, Liu Erlong alone has written a hundred of them. Why do you like the author Liu Erlong so much?

Hu Liena

Why no pictures?

My wife is so pretty

History Douluo version 2.0.

Streamline a million words. This would be a great book. The plot is too long-winded. A plot that can be written in one chapter is written in three chapters.

Chapter not found, Gu Yuena yyds

Now that I have decided to fake the corpse and come back, I hope I can finish it well. Don't come back just to finish the book.

Good guy, how come you die and live for a while?

No, come again? Eunuch again?

I hope the author can resume updating, please. This is one of the few Douluo fanfics I've seen that I find interesting. 😢

Although I just came back not long ago, the writing is okay, but the dialogue is still the same as before. The dialogue is too boring 😅. In chapter 840, although Yu Xiaogang is a hypocrite, he is really able to understand the thoughts of those two women. Is it that bad? It feels a bit inconsistent to directly ask Liu Erlong to seduce. Also, the women's thoughts and dialogues in it all feel the same. It's also what Liu Erlong scolded Yu Xiaogang in 840. It's so awkward to put it in 😅

There is a book about Douluo, the Good-for-nothing Master, Who Passed My Disciple Tang San and Conferred the Gods, which is very good . You can give it a try.

The author should come back and write, I really want to read it.

I hope the author can finish it. This is the best Douluo fanfic I have ever seen 😭

Now that the author is back, he doesn't ask for anything anymore. Just don't interrupt the updates and don't finish the work. He doesn't ask for how many updates a day, as long as he keeps updating

Speaking of the author, do you have any ideas to write about Sun Moon Continent? Later chapters. {"NickName":"Ancient City Seven Winds","UserId":382294881}